One Sentence Competition - Season 4 Episode 1

[Suchomimus]

CHALLENGE 9​

SEPTEMBER​

ARR!!! Avast, me mateys! In yon September month, landlubbers ‘n’ scallywags alike batten down the mizzenmast together in parlay. Aye, that be true, me hearties, ‘tis ye 19th, whar’n we jabber ‘n’ swagger on that stalwart holiday –​

TALK LIKE A PIRATE DAY​

ARR!!!​

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Thar be highfallutin’ piracy rides atwixt the Disney emp– [Cough! Cough!] Okay, I can’t keep that up! Anyway, Pirates of the Caribbean is maybe the greatest Disney Parks franchise. Many parks can call Pirates their best ride, from Anaheim to Paris to Shanghai. Then there’s Magic Kingdom. Their abridged Pirates was installed quickly to meet demand, which is a shame considering it basically killed Marc Davis’ proposed Western River Expedition. So let’s help the Kingdom out!​

-Challenge-​

Improve the presence of Pirates in Magic Kingdom. However you do that is entirely up to you. Change up the existing ride, add extra stuff around it, do something I haven’t implied, just bring me that horizon.​

-Bonus-​

If’n ye bein’ able t’ write yer proposal in a pirate-like way, an extra doubloon (point) for ye thar be! ARRGH!!!​

-Rules-​

You may use between 1 and 3 sentences and up to 1 image. Ye deadline be Monday, February 12th, at midnight EST.​

-Tips-​

K.I.S.S. – Keep it simple, scallywag. Try not to complicate or overthink things too much. It be a simple, casual competition – thar be no eliminations. Propose as ye please!​

-Judging Criteria-​

Be it creative?​

Be it (generally) realistic?​

Be it fittin’ thematically/visually?​

Can I understand your pirate talk?​

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Good luck everyone! If’n ye have questions, be not afraid to ask. Now off with ye!​

I be sensing rough seas ahead as landlubbers attempt to write like scurvy sea dogs. Argh!

 

[pixie_princess]

 

[spacemt354]

Yo Ho Yo Ho A Pirate's Kingdom For Me

Arg, ahoy maties, avast ye lookin' for pirates in the Magic Kingdom, yet there be other ways than a rum ravaged redo of me favorite ride, Pirates of the Caribbean, cause it'd make me no extra booty to expand ya scallywags when de ride be popular already among landlubbers, savvy?

Aye, an old salt like Disney have a treasure trove of pirate ideas, and they not have to be as dark n forebodin as de dead men tell no tales attraction, haven't ye had enough of that ol' hornswaggle Jack Sparra, for I reckon Disney has a popular kiddie show Jake and the Neverland Pirates, that could be a new smartphone adventure game in either Adventureland or de land da fantasy.

But hoist the mizzen, we aint done yet, as Tomorraland be gettin' a refurb soon and could use a D-ticket about space pirates' and Long John Silver's quest to reach Treasure Planet, and run a shot across the bow, as for the 65th anniversary of me ol' pal Peter Pan, we be openin' the Neverland Club 33 - a special laddie friendly club headquartered near Peter Pan's Flight, included in the park admission doubloons, that takes lads 13 n younger on a pirate quest throughout de Magic Kingdom, yo ho!

 

[D Hulk]

 

[Suchomimus]

CHALLENGE 9
SEPTEMBER​

ARR!!! Avast, me mateys! In yon September month, landlubbers ‘n’ scallywags alike batten down the mizzenmast together in parlay. Aye, that be true, me hearties, ‘tis ye 19th, whar’n we jabber ‘n’ swagger on that stalwart holiday –​

TALK LIKE A PIRATE DAY

ARR!!!

Thar be highfallutin’ piracy rides atwixt the Disney emp– [Cough! Cough!] Okay, I can’t keep that up! Anyway, Pirates of the Caribbean is maybe the greatest Disney Parks franchise. Many parks can call Pirates their best ride, from Anaheim to Paris to Shanghai. Then there’s Magic Kingdom. Their abridged Pirates was installed quickly to meet demand, which is a shame considering it basically killed Marc Davis’ proposed Western River Expedition. So let’s help the Kingdom out!​

-Challenge-
Improve the presence of Pirates in Magic Kingdom. However you do that is entirely up to you. Change up the existing ride, add extra stuff around it, do something I haven’t implied, just bring me that horizon.​

-Bonus-
If’n ye bein’ able t’ write yer proposal in a pirate-like way, an extra doubloon (point) for ye thar be! ARRGH!!!​

-Rules-
You may use between 1 and 3 sentences and up to 1 image. Ye deadline be Monday, February 12th, at midnight EST.​

-Tips-
K.I.S.S. – Keep it simple, scallywag. Try not to complicate or overthink things too much. It be a simple, casual competition – thar be no eliminations. Propose as ye please!​

-Judging Criteria-
Be it creative?
Be it (generally) realistic?
Be it fittin’ thematically/visually?
Can I understand your pirate talk?

Good luck everyone! If’n ye have questions, be not afraid to ask. Now off with ye!​

 

[TwilightZone]

CHALLENGE 9
SEPTEMBER​

ARR!!! Avast, me mateys! In yon September month, landlubbers ‘n’ scallywags alike batten down the mizzenmast together in parlay. Aye, that be true, me hearties, ‘tis ye 19th, whar’n we jabber ‘n’ swagger on that stalwart holiday –​

TALK LIKE A PIRATE DAY

ARR!!!

Thar be highfallutin’ piracy rides atwixt the Disney emp– [Cough! Cough!] Okay, I can’t keep that up! Anyway, Pirates of the Caribbean is maybe the greatest Disney Parks franchise. Many parks can call Pirates their best ride, from Anaheim to Paris to Shanghai. Then there’s Magic Kingdom. Their abridged Pirates was installed quickly to meet demand, which is a shame considering it basically killed Marc Davis’ proposed Western River Expedition. So let’s help the Kingdom out!​

-Challenge-
Improve the presence of Pirates in Magic Kingdom. However you do that is entirely up to you. Change up the existing ride, add extra stuff around it, do something I haven’t implied, just bring me that horizon.​

-Bonus-
If’n ye bein’ able t’ write yer proposal in a pirate-like way, an extra doubloon (point) for ye thar be! ARRGH!!!​

-Rules-
You may use between 1 and 3 sentences and up to 1 image. Ye deadline be Monday, February 12th, at midnight EST.​

-Tips-
K.I.S.S. – Keep it simple, scallywag. Try not to complicate or overthink things too much. It be a simple, casual competition – thar be no eliminations. Propose as ye please!​

-Judging Criteria-
Be it creative?
Be it (generally) realistic?
Be it fittin’ thematically/visually?
Can I understand your pirate talk?

Good luck everyone! If’n ye have questions, be not afraid to ask. Now off with ye!​

Ahoy, mateys and welcome to the new and improved potc! The show building shall be expanded to add new, high tech scenes! See mermaids, giant squids and more on yer voyage. Join capn' Jack as he fights pirates, creates sneaky hiding spots, and collects treasure across the sea! And what's this? Some familiar sights from a western river expedition repurposed and rethemed? Well shiver me timbers!

bonus: Arr

 

[spacemt354]

 

[DisneyForever]

Pirate Island

Shiver me timbers! Thee current Pirates of thee Caribbean at Disney's Magic Kingdom is one of thee only places ye see pirates at WDW, so that's why I be proposing a new mini-land about pirates, which will be known as Pirate Island. Now, it won't actually be an island, mate, but it be feeling like one; with a whole new galley that could just be pirate-known as thee Golden Doubloon, a whole new shop called Scurvy Scallywags, and a whole new ride, Bouncing Bards. Ye hear, this land ain't like no other, it's gonna have a light-up pathway, and special 'fects used throughout; ye finally gonna hear 'bout thee wee one's hunt, Mr. Smee's Can Ye Find 'Em Scavenger Hunt, which be inside Pirate Island. All wee ones be enjoyin' this new edition, with special prizes and sur-prizes around ev'ry corner, this hunt be thee best for ye wee ones. Ahoy! (Cough, cough)​

 

[spacemt354]

Arr, If anyone be needin' a list to help with the pirate phrases
http://www.pirateglossary.com/phrases/

 

[AceAstro]

Pirate's Liar

Magic Kingdom will finally get an expansion to Adventureland; a hideaway for Pirates like Jack Sparrow and the likes for all of their gold and it's finally open to regular guests.

Throughout the area, guests can find hidden treasure, pirate hideouts, sunken ships, lookout posts, a pirate-themed restaurant, a mermaid lagoon, and much more!

Also added to the land, a new C-Ticket flat ride using similar technology to Aquatopia where the ride vehicles are designed to be individual boats for guests to guide around.

Bouns:

Magic Kingdom will finally get an expansion t' Adventureland; a hideaway fer Pirates like Jack Sparrow 'n th' likes fer all o' thar gold 'n 'tis finally open t' scallywags.

Throughout th' area, guests can find hidden booty, pirate hideouts, sunken ships, Davy Jones' Locker, Crow's Nests, a pirate-themed galley, a mermaid lagoon, 'n much more!

Also added t' th' land, a new C-Ticket flat ride usin' similar technology t' Aquatopia where th' ride vehicles are designed t' be individual ships fer scallywags t' careen around.​

 

[AceAstro]

So I have Grammarly on my computer, and it really does not like Pirate speak. It was getting very mad

 

[Suchomimus]

Pirate Island

Shiver me timbers! Thee current Pirates of thee Caribbean at Disney's Magic Kingdom is one of thee only places ye see pirates at WDW, so that's why I be proposing a new mini-land about pirates, which will be known as Pirate Island. Now, it won't actually be an island, mate, but it be feeling like one; with a whole new galley that could just be pirate-known as thee Golden Doubloon, a whole new shop called Scurvy Scallywags, and a whole new ride, Bouncing Bards. Ye hear, this land ain't like no other, it's gonna have a light-up pathway, and special 'fects used throughout; ye finally gonna hear 'bout thee wee one's hunt, Mr. Smee's Can Ye Find 'Em Scavenger Hunt, which be inside Pirate Island. All wee ones be enjoyin' this new edition, with special prizes and sur-prizes around ev'ry corner, this hunt be thee best for ye wee ones. Ahoy! (Cough, cough)​

 

[kmbmw777]

The Pirates of the Baltic

The most brutal pirates in all of history were the Norse Vikings who plundered everywhere from England to Italy, hoping to die in combat and earn their place is Odin's famed hall for Warriors - Valhalla - which is why I propose that Pirates of the Caribbean’s tells a whole new story about these ‘pirates.’

The new Pirates story would focus on these beasts of destruction and their mythology; thus the ride would tell the story of a viking raid on an English castle, where our ship then transcends from Midgard (Earth) and adventures through the Nine Realms of Nordic Mythology.

At the end of the ride, we join Odin in his halls as he sings a new song - "Skål to Valiance" - where 'Skål' is the Norsephrase for 'Cheers!'

BONUS:
De mest brutale piratene i hele historien var de norske vikingene som plundret overalt fra England til Italia, og håpet å dø i kamp og tjene sin plass er Odins berømte hall for Warriors - Valhalla.
Den nye Pirates-historien vil fokusere på disse ødeleggelsesdyrene og deres mytologi; slik at turen skulle fortelle historien om et vikingevåpen på et engelsk slott, hvor vårt skip deretter overskrider Midgard (Earth) og eventyr gjennom de nordiske mytologienes ni verdener.
På slutten av turen kommer vi til Odin i hans haller mens han synger en ny sang - "Skol til Valiance" - der "Skol" er vikingetrykket for "Skål!"
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[Disneylover152]

Treasure Village/Mountain

Coming soon to the Magic Kingdom, Adventureland will be getting an all new sub-land, refurbishing the current Caribbean area into a Pirate’s trading town, hosting new facades to the buildings with new dining and shops in addition to the attractions in this area (Pirates of the Caribbean, Jack Sparrow Pirate Tutorial, and the Pirates Adventure Legend of the Seven Seas) into getting much needed major refurbishments.

The main draw to Treasure Village will be a new hybrid dark ride and roller coaster, where you join pirates on mine cars through treasure mountain to find treasure to sell in the nearby trading town.

With the refurbs of the current Pirate Attractions, and the addition of Disney’s 5th Mountain “Treasure Mountain”, another must do will be added to Adventureland for guests of all ages.



Bonus: Comin' soon t' th' Magic Kingdom, Adventureland will be gettin' an all new mini land, refurbishin' th' current Caribbean area into a Pirateâs tradin' town, hostin' new facades t' th' buildin's wit' new dinin' 'n shops in addition t' th' attractions in this area (Pirates o' th' Caribbean, Jack Sparrow Pirate Tutorial, 'n th' Pirates Adventure Legend o' th' Seven Seas) into gettin' much needed major refurbishments.

Th' main draw t' Treasure Village will be a new hybrid dark ride 'n roller coaster, where ye join pirates on mine cars through loot mountain t' find loot t' sell in th' nearby tradin' town.

Wit' th' refurbs o' th' current Pirate Attractions, 'n th' addition o' Disneyâs 5th Mountain âTreasure Mountainâ, another must do will be added t' Adventureland fer guests o' all ages.

 

[Pi on my Cake]

Caribbean Court Expansion

The area that be around Pirates of the Caribbean (Caribbean Court) will be expanded out t'wards the nearby port what goes by Splash Mountain to encompass the Pirates Adventure Legend of the Seven Seas (which ye can be sure will be updated and expanded) start/end dock with the same heavily themed, Pirate Town/Spanish Fort Aesthetic the current Caribbean Court be having.

A new ride which be going by Battle Boats: Calypso's Curse (two swinging Prate Ships that be on a large turn table housed in a projection dome that be immersing guests in the pirate ship battle around a whirlpool in a maelstrom from At World's End) will be added in the space behind the Pirates Adventure starting dock.

Ye bilge rats can be certain that Pirates of the Caribbean itself will be receiving some updates to help simplify and solidify the plot such as removing that scurvy sea dog Black Beard from the projection Waterfall (which be belonging to Davy Jones and Davy Jones alone) and reworking dialogue to make the plot that Barbossa's Crew be looking for a treasure hidden in the fort and Jack Sparrow just happens to also be there trying to steal the treasure right out from under Barbossa's nose, argh.​

 

[Pi on my Cake]

Caribbean Court Expansion

The area that be around Pirates of the Caribbean (Caribbean Court) will be expanded out t'wards the nearby port what goes by Splash Mountain to encompass the Pirates Adventure Legend of the Seven Seas (which ye can be sure will be updated and expanded) start/end dock with the same heavily themed, Pirate Town/Spanish Fort Aesthetic the current Caribbean Court be having.

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A new ride which be going by Battle Boats: Calypso's Curse (two swinging Prate Ships that be on a large turn table housed in a projection dome that be immersing guests in the pirate ship battle around a whirlpool in a maelstrom from At World's End) will be added in the space behind the Pirates Adventure starting dock.

Ye bilge rats can be certain that Pirates of the Caribbean itself will be receiving some updates to help simplify and solidify the plot such as removing that scurvy sea dog Black Beard from the projection Waterfall (which be belonging to Davy Jones and Davy Jones alone) and reworking dialogue to make the plot that Barbossa's Crew be looking for a treasure hidden in the fort and Jack Sparrow just happens to also be there trying to steal the treasure right out from under Barbossa's nose, argh.​

Sorry if my pirate speak is rusty. I only took one semester back in freshman year of college. I had to rely heavily on Google Translate for a few words.

 

[spacemt354]

The Marvel Cosmic Universe: Thor​

Ragnarok n Roller Coaster will be an E-Ticket re-skin of Rock n Roller Coaster

https://disneyparks.disney.go.com/blog/2018/02/d23j-japan-rock-n-roller-coaster/

Close enough....Kobe!

 

[D Hulk]

One more day for ye thar be, says I. ARR!

 

[pixie_princess]

A brand new juice stand be comin' to the pirates land, Caribbean Crush will be servin' up the most beautiful drinks a pirate has ever laid his eye on. Tropical drinks and hearty (root) beer be quenchin' the thirst of land lubbers and sea dogs like. Ye can also grab a bite with some gold doubloon macaroons.

 

[D Hulk]