Episode 10 Immunity Challenge
Critiques
@Flippin'Flounder
Good project Flippin'! But... How in your right mind did you think that Tangled fits in Adventureland. Honestly, the theme just doesn't work AT ALL! While I agree that the park needs some good, high capacity Fantasyland-style dark rides, you just went about it in all the wrong ways. As for the ride... Very lazy. It's basically a re-telling of Tangled. Which I think could lend itself well to a dark ride that has more than 4 scenes. How do you think that 4 scenes (including one very short one) would be enough to tell the
whole story of Tangled. Especially without the space constraints that rides like Peter Pan face, being landlocked and sandwiched inside a shared show building with 2 other attractions. Plus, what would happen to the current tangled bathrooms? I'd say this would be a great addition near those bathrooms, but not in Adventureland and not in the way that you did it.
@DSquared
Great project DSquared! Honestly, you tapped into the under-utilitized Pirate market very well. With all of the catering to Princessess, the would be a VERY welcome addition to Magic Kingdom. However, I feel like your ride was a little
too similar to Pirates of the Caribbean. Plus, I feel with a Pirate themed mini land and Pirates of the Caribbean right next door, the themes would conflict just a little to much. Plus, I feel like you could have gone into TONS of more detail. I'd say this is your biggest weakness. Working on diving into your projects. The ideas are there, but your execution always falls short because of the lack of detail. Overall, good work!
@TheOriginalTiki
Ratatouille is probably one of the worst IPs possible for Adventureland.
But, I'm not really going to blame you for that, as it wasn't up to you. But, I like the idea of a rat colony. But: the whole "shared universe idea" makes me cringe to be honest. I honestly believe that it only works for some cased (i.e. Marvel). Sometimes, the IPs just conflict to much in both artistic styles and storytelling to be in the same universe. Maybe Disney Princesses can share a universe, but not ALL of Disney. But, I feel that you tried to incorporate Ratatouille to the least event as possible. Yes, you had the restaurant and the ride, but I feel like the land itself was an attempt to detach itself from Ratatouille. I think you played it safe. I would have liked to see you take a risk and just go with the Rat vacation area as a theme and branch the story/world of Ratatouille from there. Also, I really didn't understand the whole connection to Zootopia. Anyways, good project!
@Matt7187
Great project Matt! Now... I'd say you made a good choice in using Tarazan. It's one of Adventureland's most under-utilitized IPs, while fitting perfectly with the theme of Adventureland. My one concern: space. It seems you based the location of the "green area" on the park map. That can be EXTREMELY deceiving, however. Most times, this area that is supposed to be full of trees is actually essential backstage area and the space is much smaller than it seems. For example, the maps often show simply facades (i.e. the Crystal Palace on your map). However, the Crystal Palace show building actually extends far back. In addition, the Jungle Cruise boat storage building takes up a large piece of land as well. In the end, the piece of open land with nothing on it currently is actually only about a fifth of the size that you circled on the map. Plus, more detail would have been preferred.
@IDInstitute
Overall, fantastic project IDI! And wow! I'd say your presentation style was OUTSTANDING! The way you described the land informed me as to what it would include, but also kept me interested. It truly was a VERY unique way to present your land. My one concern is the name. Volcano Cove is VERY similar to Universal's new water park Volcano Bay. There was even one time in your presentation where you called your land Volcano Bay.
Plus, while it was a Pirates themed land, there was PLENTY of things that made this land different than POTC's theme.