The Sorcerer's Apprentice, Season 7: Fantasmic Journeys [CONCLUDED!]

tcool123

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I don’t think my father, the inventor of Toaster Strudel, will be very pleased with this.
I KNEW IVE SEEN UR FACE BEFORE

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ITS ALL OVER THEIR BOXES
 

SplashJacket

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NateD1226

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NateD1226's Stanza IV Reviews

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  • 49 pages in 4 days! Bravo!
  • Body Wars was an amazing choice as I can’t stand that ride. Watching POVs is just not fun
  • The Cast is so cute! I want merchandise now!!
  • The Pre-Show was lovely! I really liked the dialogue. The “hahas” aren’t the most professional form of writing laughter, but I think it works with the vibe of the project.
  • I really appreciate the Ride System history. It shows you put in great effort in the research process!
  • The map!! Oh my that is detailed! I absolutely loved staring at it lol
  • The maps before each of the scenes kind of bothered me since how pixelated it was. I think you should've taken separate screenshots to show the areas of each map.
  • However, as for the scenes themselves, they were amazing! It was charming and fun which I think really works well and is even better than Body Wars.
  • The technology used for the ride was awesome, but I think it could’ve been toned done just a bit as it seems a little overkill at times.
  • The Post-Show is nice! It brings a nice end to the ride.
  • The VTA is a very cool addition and really adds to the ride.
  • The Future section...I wish you hadn’t included it. I get that it was supposed to be a fun plus to the project , but it didn’t work for me.
  • Overall, this was an amazing ride! It had a fun story, tons of amazing art, and it was made with great teamwork! Amazing work Team Soul!

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  • Bold choice picking DisneyQuest! I was really excited to see what you guys would do with it.
  • I really like the inviting tone and the style of the doc. Really fits the fun vibe your work gave off
  • The maps were amazing! It really helped visualize where everything was even if not everything was labeled on the map
  • The Celebrate area was lovely! There was a good balance between dining and retail
  • The Play area is very fun and I think it is my favorite. Although it may not be the most realistic, all the IPs worked very well together
  • Explore is another great area. Plus it has an escape room which is one of my favorite things ever.
  • Discover is great! Another not super realistic land, but the concept is great.
  • Create has lots of concepts that I think are great, but they sort of clash with each other
  • I don’t mean to sound harsh, but you bit off more than you can chew. A lot of these are great concepts, but it’s not realistic and way too ambitious.
  • This concept would’ve worked a lot better with a week long prompt and not 4 days. However, you laid out a great concept that just needed some tweaking.
  • Overall, it was a solid entry that just needed more time and tweaking to it.

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  • First off, I was not expecting this attraction to be chosen, but I'm glad to see you did pick it
  • Beautiful site! The way everything is formatted is great!
  • I am really loving the original attraction section. I really appreciate the effort into showing the history behind the attraction and why it didn’t work. It was like a summarized Defunctland video!
  • The “Reimagining For The Better” section was nicely written. It went very in depth about all the flaws which was pretty cool to read.
  • The ride experience...wow! What an upgrade! You all really connected with this prompt and created something really amazing.
  • And the video! How amazing is that! Planet Coaster rides always blow me away.
  • I know there was some debate on whether doing a wooden coaster or not, but I think you guys made the right call!
  • I really appreciate the ride statistics. Really reels in some of the realism aspect
  • Awesome costumes! Something simple like this really adds to the project in a fun way
  • I’m not gonna lie, y’all worried me the first 2.5 days. There was no attraction chosen yet and there was a small period with no brainstorming. However, the last 1.5 days were amazing and you guys created something amazing! Great job!
 

SplashJacket

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I’m not gonna lie, y’all worried me the first 2.5 days. There was no attraction chosen yet and there was a small period with no brainstorming. However, the last 1.5 days were amazing and you guys created something amazing! Great job!
Honestly, I think we need to change Team Power to Team Crunch.

We always come together and get it done, but it's always at the last minute.

Here's our mascot:
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