Chet Dakota
Well-Known Member
I like the “Force effect”, although the room should shake a little more with the sound being louder. Maybe they came up with this effect, thought it was really cool, and had no other way to use it without Kylo appearing. But, I agree that this room should be just Hux addressing guests with the threat of Kylo on the way. It seems awkward and out of place that they are needed on the bridge just after coming in. When you see them again, there is no mention of why they were needed. Hux is talking about the prisoners escaping and Kylo warns about raising teh shields, while Hux is clueless.Additionally, certain story beats were just off. Kylo Ren’s reveal in the interrogation room was premature. He is this attraction’s yeti. He walks in and uses the force briefly before “being needed on the bridge.” A more elegant and ominous way of handling that same scene would be to say something to the effect of “Kylo Ren will be down shortly.” Then being left in the dark right before being rescued. Our first sighting of Kylo should have been more impactful.
in the detention cell, maybe Hux should say something about scanners are picking up some unusual readings or activity and they are needed on the bridge...or scanners are showing that perpetrators have boarded the ship. Something to explain the urgency of their leaving us alone.
There is nothing to indicate the potential for rescue except Poe saying that he would be back for us. I get that, except then, all of a sudden Resistance fighters dressed in Batuu outfits are on the Star Destroyer with you To rescue you. How did they get there undisguised? Maybe they should be in Stormtrooper outfits like Finn (and Luke and Han, for that matter), or at least FO outfits (like Finn, Rose and DJ).
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