One Sentence Competition - Season 4 Episode 2

Which format of One Sentence Comp do you prefer?

  • The original format (prompts due at 11:59, prompts posted at midnight, reviews following day @ 6pm

    Votes: 1 7.7%
  • The current format (prompts due at 8:59, reviews posted @ 11pm, prompt at midnight

    Votes: 12 92.3%

  • Total voters
    13
  • Poll closed .

spacemt354

Chili's
Suggestion for the hosts when it comes to reviewing: @Disneylover152 @DisneyForever

It can be a lot of work to coordinate 10 projects (essentially 20 reviews) all at once after the project is due. A potential remedy could be if instead of waiting until everyone posts to write the reviews...write them as you go, if you have a spare 15 minutes one day or another.

Unlike other competitions...in the OSC people tend to post way in advance of the due date, so with everything spread out, it might be less hectic for you if a majority of the reviews are already written by the time the due date rolls around.

P.S. you can keep them in a PM between yourselves until after everything is submitted, and then release them all at once after the due date.
 

Disneylover152

Well-Known Member
Original Poster
Suggestion for the hosts when it comes to reviewing: @Disneylover152 @DisneyForever

It can be a lot of work to coordinate 10 projects (essentially 20 reviews) all at once after the project is due. A potential remedy could be if instead of waiting until everyone posts to write the reviews...write them as you go, if you have a spare 15 minutes one day or another.

Unlike other competitions...in the OSC people tend to post way in advance of the due date, so with everything spread out, it might be less hectic for you if a majority of the reviews are already written by the time the due date rolls around.

P.S. you can keep them in a PM between yourselves until after everything is submitted, and then release them all at once after the due date.

Yes! We have realized that the current way is not working out and we are brainstorming ways to make this competition better. We will take this idea into consideration.
 

DisneyFan18

Well-Known Member

Animation Courtyard

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We've been working on making Disney's California Adventure more timeless, more family friendly, and most importantly more Disney, and after the proven success of Pixar Pier and Superhero City, we've almost accomplished our objective, but there's one project that we've kept under the wraps, and today we're proud to present Animation Courtyard, a land where some of your favorite animated characters will come to life, and you'll be able to join them on extraordinary adventures; Hollywoodland will be closing in Spring 2021 for work to begin on Animation Courtyard, which is expected to open in Summer 2023, here's a special peak to the map.

At the entrance of the land, you'll be welcomed by everybody's favorite mouse, Mickey Mouse, whom you'll be able to join for dinner at the House of Mouse, where some of your favorite Disney Junior friends will pop up from time to time, or at Mickey & Minnie's Runway Railway, which is considered by fans to be one of the greatest and most unique attractions ever built at a Disney Theme Park!

As you continue to explore Animation Courtyard, you'll be quick to realize Monsters, Inc. Mike & Sully to the Rescue! has been replaced by Ralph Wrecks the Arcade, a one of a kind experience that will require you to help Ralph vanquish a Virus that threatens to ruin the Arcade, also a brand new Walt Disney's Animation Academy will be built next to the Hyperion theater, with it One Man's Dream will finally return to the Disneyland Resort, and finally, the Hyperion theater will receive a brand new show, Coco: Un Musical Poco Loco, which will include never heard before songs!

Bonus:
Joining Pixar Fest from April 13 to September 4, a Monsters University themed nighttime spectacular will be available for guests to enjoy at Pixar Pier; don't miss the Monsters Frat Party.

It's done, I hope you like it! It was harder than I expected, but that only made me enjoyed it more! :)

Sidenote: There's an actual map I designed where it says map, I know it's not perfect but I'm learning, @spacemt354 has been really helpful with that. :D
 

DisneyFan18

Well-Known Member

Animation Courtyard

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We've been working on making Disney's California Adventure more timeless, more family friendly, and most importantly more Disney, and after the proven success of Pixar Pier and Superhero City, we've almost accomplished our objective, but there's one project that we've kept under the wraps, and today we're proud to present Animation Courtyard, a land where some of your favorite animated characters will come to life, and you'll be able to join them on extraordinary adventures; Hollywoodland will be closing in Spring 2021 for work to begin on Animation Courtyard, which is expected to open in Summer 2023, here's a special peak to the map.

At the entrance of the land, you'll be welcomed by everybody's favorite mouse, Mickey Mouse, whom you'll be able to join for dinner at the House of Mouse, where some of your favorite Disney Junior friends will pop up from time to time, or at Mickey & Minnie's Runway Railway, which is considered by fans to be one of the greatest and most unique attractions ever built at a Disney Theme Park!

As you continue to explore Animation Courtyard, you'll be quick to realize that Monsters, Inc. Mike & Sully to the Rescue! has been replaced by Ralph Wrecks the Arcade, a high speed coaster that promises to be a one of a kind experience, this adventure will take guests through some of your favorite games, like Sugar Rush and Fix-It Felix Jr., as you help Ralph and Vanellope vanquish a Virus that threatens to destroy the Arcade.

Next up is the former Muppet*Vision 3D theater, which will be used to create a brand new Walt Disney's Animation Academy, where both the young and the not so young ones can learn to draw their favorite characters, discover the story behind their most-liked films, and be inspired by the man who started it all, as One Man's Dream will finally return to the Disneyland Resort, and be showcased within the building.

And finally, the Hyperion theater will receive a brand new show, Coco: Un Musical Poco Loco, which will retell the story of a young musician, whose family has banned music from their household, but when he makes a surprising revelation in Día de los Muertos, he embarks on a musical adventure that will change his life forever; this musical extravaganza will include never heard before songs!

Bonus:
Joining Pixar Fest from April 13 to September 4, a Monsters University themed nighttime spectacular will be available for guests to enjoy at Pixar Pier; don't miss the Monsters Frat Party.

I made a terrible mistake, and uploaded a previous version, one that I made before realizing that I could use 5 sentences, this is the final version, sorry...
 

spacemt354

Chili's
Since folks seem to be picking a theme for their projects, I will jump on that train with a theme of my own...One Sentence per project. No more no less - the true 'elevator pitch'!

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LA Toontown

With DCA gearing towards IPs such as Marvel and Pixar, and Mission: BREAKOUT's gaudy exterior looming over a 1930s Hollywood, the realistic facades are replaced with a new and improved 'Toontown', which will be moved from Disneyland to make room for more Fantasyland expansions, and redone with an E-Ticket version of Roger Rabbit's Cartoon Spin, Mickey and Minnie's Runaway Railway, and Mickey's PhilharMagic stage show replacing Frozen.
 

michmousefan

Well-Known Member
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The Great Magical Movie Ride

More than just a successor to the Great Movie Ride at Disney's Hollywood Studios, The Great Magical Movie Ride is a multi-sensory, tracked E-ticket that combines state-of-the-art ride tech with amazing coaster technology. What starts out as a tour of Tinseltown's greatest moments evolves into a thrill ride as riders are drawn into and become part of these classic sequences, as you ride along with Popeye Doyle in The French Connection, Poe Dameron in Star Wars, Frank Bullitt, Herbie the Love Bug, Mad Max in Fury Road, Aladdin and the Magic Carpet, and more. Housed in a massive show building with a replica of the Hollywood hills and the famous Hollywood sign serving as the weenie of this part of the park, this ride will be one of the most elaborate attractions ever developed by WDI as you really, finally, get to "Ride the Movies."
 

spacemt354

Chili's
Right after the deadline for the current challenge
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I think @mharrington might not have seen Challenge 2 posted the other day so here it is again.

Challenge 2
Disney California Adventure

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Imagineers! You have just completed your first visit to Disneyland. Now it’s time to visit its semi-ugly counterpart, Disney California Adventure. Here you can take a journey around the world, venture into Grizzly River Run, and become a movie star!

-Background Information-
If you didn’t know, Disney California Adventure opened in 2001, and was an immediate flop. It was unlike Disney to build a “hip” and “cool” park. There was no story to it, and the entrance was a big… postcard.

However, one land let you become a “moviestar”, and that was Hollywood Pictures Backlot. In the backlot, you could race from the airport and escape paparazzi to get to your debut movie premiere in Superstar Limo, learn how to draw your favorite Disney Characters, or dine inside your favorite soap-opera.

In 2007 with the announced $1.2 billion expansion project, the Hollywood Pictures Backlot was supposed to get a massive overhaul, bringing new attractions like Toy Story: The Musical, Mickey’s Philharmagic and more to this land. In addition, the Buena Vista Street facades were supposed to continue all the way down to Tower of Terror, bringing the Golden Age of Hollywood to the backlot.

Unfortunately, due to budget cuts, this idea was scrapped and the only Golden Age of Hollywood part is the Red Car Trolley.

Nowadays, this land is called Hollywoodland. It features many vacant buildings with nothing major going on in the land. It's the land most people who visit Disney California Adventure rarely step in.

-Challenge-
Since all the lands in Disney California Adventure got their makeover in 2012 or 2015, it’s time to give Hollywoodland its much needed makeover. We know that Paradise Pier is undoing their whole makeover, but that’s not the point :).

Since the lands are receiving upgrades, refurbish Hollywoodland and make a park jewel! Make it something people flock to go to. Add a ride… or two, and add restaurants and/or shops. Give new facades, knock some buildings down. Whatever! Reinvent this land while including the golden age of California represented.

-Bonus-
After Mad T Party closed, DCA has been lacking some nighttime entertainment. Sure there is World of Color and soon to be Paint the Night, but still something is missing. Add a nighttime experience like Mad T Party anywhere in DCA to be added for Pixar Fest. Breathe some life into this experience and bring the young adult crowd into DCA at night. Complete in one sentence and earn that extra point!

-Rules-
You may use between 1 and 5 sentences and up to 1 image. It’s an entire land you are going to need all the sentences you can get! The deadline is Wednesday, March 28, 2018 at 11:59pm EST. Critiques will come following.

-Please Note-
Critiques may not be posted immediately, since @disney forever and @Disneylover152 will be working on them together. We apologize for the inconvenience.

EDIT: Reviews should be up by 18 hours after the due date...

-Tips-
K.I.S.S. – Keep it simple, silly. Try not to complicate or overthink things too much. It’s a simple, casual competition – there are no eliminations. Propose as you please!

-Judging Criteria-
Creativity- Is it creative?
Detail- Do you make the most of your sentences allotted? Do I understand what your submission is about?
Realism- Is it (generally) realistic? Is it something Disney will/could build? Are there patents related to your submission?
Theme- Does it fit thematically? Does it fit visually?
Originality- Is it original?
Effort- Is effort shown?

-Reminders-
This prompt will be a points prompt. As a reminder, everyone who submits something as well as follows the rules will get 1 point. 3 awards are given for each challenge. The three awards are Bronze (+1 points), Silver (+2 points), and Gold (+3 points). Everyone who submits gets a point, but Bronze, Silver, and Gold winners get additional points.

Check the please note. Your reviews will not come in exactly after the due date.

Follow the rules, posted here!

Good luck everyone! If you have questions, don’t be afraid to ask. Now go imagineer!
 

mharrington

Well-Known Member
Here's my addition for Hollywoodland:

Replacing Disney Animation (and possibly part of the Playhouse Disney show area nearby) is a tour of sorts through "Great Moments In Disney Animation", with scenes from Disney movies here and there. The best way to describe it is like going through the Emporium displays, only bigger and more elaborate. Meanwhile, the Muppet-Vision 3D area is being replaced by a "Great Muppet Movie Ride", with Muppets applying their brand of mayhem to classic movies. And the Hyperion Theater will also play host to my idea for the Pinocchio stage show from my DCL concept.

BONUS: Buzz's Astro Blast is held nightly during Pixar Fest in Paradise Park, and it's really out of this world, with spinning spaceships, aliens and, of course, Buzz Lightyear, all set to intergalactic-sounding electronic music.
 

Disneylover152

Well-Known Member
Original Poster
Hey Howdy Hey!

As promised, @DisneyForever and I will be changing the competition a little for future improvement. This update will bring you reviews quicker, as well as make the competition more organized. We are continuing to work this plan to make it the best that it can be.

We do know that the updated plan will begin with Prompt #3.

To make way for this Competition Update, Prompt #2 (this current prompt) will be due 3 hours earlier. It is now due Wednesday, March 28, 2018 at 8:59PM EST.

If this is an issue for anyone, please let us know!

Thanks so much for allowing us to adjust,
@Disneylover152 and @DisneyForever
 

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