Describing Disney Attractions with Haiku

[Irrawaddy Erik]

testing a new car
no air bags for anyone
it breaks down daily

 

[ISTCrew20]

I ride in a car
Compiling sequence data
Is This Even Used?

 

[DisneyCP2000]

Originally posted by hmppan
testing a new car
no air bags for anyone
it breaks down daily

:lol: Great haikus!

Eleven countries
Eat, drink, shop around the world.
There's so much to do.

 

[Irrawaddy Erik]

Thanks

Hey everyone I desided to put these up on my site would anyone object to me posting everyones with credit?

 

[DisneyCP2000]

fine with me. :sohappy:

(I haven't written haikus since i was in elementry school! :lol: )

 

[Woody13]

Just delete the ones that are not haikus!

 

[Irrawaddy Erik]

Never forget that
it all started with a mouse.
said Walt E. Disney

 

[Nintendo18]

"Hey everyone I desided to put these up on my site would anyone object to me posting everyones with credit?"

I have no problem with that decision.

 

[durhay]

Stand clear of the doors
You hear a phrase in Spanish
What is he saying?

 

[WDWFREAK53]

Share a Dream Come True
One Hundred Years of Magic
Happy Birthday Walt

 

[Don L Duck]

Originally posted by Woody13
Just delete the ones that are not haikus!

And which ones would they be?

 

[agdbeanie]

Ode to Closed Down Rides:
Twenty K, If You Had Wings,
Skyway, Horizons.

 

[DisneyCP2000]

Nothing but black space.
Dips, turns and screams all in the dark.
This is Space Mountain.

 

[Irrawaddy Erik]

Haiku for CDS

Now, where is my break?
The roation is not here.
My bump off is late.

 

[meeko_33785]

Little Cinder Girl
The Fantasyland Castle
Is now her new home

Why wait in a line?
Get a time to come back at
Fastpass sure does work

A show started here
Then one went on to Broadway
Beauty and the Beast

It's like Africa
But it is in Orlando
The Resort's new Lodge

 

[Irrawaddy Erik]

Through the big toaster
Ding! Please stand clear of the doors.
Welcome young and old.

 

[TTA Traveler]

A rockin' limo
Aerosmith plays some rad tunes
Through three inversions

I am a rock star
Walking through G-Force Records
Oh look, Aerosmith!



:brick: those took me three hours to think of

 

[Woody13]

Originally posted by Don L Duck
And which ones would they be?

Hi Don L Duck! While I think it is acceptable to suspend some of the stricter rules for proper Haiku (such as a "kigo" and the technique known as cutting), the basic meterical pattern of 17 syllables consisting respectively of 5, 7 and 5 syllables in three units should be adhered to as a minimum. Some of the verses do not meet this minimum requirement. Even the ones that are not proper Haiku are still good verse. There are some very talented people here!

 

[Wilt Dasney]

That's one big castle
But, geez, look at all the crowds
Let's go to AK

Man, that's good eatin'
You can't beat grub from Epcot
The meal costs HOW MUCH?!?

Let me out of here
This show is just too intense
Singing bears scare me

A long, fruitless quest
Twenty minutes have I searched
Where's the damn bathroom?

Six times I've heard it
The question on all our minds
"When's the 3 parade?"

Boat stuck ten minutes
Repeatedly I've heard it:
"It's a small, small world"

Dad, it's hot out here
I'm sick of all this walking
Can we go home now?

Our world's grand spaceship
With a powerful message:
Use AT&T

Fantasmic!'s over
Now to taste some true magic:
A 2-hour bus wait

 

[Nansafan]

Sprinkle Pixie Dust -
Flying on to Neverland -
Straight on 'til morning.



Back side of water -
Shrunkin' heads, natives dancing
Look - a pair-a docks