Reviews Part 1
@Pufflefan
I like this. I really do. But I think that it needs a lot more. You were the first person to post but you really shouldn't have been. It needed a bit more time in the oven and the lack of detail on the cart itself is a big example of why that time to cook was needed.
Creativity: 7/10 - It feels like a logical and obvious choice in Paris and for a Beauty and the Beast-themed snack. Points for doing a black forest kind of flavor which feels... correct for lack of a better adjective.
Detail: 6/10 - I need a lot more on the cart. You went all-in on the snack to the cart's detriment.
Realism: 7/10 - I can see this being a Disneyland Paris snack. The Black Forest cake kind of flavor feels correct for this snack and the varieties feel like they'd be in there. Additional props for the alcoholic option since yes, that is something Disneyland Paris has.
Presentation: 7/10 - Some grammar errors that need to be fixed but it’s elevated by original art. Again with the color thing I’m 22 but I have the eyes of an old man and it took me time to figure out what that first picture was.
Total: 27/40
@NigelChanning09
Oh. My. God. This is such a huge step up from last week. You took our criticism from last week and ran with it, fixing your issues from last week and really honing in on a lot of things
Creativity: 7/10 - Muppet Mobile Labs is an awesome, really clever idea that fits the Muppets like a glove and I really love that you extended that theme here but... you extended a pre-existing Muppet theme. You added a bit to it, but it's still a pre-existing theme.
Detail: 8/10 - This is such an improvement from last week that I have to applaud you for it. There's only more room to grow from here.
Realism: 8/10 - The AA Beaker and smoke effects knocked this down a bit for me but overall, I think this would really work. I can see it right there in the Muppet Courtyard.
Presentation: 9/10 - Especially for the first try at a Google Doc, this is really great. Everything is formatted lovely and I appreciated the concept image.
Total: 32/40
@DashHaber
So much could have been done wrong here but you pulled it off with aplomb so I can only applaud you the project. The mix of cart and snack was so perfect here I really can't praise you enough for this.
Creativity: 10/10 - I love me a backstory and this one fits perfectly into Frontierland while also adding to the lore of the land as a whole.
Detail: 9/10 - Honestly, give me a general location for this cart and this would be an automatic 10.
Realism: 10/10 - I can see something like this happening from the cart to the snack.
Presentation: 8/10 - A simple, well-formatted forum post is all we need sometimes and you did it well. I'd like to see you try and expand
Total: 37/40
@ThatGuyFromFlorida
I found A LOT here to compare with DashHaber. You both did something similar by bringing in an interesting backstory to the stand and how it added to the land's lore. They both really flesh out their respective land in a small but very concrete way that doesn't necessarily tie the entire land together but really adds depth to it.
Creativity: 10/10 - Like I said for DashHaber, I love me a backstory and this one fits really well into Tomorrowland just like DashHaber fit their's into Frontierland.
Detail: 8/10 - I can nicely envision everything made for this project. I would have liked a bit of description on the stand about little details
Realism: 8/10 - Fits the land really well. I think the only thing that knocked this down a point or two was the number of snack stands already in Tomorrowland.
Presentation: 8/10 - Like I said before, a nicely formatted forum post is a nicely formatted forum post.
Total: 34/40
Everyone else will be up tomorrow/later today.