flynnibus
Premium Member
what @Lee said.
also, please keep in mind when talking about "starbucks locations" that this is a joint press release that both disney and starbucks executives, their respective in-house PR teams, and any outside consultants they use, had to sign off on.
It's not a press release - it's a company blog post. Not the same as your traditional PR you push out through your media agency with ghost writers, rounds of approval, etc.
If the previous article's text got proofed by anyone I would be shocked given it was so poorly phrased. And why they had to update it after the fact.