Once again, I would like to further clarify my reasoning for evaluating the book the way I did, so I am not lumped into the Your-Being-To-Harsh-It's-For-Kids category.
As a young adults book, it seemed adequate. I will post more when my wife, a 2nd grade teacher, would has more contact with this type of book, lets me know what I should think (because that's how marriage works).
I was critiquing the book for the standpoint that I perceive the members of this board have; namely, adult Walt Disney World fans who would pick up interesting books, fact or fiction, regarding Walt Disney World. Therefore, the purpose of my nitpicking was to inform this fan base of what I found interesting, be it positive or negative, in the book.
I understand completely that I am not the target audience and the target audience most likely will not notice any of the things that others and I have pointed out. The simple fact is, on this board, it would seem that other adults may notice these things as well.
I am not bothered by the backstage information that is revealed in the book, it just seemed out of place. To me, it is somewhat of the equivalent of Harry Potter whipping out a calculator in potion class. Did it take away from the story? Not really. Was it odd? Yes.
I agree completely, and have stated previously, that the intended age group for this book would not be surprised nor have any of the “magic” ruined by what is in the book.
I think most everyone agrees that it book is at least average, if not above average, for a youth book. I also believe that we are well within our right to point out inaccuracies. It is a fiction book, but it is set in a real place. Although there are several things that are fabricated, this should not give the author liberties (knowingly or unknowingly) to be inaccurate in his description of the physical surrounding (i.e. the Splash Mountain scene).
Perhaps we should speculate what is to come in the future volumes, and state what we did and did not like, as adults reading the book.