spacemt354's Reviews
Rocket Rods
I must say this was a bold choice for an attraction - mainly because it's only real 'bad' quality was that it was kind of underfunded and had maintenance issues that made it last for a short time and destroyed the Peoplemover track, rendering it uselessly abandoned.
It did get decent reviews when it was running so it was interesting to see how you would approach that, and as a whole I like it. With that backstory, you did a great job at selling the attraction through the satire.
The custom poster and emphasis on how 'timeless' Rocket Rods would be was an excellent strategy for conquering an extinct attraction where we already have the pre-conceived notion of the outcome.
The organization of having it be a Birnbaum article pre-opening and an LA times article post-opening was an incredible idea! I loved the thought, the execution though left me a bit confused, with the last minute inclusion of the Old Is New Campaign. It's a small nitpick, but I think it would have been organized better if you did the Birnbaum pre-opening article, then that opening day LA Times article, and then did a section for the Old is New Campaign to end it. Combining all of them together with the Old Is New photos in the beginning, then the pre-opening, then the post-opening with the description of the campaign, made it a bit disorganized as a whole, even for a shorter project. That being said, the Harold image was hilarious and the zainy Andretti display also made me 'lol'
Another tip though which seems to be a running trend on this team still, you guys have to communicate more with each other. I try to watch over the thread as much as possible, and people ask for feedback and get little to no responses. It's laid back challenges yes, but that doesn't mean you just sit back. It takes a minute or two to give a brief response, maybe that response would have helped organize the project better who knows?
Despite that, I was very pleased to see the further leadership contributions of both Magic Feather and Poe Dameron spearheading this project for the team in the short about of time! Nice work Team Castle!
A Bug's Death
I believe this best represents my reaction
Okay for the ridiculousness of the title, and general premise -- I am so totally sold
Though a nitpick, actually similar to Team Castle, the organization slipped on this one, you really should have put your (realism) reason to start the project -- throughout 95% of the project I think it's just a gag that would never happen, but then I read the last line about Monsters After DARK and realize that...for the 50s horror theme of the posters and nuttiness of the custom shirts, this could happen, given those special Halloween events.
Aside from that - the way that this was written was another selling point, the comedy mashed with the custom t-shirts and even an instagram account, and commercial even though I said it wasn't necessary, was way above and beyond creative, and yes, that was what this challenge encouraged. A creative ad campaign about a bad attraction, and this nailed it - despite AP Exams upon exams, upon 13 hours days, upon other things, the core four folks who worked on this came together nicely - great work Team Brava!