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The Imagineer-- Project 4
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WDW Vacationer
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I want comments more than anything!!
comics101
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Yeah, That'd be nice too...:lol:
Hopefully Mater can get his computer to work soon...
Im sorry im sorry im sorry... I didnt do the comments b/c i had to go to a party last nite.. Im sorry 
BUT, I WILL DO THEM TODAY and HAVE THEM POSTED TONITE... I PROMISE...
I havent heard from any of the other judges so i dont know :shrug:
Once again sorry... My internet is still wacky so i have to do it intermitantly...
OVERALL-- All your projects were suprisingly good, im SOO GLAD you all got my message for the E-Ticket attraction... STORY STORY STORY
BUT, I WILL DO THEM TODAY and HAVE THEM POSTED TONITE... I PROMISE...
I havent heard from any of the other judges so i dont know :shrug:
Once again sorry... My internet is still wacky so i have to do it intermitantly...
OVERALL-- All your projects were suprisingly good, im SOO GLAD you all got my message for the E-Ticket attraction... STORY STORY STORY
WDW Vacationer
Active Member
I understand Mater. I'm just really anxious. I think I did really well and want to know.
I hope they are here tonight, but I understand if you do not.
I hope they are here tonight, but I understand if you do not.
I AM HERE WITH COMMENTS 
The part that you ALL have been waiting for
Before i comment, i must say I DONT HAVE A PROJECT FROM disneyman82 and _Scar.. FYI: If you both DONT turn in a project NEXT time (P5) YOU WILL BE ELIMINATED
NOw to the comments:
bamsk8er49- When first reading it i cant tell where exactly it will be taking place, but im guessing the Castle Stage, correct?? The one "problem" that i cant really see being able to see is a projection of Tinkerbell on the castle, since this is during the day it would be HARD to see her on the castle, why not just like on the little "rope" like in fireworks. You seem to be using projections A LOT and this is during the day, and to me it might be a problem becasue of the sun and such. The part with Captain Hook, seems forced, but is ok. The ONE thing for me, that seems random is Chernabog, why is he in Neverland... THat is really my only complaint, overall well done, i like the story, but it could have a bit more "extras" and some songs. ALso, could use some more characters, like even if just Wendy and John and Michael from Peter Pan.
comics101- I love the little summary before your "script" i also like the concept behind it I like how you have the "tv" come out of the stage, great showpiece. Even though you dont have a script , you do have a GREAT story and scene outline. The TOmorrowland scene seems a bit weird, becasue TL is more than just buzz, but it is ok. The pirates would be a bit forced, becasue for AdveL you wanted to PUT EVERYTHING in and it just wouldnt fit, i dont think, the JC part is good. Overall, it is good, i like it and was impressed, with a few MINOR tweaks i could definately see it in a Disney Theme Park, good job!
WDW Vacationer- I really LOVE LOVE LOVE the idea of the boats in the moat Im glad you did use them. THe theme of Pirates and Princesses at first i was a bit confused, but your story was good, with a few tweaks i could also see it happening in the parks... Good Job! Some parts seem a bit forced, but everyones is like that (sorry your comments are kinda short, i couldnt think of anything else to say) Good or bad!
Jasonflz- I want to commend you for being the ONLY one to use the Golden Horseshoe, and you made an original show at that. Great job! Im not sure whether or not i like the "mini" segments that are performed throughout the day.. FOr me its hard to say. I can see some good, but also some bad:shrug: But i liek the ideas, and how you basically ENHANCED the story of Frontierland, and you probably didnt even know it... Good job I like the songs they are funny
OVERALL COMMENTS: I was PLESANTLY suprised on how well your 4 shows came out Im glad, for me there were really little to NO negatives about any of these. Of course since this is most likjely your first show youve created from scratch i really do commend you and of course youd have SOME problems, but i didnt see that many... GREAT JOB AGAIN!! :sohappy:
Once again I DONT KNOW WHERE THE OTHER JUDGES ARE??? :shrug:
JUDGES IF YOU READ THIS PLEASE PM ME So i know you are still with me
PS I will post the next project within the next couple of hrs. Here is a "hint" a restaurant...
The part that you ALL have been waiting for Before i comment, i must say I DONT HAVE A PROJECT FROM disneyman82 and _Scar.. FYI: If you both DONT turn in a project NEXT time (P5) YOU WILL BE ELIMINATED
NOw to the comments:
bamsk8er49- When first reading it i cant tell where exactly it will be taking place, but im guessing the Castle Stage, correct?? The one "problem" that i cant really see being able to see is a projection of Tinkerbell on the castle, since this is during the day it would be HARD to see her on the castle, why not just like on the little "rope" like in fireworks. You seem to be using projections A LOT and this is during the day, and to me it might be a problem becasue of the sun and such. The part with Captain Hook, seems forced, but is ok. The ONE thing for me, that seems random is Chernabog, why is he in Neverland... THat is really my only complaint, overall well done, i like the story, but it could have a bit more "extras" and some songs. ALso, could use some more characters, like even if just Wendy and John and Michael from Peter Pan.
comics101- I love the little summary before your "script" i also like the concept behind it I like how you have the "tv" come out of the stage, great showpiece. Even though you dont have a script , you do have a GREAT story and scene outline. The TOmorrowland scene seems a bit weird, becasue TL is more than just buzz, but it is ok. The pirates would be a bit forced, becasue for AdveL you wanted to PUT EVERYTHING in and it just wouldnt fit, i dont think, the JC part is good. Overall, it is good, i like it and was impressed, with a few MINOR tweaks i could definately see it in a Disney Theme Park, good job!
WDW Vacationer- I really LOVE LOVE LOVE the idea of the boats in the moat
Im glad you did use them. THe theme of Pirates and Princesses at first i was a bit confused, but your story was good, with a few tweaks i could also see it happening in the parks... Good Job! Some parts seem a bit forced, but everyones is like that (sorry your comments are kinda short, i couldnt think of anything else to say) Good or bad!Jasonflz- I want to commend you for being the ONLY one to use the Golden Horseshoe, and you made an original show at that. Great job! Im not sure whether or not i like the "mini" segments that are performed throughout the day.. FOr me its hard to say. I can see some good, but also some bad:shrug: But i liek the ideas, and how you basically ENHANCED the story of Frontierland, and you probably didnt even know it... Good job
I like the songs they are funny OVERALL COMMENTS: I was PLESANTLY suprised on how well your 4 shows came out
Im glad, for me there were really little to NO negatives about any of these. Of course since this is most likjely your first show youve created from scratch i really do commend you and of course youd have SOME problems, but i didnt see that many... GREAT JOB AGAIN!! :sohappy:Once again I DONT KNOW WHERE THE OTHER JUDGES ARE??? :shrug:
JUDGES IF YOU READ THIS PLEASE PM ME
So i know you are still with me PS I will post the next project within the next couple of hrs. Here is a "hint" a restaurant...
WDW Vacationer
Active Member
Thanks Mater! Glad to hear you thought the story was good! The fact that it seemed awkward then made sense is good.
Disneyson 1
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Hey guys, here to give you all what you love the most... CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM! YAAAYYY! Although the scripts were a little "wonky" in terms of character-speak, they clearly showed that you understood story. Good work! So now that you guys have got story, you also have to think of practicality. Will a visiting family REALLY see this show? Does this fill the Disney Standard? And will it fit into the designated place? These are the things that all Imagineers have to consider.
From #1 to #4...
3 Cowboys, by Jasonflz - FANTASTIC! It fit the area, and it's fully possible for someone to eat there 3 times and never see a repeat. A great idea and the best script. Congrats!
The Wonderful World Of Disney - A great idea, yet the execution left a little to be desired. The T.V. couldn't possibly do what you want it to do, and it's unclear if a stage even of a big magnitude like the Tokyo stage could hold all of the equipment needed for the show. Also, it's a bit long for a 15 minute stage show. Still, it's a great idea and would be perfect for an anniversary. Still VERY good.
TIE:
Journey into Neverland & Pirates of the Magic Kingdom: Both of these seemed a little "fan story-esque".
Neverland: I had a hard time seeing Peter talking Mickey into going to Neverland like THAT, and the whole plot seemed forced. You'd NEVER be able to get Chernabog onstage, and everything was just... weird. Nobody would ever feel like they were going to Neverland with the limited effects/props/use of projections in the daytime/etc. It's just impossible to do that without being in an indoor environment. Generally, the story was O.K., but it doesn't fit in the castle.
Pirates: This one I LOVED the story concept and the boat idea, but... I don't think it'd work. You have the characters being portrayed in a pretty strange way, a way Disney would most likely not like. Cindy's an airhead and the Princess do nothing but stand back, PLUS the Beast and The Dwarfs attack? Weird. And since when was the Fairy Godmother a drill sergeant? Either way, the idea was fantastic and it could easily fit into the park.
So guys, let's try to work on practicality (REAL WAYS the magic can work) and keep up the story (story that fits into the area). Let's also remember Disney Details in the next challenge, little details that help tell the story of the area in a subtle way (i.e. the jewels in the concrete of Adventureland near Aladdin may not have an elaborate backstory, but you can tell that the merchants are maybe not that careful with their money, or maybe they don't need to be!)
So let's see what happens, I'm excited for the next round; we have some great contestants!
From #1 to #4...
3 Cowboys, by Jasonflz - FANTASTIC! It fit the area, and it's fully possible for someone to eat there 3 times and never see a repeat. A great idea and the best script. Congrats!
The Wonderful World Of Disney - A great idea, yet the execution left a little to be desired. The T.V. couldn't possibly do what you want it to do, and it's unclear if a stage even of a big magnitude like the Tokyo stage could hold all of the equipment needed for the show. Also, it's a bit long for a 15 minute stage show. Still, it's a great idea and would be perfect for an anniversary. Still VERY good.
TIE:
Journey into Neverland & Pirates of the Magic Kingdom: Both of these seemed a little "fan story-esque".
Neverland: I had a hard time seeing Peter talking Mickey into going to Neverland like THAT, and the whole plot seemed forced. You'd NEVER be able to get Chernabog onstage, and everything was just... weird. Nobody would ever feel like they were going to Neverland with the limited effects/props/use of projections in the daytime/etc. It's just impossible to do that without being in an indoor environment. Generally, the story was O.K., but it doesn't fit in the castle.
Pirates: This one I LOVED the story concept and the boat idea, but... I don't think it'd work. You have the characters being portrayed in a pretty strange way, a way Disney would most likely not like. Cindy's an airhead and the Princess do nothing but stand back, PLUS the Beast and The Dwarfs attack? Weird. And since when was the Fairy Godmother a drill sergeant? Either way, the idea was fantastic and it could easily fit into the park.
So guys, let's try to work on practicality (REAL WAYS the magic can work) and keep up the story (story that fits into the area). Let's also remember Disney Details in the next challenge, little details that help tell the story of the area in a subtle way (i.e. the jewels in the concrete of Adventureland near Aladdin may not have an elaborate backstory, but you can tell that the merchants are maybe not that careful with their money, or maybe they don't need to be!)
So let's see what happens, I'm excited for the next round; we have some great contestants!
WDW Vacationer
Active Member
Thanks Disneyson! It will help me in the other projects!
However I respectfully dissagree with the bad cahracter portrayal thing.
However I respectfully dissagree with the bad cahracter portrayal thing.
Disneyson 1
New Member
I mean, the characters were O.K, but I'm not sure they were at Disney-caliber. But I didn't really expect an amazing script from anyone in this competition, so it's O.K. Anyway, I've seen worse scripts in my school... ughh....
Disneyson 1
New Member
^Well of course YOU like my comments! But don't slack off, kay?
:lol: I won't.