Team Citra
This was a really solid idea executed in, I'm going to be honest with you here...a somewhat disjointed way. I very much agree with Nate in terms of the presentations. Slides were NOT the way to go with this one. I think either a simple forum post or even an interactive map would have helped visualize things a lot more. That being said, the concept of a dueling Tom and Jerry dark ride is perhaps the most original of the three presented, and you do great things with it. I do have a bit of a nitpick with how some of the sets are repetitive, but that's the nature of the beast with Tom and Jerry. You took rather bland suburban setpieces and punched them up with all kinds of slapstick hijinks, much like the show itself. A more interactive presentation would have sent this great concept over the edge.
Creativity: 9/10 - I wouldn't have instantly thought of Tom and Jerry, but they are iconic and I'm a sucker for alternate timelines. The MGM Studios stuff was some of my favorite bits in the project and an inspired choice of location.
Realism: 8/10 - I had a bit of a difficult time visualizing the scale of the gags between the two different perspectives, and that will reflect on your detail score as well. Other than that nitpick both components of the project are very solid.
Detail: 8/10 - See realism
Presentation: 7/10 - A rather compelling argument that sometimes going beyond a forum post or doc can actually hurt your overall presentation. Switching between the slides definitely was a roadblock in reading this.
Group Work: 8/10 - Solid contributions all around
Total: 40/50
Team Orbis
After two rounds, Team Orbis has very much come out as the powerhouse team to beat. Animaniacs has been used before in this game, but it's so far back that I'm sure no one on the team even knew it. The level of realism DEFINITELY strides the line between D and E the most out of the three, so that will come into account. Overall I think you pulled off a high D ala Runaway Railway, but the line is THIN from going into E territory, haha. Overall the parodies were wonderful and the flow was excellent. I loved all the celebrity cameos and breaking off into the different films for the middle section was my absolute favorite part for re-ridability. The presentation wasn't perfect but goes to show that Durango's Minecraft project was indeed a #GameChanger and has set a new standard for presentation this season. Overall it's pretty easy to guess that this team will come out with their second victory, but we'll have to wait for scores from
@mickeyfan5534 and
@Tux to make absolutely sure.
Creativity: 9/10 - Wonderful use of a popular IP. The franchises used for the parodies were tried but very true to the source
Detail: 10/10 - Hit every bit perfectly. Not too short, not too drawn out. EASILY the best explanation of the technology out of the three.
Realism: 8/10 - If I were as good a writer as the people on this team, I'd come up with some sort of Animaniacs gag about skating on thin ice. Overall I think you achieved a high D ticket instead of an E ticket, but just barely.
Presentation: 9/10 - Alright, nitpick time! I KNOW Pi could have narrated this instead of having the scrolling text. The text also scrolls a bit too fast for my liking. Overall though, a very ambitious presentation style pulled off really well especially for the editing of the clips used to really give a feel for the IP being represented.
Group Work: 9/10 - Some members were more active than others, but overall a very strong showing and Animaniacs is a wonderful IP to easily get multiple people in on the joke writing.
Total: 45/50
Team Durango
Alright, time to get a bit harsh here. Out of all the projects this season, IP choice was probably the most important for this one in particular. I don't want to sound bitter that nobody went with Courage as a concept, but when I saw Yogi Bear being used it was a bit of a head-scratcher. Yogi Bear might be one of the biggest breakers of the Tony Baxter "sticks and rocks" philosophy of not designing dark rides based on IP that don't really have a memorable setting to work with. It feels to me like this team had a ton of ideas and wasn't really fully satisfied with Yogi when they ultimately landed on it. This led to a project that feels like it has far less of a spark than most anything we've seen in this season so far. A bad IP choice, a disjointed team infrastructure, and a solid if somewhat uninspired write-up were all points you guys have going against you. I want everyone on this team to take this experience and make a positive out of it. I know you all can do better than this.
It's BECAUSE I have faith in you guys that I'm making the executive call to have
@ThatGuyFromFlorida be the team leader this round. That Guy, you're one of the most active players this season and I truly do feel like being the team leader will give you a chance to come into your own. I have as much faith in you as your teammates do, but I'll be honest and say after saving you from elimination not stepping up to the plate when presented with the opportunity to shine isn't going to fly with me. This is tough love, baby. I'm doing this because I believe in you. You guys made my personal favorite project of the last round and one of the most #GameChanger worthy presentations of all time. I have no doubt you can blow my mind again.
Creativity: 7/10 - Most of the gags felt very rinse and repeat and it felt less like a dark ride and more like an elongated chase scene. Would have perhaps worked better as a simulator given the structure.
Realism: 9/10 - I'll give you this much. With two mediocre offerings being replaced by one solid dark ride it is a believable plot of land you've set aside for this.
Detail: 7/10 - Solid enough, but a lot of it just didn't feel like it had a drive behind it and I was left wondering how effects were pulled off often. As I said with creativity it felt more like a pitch for a Yogi Bear short than a dark ride write up.
Presentation: 8/10 - Nothing wrong with a Google doc and some solid reference photos and concept art
Group Work: 7/10 - By far the most active team, but also a good example of how page count in a brainstorming thread isn't always a good thing. I've already made my case on why
@ThatGuyFromFlorida in particular should take the lessons he learned from the social game this round and apply them in a positive way.
Total: 38/50