ajrwdwgirl
Premium Member
No parentheses.
I would go with “the” vs “a” new couple, and something like …
“Join us to celebrate the new couple”, or just “Celebrate the new couple”.
“Celebration” doesn’t work for me, unless it’s “A Celebration for the new couple”; which is the weakest of the three phrasings IMO.
And finally … CONGRATULATIONS, you must be so proud!
I agree with your assessment of wordings. And congrats @SteveBrickNJ on the addition to your family!