Reviews Part 3
@Basketbuddy101
Pie is both out there and makes so much sense for Liberty Square. I really like the idea and additionally by tying it into a classic American fairytale with Johnny Appleseed, you've tied it to the subtle realistic fantasy that Liberty Square thrives on.
Creativity: 9/10 - As I said before, you've tied an American fairytale into the cart. I think this would be a 10/10 if it were a totally original backstory but as it is, you did such a good job at taking the Johnny Appleseed story and extending it to the cart for it to make sense.
Detail: 10/10 - I think you were just on the right side of the line of a perfect amount of detail and too much detail. The mockups and concept art were just absolutely killer. I genuinely hope you keep up with it here.
Realism: 9/10 - I think the only thing keeping this from a 10 for me was the location. I feel like the position of the cart right in front of the Riverboat Landing would create a really bad bottleneck.
Presentation: 9/10 - I think this presentation was simply perfect for a Google Slides presentation. The Liberty Belle-style narration made this for me.
Total: 37/40
@Outbound
First thing's first,
massive kudos for the website. You went above and beyond in a way that really showed how creative a simple project like this can be.
Creativity: 10/10 - The snack was smart, the cart was smart, the website was smart, everything about this: smart. I can only give you kudos.
Detail: 10/10 - The site reads like a satire of your typical Disney Parks fan blog: grammatical errors, weird ad placement (I was genuinely cackling at the Fozzie trailer), the works. Despite that, the detail on the actual cart and snack was really well integrated.
Realism: 8/10 - The only thing I could reasonably knock you down in points, the make-your-own-snack being just in a cart feels almost wrong. This plus the PUSH-type robots really could have anchored an entire new quick service, not just a snack stand.
Presentation: 10/10 - You went above and beyond here. I loved the shout outs to other projects like Mumbai Disneyland. This was a clear labor of love and the bar has been set for outstanding presentation.
Total: 38/40