Okay here is the revised battle scene it will pick up from when the ship is raised to avoid the second cannon ball, then the captain brings out the front 4 cannons and fires each set of two cannons in tandum with each pari atagered from the other, but the pirates swivel back and forht to miss all four, now the pirates bring out two larger cannons and fire a smaller ball with the tow larger ones behind them in a tirangle, the captain tries tilt the ship in time but one of the larger balls hits the side of the ship (ship shakes slightly) then the captain fires back this time all four cannons are in tandum and the piartes titlt to the left to avoid one pair but get hit hard by the second pair, and large pyros go off. Then they retaliate by bringing out a really big cannon they fire and it is too big to doge and it hits the nose of your ship, pyros go off and your ship moves back several feet, your captain goes to unleash the other cannons but the lever is jammed and he can't get them unstuck, again the pirates fire the larger cannon and the ship is hit back furhter and an indentations is made on the front control pannel of the ship, tha captain si again sturgeling to get the other cannons out, the pirates fire the two smaller cannons and several ropes on each side fall off, then it will pick back up with the pirates laughing but only eight extra canons are unvield.
Is that better?