@Pufflefan this project feels a bit incomplete to tell you the truth, and is a good example of a pitfall you can get into writing something up too early. That being said I do like some stuff about it. Props for the artwork even if the formatting is a little out of whack because of the placement haha. I like the idea of the theme of Be Our Guest being transported into a single cart, but you don't really go into a ton of detail about how that's translated. The description of the rose treat was good, but I don't really think it's something with that broad of an appeal. I appreciate the enthusiasm but this project could have really used at least another paragraph or two to help flesh it out.
Creativity: 7/10
Realism: 9/10
Detail: 5/10
Presentation: 7/10 (would have been an 8 had it not been for the image placement)
Total: 28/40
@NigelChanning09 I can already tell you're going to be a big character in this cast. For as rushed as your first project was, some times it takes players a whole season to get to the level where your next project is at. It's very clear that you have a passion for Imagineering and want to do everything you can to improve, so I'm really excited for you to play in the proper game! As for the project itself, I'm not going to give it over the top creativity just because the concept is so similar to Muppet Mobile Labs, but every category in general is just greatly improved from your last outing. Lots of detail, really pleasing and well laid out presentation, a realistic concept with creative potential in the menu. I'm pleasantly shocked to see so much improvement from you so fast!
Creativity: 7/10
Realism: 9/10
Detail: 8/10
Presentation: 9/10
Total: 33/40
@DashHaber another big step up from your first project! I love how well thought out the backstory of this is. It's definitely a great example of the "Snackstory" of it all I was going for. I'm not a fan of pop rocks in the slightest and think the menu might need some work in that regard but that might just be my childhood trauma for the stuff showing. I very much get a Knott's vibe from the concept though, so that's where the project really shines. You definitely have a unique voice when it comes to backstories.
Creativity: 9/10
Realism: 8/10
Detail: 9/10
Presentation: 9/10
Total: 35/40
@ThatGuyFromFlorida again, what's with the Pop Rocks love haha. If pop rocks become the latest theme park fad food, I'm going to go crazy
That being said I do really like the idea of it being a Tomorrowland alien creation. For some reason I find that theme a bit more appropriate than the "dynamite in your mouth" idea haha. Again, I wish a non-pop rocks version of this snack were available because outside of that ick factor for me the snack does sound pretty fun to eat. We definitely could use some more detail on this though, especially when it comes to the actual stand. Is that Animal Crossing you used for the picture? Also I l definitely got a bit of a Spies in Disguise vibe from the backstory, so props for that haha.
Creativity: 8/10
Realism: 8/10
Detail: 6/10
Presentation: 8/10
Total: 30/40
@Pi on my Cake another fantastic project! While the food isn't something that would fit my pallet, I do see it very much appealing to the Epcot festival crowd in general. Out of all the menu items I've read so far this one might tow the best line between being creative and being realistic (and actually edible unlike the pop rocks
) Tailspin Baloo is also a really interesting choice to theme this around, but with all the hype around DuckTales creating a potential Disney Afternoon Cinematic Universe of sorts it's not as unfeasible as it would be pre-DuckTales. The website...I mean what can I say. It's such a fun read. The comment section is hilarious and a great amalgamation of the varied opinions of fan boards.
Creativity: 9/10
Realism: 9/10
Detail: 9/10
Presentation: 9/10
Total: 38/40
@orlando678- you're definitely proving yourself as a player to be reckoned with. I'm not going to go super high on creativity just because of the IP factor, but MAN the detail of the stand is just off the charts. So much backstory! I mean with the Haunted Chateaux I get it, but this is just freakish for a snack stand haha. As for the menu, it's fantastic! I'd say it's even better than Pi's offerings just because it toes the line between exotic and comfort food. The blue cheese bites might be my single most wanted menu item from this round of projects. With that being said I have to point out for other players that I encourage you to focus on one menu item. I'm not going to mark you down for this, but it really does feel more like a quick service menu than a snack menu. Incredibly clever with the backstory, and the menu itself is a good one, but out of the projects I've reviewed it goes the most outside the lines of the singular snack requirement.
Creativity: 8/10
Detail: 10/10
Realism: 9/10
Presentation: 9/10
Total: 38/40
) and of course the unique flavored popcorns everywhere!
