IAmNotAHufflepuff
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So I have been tasked with turning the Twilight Zone Tower of Terror into just a Tower of Terror. Many people may think
this is a both ridiculous and hard challenge, but I can do this thing. This is my new and improved Tower of Terror.
PLOT:
So nothing Twilight Zone, huh? That's quite easy, since I've got the perfect new idea. My new tower is steampunk. That's
right, steampunk. Here's the plot:
In the 1970's when Disney World was a great success, the Imagineers thought of an idea to create a steampunk theme park
in Paris. However since plans became complicated, they just built a regular Magic Kingdom with a steampunk-style land.
Then it was an idea for Epcot, but they felt that Epcot had enough attractions. Then when MGM Studios opened up, they
built a tower to create ideas for the project. However after an "accident" the building was abandoned. They decided to
open it up anyway as a ride where guests could ride an elevator and view it's art, but it should have stayed closed...
STYLE AND QUEUE:
Well ovbiously the tower will be in a steampunk design. Gears and bars surround the building which is painted in bronze
and gold. Hanging wires spell out Tower of Terror on the building. On the outdoor queue, several steampunk inventions are
displayed like jetpacks, telescopes and a giant crashed zeppelin. Once the queue inside you can see portraits of concept
art for the project. Like the original attraction you watch a pre-show, but on a projector instead of a TV. They explain
that it was an idea for Paris and Epcot, blah blah blah. Then it would lead you into the only thing remaining from the
old tower, the boiler room. Soon you board your steampunk tour elevators.
RIDE EXPERIENCE:
Once you board your vehicle and the doors close, the lights go out. You hear what sounds like a body being crushed, and
guests assume someone working in another room had gotten killed. The vehicle makes it's first lift up.
The doors open to a steamy room. Pieces of copper and other materials used for steampunk technology are seen lying here.
At the back of the room are two golden animatronics. They have a basic human body structure, but clearly some sort of
golden robot (similar to Tom Morrow). They are also wearing jetpacks and goggles, similar to real steampunk clothing. Then
they start to speak with sinister robotic voices.
COPPERTRONIC 1: What are theeey?
COPPERTRONIC 2: They don't look like us, but they do look like huumansss.
COPPERTRONIC 1: I don't liike them. They don't look like there happpy. I tink we should destroy them.
COPPERTRONIC 2: Similar to what happened to us? Sounds good. Besides, I think they would make great robotsss....
The two animatronics then charge at the riders before the doors shut quickly. You can hear them pound on the door. The
elevator continues to the second floor. When the doors open up it reveals a zeppelin. Fixing up the machine is a steampunk
character and his buddy you may know from another old attraction. That's right: Figment and Dreamfinder. Figment notices
you with a shocked look.
DREAMFINDER: Figment, can you hand me the wre-
FIGMENT: Look pal, humans!
DREAMFINDER: Oh, hello there! I am the Dreamfinder! But you shouldn't be here, it's dangerous!
FIGMENT: Yeah, you see, we were brought here from our old home but then two guys got really hurt so we had to, um...
DREAMFINDER: Did you spot those mad robots? Probably not, but we need to get you out! What Figment is trying to say is
that we were supposed to be in this *coughs* attraction, but then two men had an accident and now control those fiends.
FIGMENT: But how do they get out??
DREAMFINDER: Your elevator should go up soon. If you survive the third floor, you will be able to escape. But there is a
bit of a ride the way down. Literally.
FIGMENT: But, but, tell him about the monster!
DREAMFINDER: Oh, wait, one more thing! Stay away from the- (his voice is cut off by door closing)
The lift up keeps going. The third floor is the 5th Dimension of this ride, where the elevator moves. But this time
instead of a Twilight Zone theme, it is a room filled with steampunk technology. It was originally supposed to power the
ride before it was abandoned. While moving through the room, several surprises come out like machines exploding and things
falling from the ceiling. You then enter a dark space as the doors close behind you. Then a couple glowing bulbs reveal an
steampunk AA Mickey Mouse. It is clearly malfunctioning and it's slightly decayed and rusted. By now guest should tell
that this is what killed those two men. The animatronic leans into the elevator before becoming overrun with electricity
and exploding into sparks. Now the drop sequence starts. It uses the same system as the other version, with a different
amount of drops. As the ride finishes off, you move back into the exit. Before the doors finally open, you pass a mini
model of what this park would've looked like. You then leave your elevator to a gift shop.
I hope this isn't awful. Probably is, but I'm not really used to reinventing rides.
Nice job for a first competition post! If there is one thing that I have an issue with is that a steampunk tower in the middle of a Hollywood themed boulevard doesn't make much sense thematically wise.
Speaking of which, nice new avatar!
I'm debating whether to post mine tonight or tomorrow... I might not have time today, but I really want to get it out of the way.