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As the first note of the fanfare music to the show begins, the area from the Castle all the way up Main Street starts to shine as twinkle lights set a Fantasy moode to the night. Over the intercoms comes the voice of the nairattor. As "When You Wish Upon A Star" plays, he beins the nairatton "Once upon a time, in a far away land, there was a magic kingdom. A place where wishes came true, where fantasies became realities, and with some faith, some trust, and a bit of pixie dust, any dream, no matter how great, can come true. This is that place, and may tonight truly be to you, a dream come true."During this the Castle begins to magically change colors and Tinker Bell makes her appearence in the Castle's highest turret and flies down over the crowd via a wire. As soon as she dissapears from site, a single firework explode in the air that looks like a star. The music segues into The Sill Song from "Snow White" as fireworks fireworks dance in the skies overhead to the music. As the last note plays, the sky explodes with blue fireworks and the Genie appears on the Castle. He says "The Genie of the lamp at your service. Got a wish? Well if you want it to come true, all you have to do is say..." and breaks eks out into the chorus of friend like me. While he performs, a number of heram girls and simitars dance around the Castle After they finish their dance with a big exlposion of fireworks, the music slows and Ariel appears on a rock next to the waterfall next to the Castle. She says "Some say dreams come true, but sometimes it seems dreams are too incredable to ever do that. Just look at me." She then starts to sing a selection of "Part of Your World" as fountains begin to rise from the moate. At the end of her song, the Evil Queen from "Snow White" steels Ariel's final line singing "Part of MY World" and, with an evil cackle appears in the Castle Tower with a puff of smoke. She proclaims "You want to see a dream come true, ehh? Well, welcome to MY dream!" With a wave of her hand, fireworks explode in the air and the lighting dark, spooky shades as terrible dancing gargoyals dance on the castle to the tune of "Night of Bald Mountain". The cackeling Ursula comes appears near the moute and proclaims "The seas are now mine to comands! To controll!" the seas as her own causing fountains of water rise from the moate. Next Gaston appears at the Castle and says that he must kill the Beast. The Beast appears and a battle ensues. Belle appears at the Castle Tower and screams for Gaston to stop. Gaston defeats the Beast and tells hims that the villains have won. The Evil Queen and Urusla reappear and laugh in victory. Belle cries "No, please, don't leave me. I love you". The villains scream "No!" and dissapear in puffs of smoke. The Castle begins to sparkle (thanks to fiber optics) and change colors back to its fantasy-like self as the "Transformation" music plays. Belle and her Prince, a human Ariel and Prince Eric, and Prince Ali and Jasmine appear on the balconies of the Castle at the high point of the music and wave to the crowd. Then, the Castle is filled with favorite characters as they dance to an original song a la Fantasmic. Fireworks fill the sky for the finale as the nairator finishes the story saying "And they lived Happily ever after", at which the castle goes dark and the lights come up on Main Street.
As the first note of the fanfare music to the show begins, the area from the Castle all the way up Main Street starts to shine as twinkle lights set a Fantasy moode to the night. Over the intercoms comes the voice of the nairattor. As "When You Wish Upon A Star" plays, he beins the nairatton "Once upon a time, in a far away land, there was a magic kingdom. A place where wishes came true, where fantasies became realities, and with some faith, some trust, and a bit of pixie dust, any dream, no matter how great, can come true. This is that place, and may tonight truly be to you, a dream come true."During this the Castle begins to magically change colors and Tinker Bell makes her appearence in the Castle's highest turret and flies down over the crowd via a wire. As soon as she dissapears from site, a single firework explode in the air that looks like a star. The music segues into The Sill Song from "Snow White" as fireworks fireworks dance in the skies overhead to the music. As the last note plays, the sky explodes with blue fireworks and the Genie appears on the Castle. He says "The Genie of the lamp at your service. Got a wish? Well if you want it to come true, all you have to do is say..." and breaks eks out into the chorus of friend like me. While he performs, a number of heram girls and simitars dance around the Castle After they finish their dance with a big exlposion of fireworks, the music slows and Ariel appears on a rock next to the waterfall next to the Castle. She says "Some say dreams come true, but sometimes it seems dreams are too incredable to ever do that. Just look at me." She then starts to sing a selection of "Part of Your World" as fountains begin to rise from the moate. At the end of her song, the Evil Queen from "Snow White" steels Ariel's final line singing "Part of MY World" and, with an evil cackle appears in the Castle Tower with a puff of smoke. She proclaims "You want to see a dream come true, ehh? Well, welcome to MY dream!" With a wave of her hand, fireworks explode in the air and the lighting dark, spooky shades as terrible dancing gargoyals dance on the castle to the tune of "Night of Bald Mountain". The cackeling Ursula comes appears near the moute and proclaims "The seas are now mine to comands! To controll!" the seas as her own causing fountains of water rise from the moate. Next Gaston appears at the Castle and says that he must kill the Beast. The Beast appears and a battle ensues. Belle appears at the Castle Tower and screams for Gaston to stop. Gaston defeats the Beast and tells hims that the villains have won. The Evil Queen and Urusla reappear and laugh in victory. Belle cries "No, please, don't leave me. I love you". The villains scream "No!" and dissapear in puffs of smoke. The Castle begins to sparkle (thanks to fiber optics) and change colors back to its fantasy-like self as the "Transformation" music plays. Belle and her Prince, a human Ariel and Prince Eric, and Prince Ali and Jasmine appear on the balconies of the Castle at the high point of the music and wave to the crowd. Then, the Castle is filled with favorite characters as they dance to an original song a la Fantasmic. Fireworks fill the sky for the finale as the nairator finishes the story saying "And they lived Happily ever after", at which the castle goes dark and the lights come up on Main Street.