Rewriting the DCEU

kmbmw777

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My least favorite thing about the DCEU mess is that people believe that Superhero Movies have to be funny

Nobody complained about The Dark Knight trilogy being dark, but then the MCU started making superhero movies with comedy, which helped the MCU make hit, after hit.

Lots of people have lost hope on the DCEU... but I still think that overtime, it can be as successful as the MCU.
I agree...while Guardians of the Galaxy Vol 2 was a good MCU film -- it's not my favorite mainly because re-watching it, the comedy got into a routine.

Almost the whole film was build-up, build-up, build-up...joke, then rinse and repeat. The emotional pan around shot of the whole team ends with slapstick comedy and Mantis getting hit in the head. There were some good one liners in there 'I'm Mary Poppins Y'all' but overall it just felt kinda recycled.

Though films like Thor: Ragnarok and Ant Man bring a unique sense of humor that doesn't rely as much on the standard joke build-ups, to me at least.

Going to see Black Panther soon, but I have read it's not really as funny, but is on track to be the top grossing February opening weekend of all time.
I completely agree. I don’t think they all need to be dark either. A balance between them. In my opinion, the MCU has that (though some of them like l Avengers age of ultron are overkill funny when they don’t need to be). However, civil war was arguably pretty heavy and the original iron man (the only good one, in my opinion) dealt with real world issues.

The current DCEU, in my opinion, is a bit too dark. Maybe that’ll be amended and it’s too early to see. But that’s why I have some much more heavy movies (Wonder Woman, Justice League, Batman TV) and some that are much more fun (Flash, Aquaman, The Newsroom, Titans). @Disney Lover Addie, I would love to hear your thoughts on what I have written out.

Also, I’m seeing black panther tomorrow. Yay! :D
 
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Disney Lover Addie

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I completely agree. I don’t think they all need to be dark either. A balance between them. In my opinion, the MCU has that (though some of them like l Avengers age of ultron are overkill funny when they don’t need to be). However, civil war was arguably pretty heavy and the original iron man (the only good one, in my opinion) dealt with real world issues.

The current DCEU, in my opinion, is a bit too dark. Maybe that’ll be amended and it’s too early to see. But that’s why I have some much more heavy movies (Wonder Woman, Justice League, Batman TV) and some that are much more fun (Flash, Aquaman, The Newsroom, Titans). @Disney Lover Addie, I would love to hear your thoughts on what I have written out.

Also, I’m seeing black panther tomorrow. Yay! :D

I agree once again! I love all of your stories by the way. Batman season 3 is one of my favorites! And the Newsroom!

I hope to see Black Panther tomorrow, if I can.

Great Thread!
 

Pi on my Cake

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My least favorite thing about the DCEU mess is that people believe that Superhero Movies have to be funny

Nobody complained about The Dark Knight trilogy being dark, but then the MCU started making superhero movies with comedy, which helped the MCU make hit, after hit.

Lots of people have lost hope on the DCEU... but I still think that overtime, it can be as successful as the MCU.
I don't think the problem is that the DC movies aren't funny like some people say. The problem is that they are unrelentingly serious. We don't need one liners, but if the characters don't smile of have light hearted moments they don't feel human. The Nolan films understood that and had moments where the seriousness let up. Even if just for a couple lines. Also, if you don't have light moments, the dark moments don't hit with full impact because the audience get fatigued. And they don't have other emotions in the film to compare it to.

Just compare how much more emotional the opening to Up (which blends very light humor with very dark drama) and how much more impactful that is to the death of one of the most beloved super heroes of all time in BvS.

The dark can't shine without some light.
 

Pi on my Cake

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I don't think the problem is that the DC movies aren't funny like some people say. The problem is that they are unrelentingly serious. We don't need one liners, but if the characters don't smile of have light hearted moments they don't feel human. The Nolan films understood that and had moments where the seriousness let up. Even if just for a couple lines. Also, if you don't have light moments, the dark moments don't hit with full impact because the audience get fatigued. And they don't have other emotions in the film to compare it to.

Just compare how much more emotional the opening to Up (which blends very light humor with very dark drama) and how much more impactful that is to the death of one of the most beloved super heroes of all time in BvS.

The dark can't shine without some light.
Which Blakc Panther does this fantastically. Being one of the most serious and heavy marvel movies, but with enough levity to make it feel real.

Black panther doesn't really crack any jokes. He doesn't quip. He is serious and grim much of the movie. But with enough light, fun elements that he still feels human. Especially his interactions with his sister.
 

Pi on my Cake

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Which Blakc Panther does this fantastically. Being one of the most serious and heavy marvel movies, but with enough levity to make it feel real.

Black panther doesn't really crack any jokes. He doesn't quip. He is serious and grim much of the movie. But with enough light, fun elements that he still feels human. Especially his interactions with his sister.
I actually did a 3.14 minute review on my YouTube channel if anyone here is interested while we wait for the next fantastic part of kmbmw's project.

 

kmbmw777

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I don't think the problem is that the DC movies aren't funny like some people say. The problem is that they are unrelentingly serious. We don't need one liners, but if the characters don't smile of have light hearted moments they don't feel human. The Nolan films understood that and had moments where the seriousness let up. Even if just for a couple lines. Also, if you don't have light moments, the dark moments don't hit with full impact because the audience get fatigued. And they don't have other emotions in the film to compare it to.

Just compare how much more emotional the opening to Up (which blends very light humor with very dark drama) and how much more impactful that is to the death of one of the most beloved super heroes of all time in BvS.

The dark can't shine without some light.
Which Blakc Panther does this fantastically. Being one of the most serious and heavy marvel movies, but with enough levity to make it feel real.

Black panther doesn't really crack any jokes. He doesn't quip. He is serious and grim much of the movie. But with enough light, fun elements that he still feels human. Especially his interactions with his sister.
I agree completely. While I love my Guardians of the Galaxy and their endless source of fun, some movies should be different. Black Panther accomplished this perfectly
“What are thoooosse!?” Yet still dealing with complex, real-world issues
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I honestly can’t remember any of the lighter moments in the Nolan films! Maybe that’s a sign that I need to rewatch them! ;)
I actually did a 3.14 minute review on my YouTube channel if anyone here is interested while we wait for the next fantastic part of kmbmw's project.


I’ll have to watch this when I get a chance!
 

Disney Lover Addie

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I don't think the problem is that the DC movies aren't funny like some people say. The problem is that they are unrelentingly serious. We don't need one liners, but if the characters don't smile of have light hearted moments they don't feel human. The Nolan films understood that and had moments where the seriousness let up. Even if just for a couple lines. Also, if you don't have light moments, the dark moments don't hit with full impact because the audience get fatigued. And they don't have other emotions in the film to compare it to.

Just compare how much more emotional the opening to Up (which blends very light humor with very dark drama) and how much more impactful that is to the death of one of the most beloved super heroes of all time in BvS.

The dark can't shine without some light.

Well said!

Yeah when Superman dies, it’s very rushed.
 

kmbmw777

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PHASE ONE REFLECTIONS
Batman Season One - Overall, I enjoyed rereading this season. I though the pacing was good, and the stories were great. All of the villains - Harvey Dent, the Joker, and Derek Powers were strong, and each brought a different aspect to the show. I thought Harvey and the Joker both posed moral conflicts to Bruce, which made them so much better. Derek was a bit weak, but he was more of a training villain for Batman.
Batman Season Two - In my opinion this was the weakest season of the show. Mr. Freeze wasn't all that intimidating, nor did he pose a moral conflict to Batman. Robin's 'betrayal' felt too underplayed.

Batman Season Three - This season was my favorite because the Penguin was both an intimidating villain - he knows Bruce's name! How can we beat him? - and posed a significant moral conflict - how far should the hero go to save the day. Batman severed his ties with ARGUS and essentially became no better than a criminal to stop the Penguin. Also, the Penguin wasn't necessarily a 'bad guy.' He gave Bruce closure on the death of his parents, and his sole goal was to remake Gotham's criminal underworld with his own vision - where no innocent people get hurt. The whole conflict between 'means' and 'ends' is really emphasized here. Also, I loved the way that the team beat him.
Batman Season Four - Bane was pretty cool, I think. His relation with the Joker was intense, and his betrayal of the Joker was fun. He almost posed a moral conflicts to Bruce, but it was the same as Harvey Dent's. He was just intimidating. However, the supporting cast made up for this, I hope. Nick Hamilton's arc as the Guardian and Batman gave his character more depth. We got to see the early days of the Titans, learn about the league, and see Batman fight Superman for the first time. Again, great finale, I think.

The Newsroom - No Comments, really.

Titans - Overall, not much has happened so far, except for the assembly of the team. I am proud of how I took one of the lamest villains in DC, and made him into someone not as lame (though definitely not an interesting villain.) This whole arc in the show has just been about the team and not any of the villains, yet. Also, I don't expect this show to incorporate any of the major themes/lessons/moral conflicts. It's just supposed to be fun action.

Superman - This movie was basically Snyder's Man of Steel, Overall, I thought it was a decent origin story. It felt short and really underwhelming upon rereading it, though.
Superman: The Man of Steel - I really enjoyed setting up Luthor to be a cunning villain in the future of my DCEU. Maybe as a Justice League villain or a Superman villain... However, the movie, like the other, felt weak. Introducing Diana to Clark in modern times was cool. Her and Clark made a great team, but the forgettable villains - Parasite and Metallo - make this movie suffer.


The Flash - I was scared that maybe there were too many characters: Barry Allen, Cisco Ramone, Harrison Wells, and Caitlin Snow as the 'team.' Eddie Thawne and Iris West for the 'Love Triangle.' Captain Cold and his crew as the villains. However, after seeing Black Panther, I am convinced that this many characters could work in a movie. The movie was pretty fun, and that's all it was supposed to be.

Aquaman - I hope I made him not suck. I really think that I did. This movie contained a plot that was a little too similar to the original Thor, however.

Wonder Woman - I think that taking Ares away from the film gave it a lot more meaning - mankind is evil. It gives Diana an excuse to abandon us for all of those years.

Arrow 1/2 - They're fine stories. My main concern with them is that I had the release dates too close together. I hoped to make 5 installments in the series before Phase 3, but that is definitely very unrealistic.

Justice League - In my opinion, this is the crowning jewel of the DCEU. It provides a moral conflict, great characters, etc. Special thanks to @D Hindley, who suggested one edit, which I just made. I gave Batman a full character arc in my edit, by having him reconcile with Superman on Olympus and appear at the UN Ceremony.
 

kmbmw777

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Titans Season One
Part Two of Three

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A/N: I know its been a while. Hope you all enjoy the first post of Phase Two!


Episode Seven: Military Training
The episode opens with Richard and Victor in their dorm room, doing their homework during the night. Suddenly, they get a text from Hank- “Robbery at the Student Union. Get here ASAP.” Richard doesn’t notice the text, as he is too busy listening to his tunes, and Victor is too focused on some physics equation. Barbara, Dawn, and Angela are all giggling the freshman's dorm rooms, and thus do not get the text. Hank is chasing after the criminal solo, and eventually catches him. He is very angry at the rest of the team. Title Card. Hank forces Richard and Barbara to train on the obstacle courses in the gym with him. They spend the day bonding over how much they hate his training sessions which include sprinting, obstacle courses, swimming, rock climbing, and sparring. Eventually, the duo bail on him, but return when they see how sad he is. Great team building with them. Meanwhile, Victor and Dawn patrol the streets of San Francisco and fight a villain who shoots out a toxic gas. To the normal eye, it makes everything seem much more terrifying, though Cyborg can see through it. Cyborg sees the man escape wearing his bag over his head. However, Dove attacks Cyborg as she sees him as some kind of evil robot. They fight, and eventually Cyborg saves her life. In the post credit scene, Angels gets a research opportunity in Professor Crane’s lab, where they are working on fear gas.


Episode Eight: Lady Luck
After the Battle of Athens, the Justice League is known worldwide. Victor complains that no news outlets are showing the Titans fighting in San Francisco, the heroics of Gotham’s Police Forces and Oracle (Lucius Fox), or the Starling City Vigilantes. Richard then says that the Justice League is so cool, and Victor reveals that he wants to join them. That is what Victor will be working towards. Title Card. At lunch in the dining hall, Barabara shows the rest of the Titans a video about a vigilante in Las Vegas who fought with a dual-edged sword. He was never seen or heard from after the battle. It is also revealed the be Dawn’s 21st birthday, and Hank had a weekend trip planned for them - gambling and getting drunk in Las Vegas. The freshmen offer to go with, but Hank and Dawn refuse. Barbara says that they will keep an eye out for the fear man in San Francisco as long as Dawn and Hank keep an eye out for the Las Vegas vigilante.
In Vegas, Hank and Dawn get completely drunk, and do not look for the vigilante. They drunkenly announce that they are Hawk and Dove, an everyone in the bar cheers and smiles. They manage to find their way back to their room, where they pass out. They wake up in a much nicer room, where a man in a black and red suit waits for them. He says that he heard what they were saying at the bar, and had his people investigate. His people found the Hawk and Dove wings in their room, and escorted them all to his penthouse. He introduces himself - Nicolas Sanchez, owner of the casino. He says that vigilantes should be more careful about their identity, and that they have to look out for each other. He’s the Las Vegas vigilante! He then orders Hawk and Dove to leave Vegas and go back to a place where they can do some good. Hank and Dawn say that they deserve some time for fun. Nicolas asks if they are real vigilantes or frauds. He fights both of them, and easily defeats them - “I have never lost a fight. Or anything for that matter.” Hank asks if he’s a metahuman, to which Nicholas says no. He introduces himself as Nike, the Greek God son of Ares and Aphrodite. His mother hid him away in pocket dimensions where time passed differently. When he learned of his father’s evil, he thought it was destiny to kill him. He did not get the opportunity as he was sidetracked in Vegas. Hawk and Dove offer him a spot on the Titans, and he rejects. Hank then calls him a coward - he could make the world a better place but he sits profiting off the world’s selfishness. The three fight again, and Nike wins again. Nike then demands that they leave his casino and never return. In the post credit scene, Angela sees Crane’s supervillain form as she ingests the gas. She is crying in fear.


Episode Nine: The Fall of Angela Hawkins
The episode opens with Barbara sleeping in her room. Angela stands behind her, with a knife in her hand. She holds in right next to Barbara’s neck and hesitates - a tear forming down her eye. Barbara suddenly wakes up and knocks the knife out of Angela’s hand. Angela apologizes, cries, and runs out of the dorm room door, while Barbara stares and calls the police. Title Card. The police finish their investigation of Jonathan Crane - he doesn’t know anything, and he apologizes for the fact that he doesn’t know anything (what a nice guy…). Barbara says that she has a bad feeling about Professor Crane. Richard tells her not to worry - the police or the Titans will catch her, and figure out what is wrong. He then reminds her that it is Valentines Day, and they should be celebrating. Hank reveals that he has to cancel their double date, because he and Dawn ‘broke up’ after the Vegas incident. Thus, Richard and Barbara bring along Neville (from Episode One) and Hailey Smoak, niece of Arrow’s Felicity Smoak (who will have been introduced earlier, but given minimal lines). Neither Neville or Hailey are important - just comic relief. Neville is very clumsy and Hailey is very shy/nerdy. The double date at the semi-fancy restaurant goes horribly (but hilariously). Meanwhile, Cyborg, Hawk, and Dove are searching San Francisco trying to find where Angela is hiding. Cyborg manages to hack into her phone and sees that it is currently in a warehouse on the wharf. The trio arrive at the warehouse where the Scarecrow waits for them. Hawk and Dove both hallucinate and fight each other while yelling about their relationship. Cyborg fights Scarecrow, who is surprisingly agile. Scarecrow reveals that he knows Cyborg is Victor Stone, student at Blake University, and he is 90% sure on the identity on the rest of the San Francisco vigilantes. Scarecrow then says that he better stop Hawk and Dove from killing each other. Cyborg neutralizes both of them, and then finds the Scarecrow gone. Meanwhile, Angela walks into the restaurant where the date is going on, armed with a single gun. She wears a green cloak, but no mask. She walks behind Barbara and holds her gun to Barbara’s neck and Richard panics. She shoots it, but in merely injects something into Barbara. As she's walking out of the restaurant calmly, Richard attacks her with a steak knife. Angela is in tears; she apologizes to Richard and says that she has to do this. She then releases some fear gas, which makes her look terrifying. Richard backs up and flees back to his table. In the post credit scene, the policemen arrive at the restaurant along with an ambulance. Barbara is sent to the ER, and Richard sits there crying - why didn’t he do anything? The entire post-credit-scene is silent.


Episode Ten: Titans in Anarchy
Richard is at the ER Room with Barbara. Victor, Hank, and Dawn arrive and they each share their stories. Richard says that he will kill the Scarecrow for what he did to Angela and Barbara. Title Card. The Titans determine that Professor Crane has to be the Scarecrow - research in fear and relation to Angela are both evidence to prove this. However, none of the fear gas has been found in his university-issued lab (from when San Francisco police searched it). Thus, Richard concludes that they should plan a robbery of his home. The rest of the team are very opposed to this idea. Richard then decides to do it himself. As Nightwing, he breaks into Lonnie Machin’s (remember Anarky from the first part of the season’s) apartment and recruits him for the job. Lonnie says that he is done with crime now that he can’t erase things off his record (which is the Titan’s fault after all). However, Nightwing says that he knows Batman who can get them out of any mess, and later he is forced to explain why the other three Titans are not helping them. Lonnie agrees at the end in exchange for a gentleman's promise - Nightwing owes him a favor. Anarky and Nightwing arrive on the lot where Crane lives. However, the other three Titans wait for him there on the ground of Crane’s massive house.
CYBORG
Seriously, Nightwing! You teamed up with that criminal to help you?

ANARKY
That criminal has a name, Robot Boy!

NIGHTWING
He’s not that bad of a guy, he’s just misunderstood.

CYBORG
He literally beat up Neville because of social darwinism or something! That’s besides the point, is this really what Barbara would want? Breaking into someone’s house?

ANARKY
Barbara?

NIGHTWING
It’s not somebody’s house, Vic! It’s the guy who nearly killed Barbara and has corrupted Angela into a killing machine. We could stop any more deaths right now!

ANARKY
Vic?

DOVE
What if we have the wrong guy?

NIGHTWING
That’s why I’m just breaking in and not killing him. Why are all of you so blind to see this?

CYBORG
There’s a legal way to do this, Richard, and this isn’t it.

ANARKY
Richard?

NIGHTWING
Since when did we care about illegal or legal? We’re vigilantes, dang it!

CYBORG
Since you teamed up with a criminal!

ANARKY
Again, right here guys.

NIGHTWING
Because none of you morons would help me.

CYBORG
Richard, if you go in there, we are going to stop you.

NIGHTWING
I’d like to see you try, d***e!


Just as they are about to fight each other Civil War style, Professor Crane walks out of his door. He reveals that he is rich because he won the nobel prize a few years back and he has thus hired a bodyguard - called the HellHound. The HellHound shows up on property and releases a bunch of rabid dogs on the Titans. Cyborg fights the actual HellHound while the rest of the Titans dodge the dogs attacks and fight each other. Richard is kindapped by Crane at the end of the episode, and Crane then puts on his mask to reveal to Victor, Hank, and Dawn that he is Scarecrow. In the post credit scene, Lonnie is begging Hank for a spot on the Titans. Hank eventually says that they will consider it.


Episode Eleven: Deathwing
The episode opens with Victor talking to Barbara Gordon who has awoken from her coma. She is bedridden, but eager to get out and find Richard. Victor apologizes for losing him to Crane, but Barbara claims that Richard is not lost and he will always do the right thing. We get a flashback to the battle at the estate. It appears like Richard betrayed the Titans to work with Crane - which we, as audience members, know was a manipulation of memory created using fear gas. Meanwhile, Jonathan Crane is torturing Richard to reveal Batman’s identity. Richard is much stronger than he looks, however. Title Card. Richard arrives at school the next day. He does not converse with Barbara, Victor, Hank, or Dawn. As soon as school is over, he gets in a taxi and arrives back at Crane’s house where the torturing could resume. It doesn’t however. Angela reveals that she got Scarecrow to go easy on Richard, Richard remains as stoic as ever - “Why?” Angela says that she knows exactly what Richard is going through - the slow process of becoming brainwashed and turned against your friends. Angela will be there for Richard. The two lean in closer and - Crane interrupts them. One of his drug dealers has not been sending in their checks and he needs Angela and Richard to check it out. If they don’t bad things will happen to those that they care about. Richard gets a more evil looking suit and the two of them head out (in their evil suits). Both wear earpieces and are receiving instructions from Crane. They fight the dealer of the Mirage drug (from Batman season two), and recover one million dollars from him. Angela is then forced to kill him, and she cries as she does it - Richard helps her. As they are making their escape, the titans arrive with their newest member - Lonnie Machin/Anarky and Barbara, fully recovered. Richard fights Hawk and Dove via amazing acrobatics, while Angela fights Barbara and Anarky via spewing out fear gas. Angela turns to fight Cyborg. Cyborg kicks her butt and is about to kill her.
JONATHAN CRANE
Richard, you will save Angela now. Abandon your fight with the birds.

DEATHWING
These are my friends, Scarecrow! I can’t hurt them any longer.

CRANE
Save Angela now or I will press a button and Barbara Gordon will die.

DEATHWING
How -

CRANE
Do not test me, Richard!


Richard fights Cyborg and saves Angela’s life. The duo then escape via a carefully planned exit, which results in Cyborg losing a leg during a car chase. Back at the mansion, Richard and Angela meet with Crane, who says he is very disappointed with Angela’s performance against Cyborg. He says that her therapy into becoming a soldier will continue and he prepares to inject a serum into her. As the serum is injected, Crane leaves. She starts to lose consciousness, and in Richard’s arms she confesses that she has loved him for a long time. Her entire eye becomes green and she passes out completely. In the post credit scene, Richard is sneaking around the Batcave accessing the computer. He is interrupted by Lucius.

Episode Twelve: Phobia
In the episodes opener, Deathwing fights Lucius and Alfred and swipes Cyborg’s files off the computer. As Deathwing escapes the manor with his former mentors knocked unconscious, he is stopped by Bruce. Bruce, unaware of the fight, asks Richard how college has been going and why he’s here. Richard says that he is just back to grab some files from Lucius, and he didn’t want any emotional reunions. Bruce agrees and they go on their way. Title Card. At Hank and Dawn’s apartment the five titans learn that Richard has stolen the Cyborg files. Victor is currently rebuilding his robotic leg with new parts, and Barbara is feeling better. The Titans have no idea how to save Richard and another raid on Crane’s place could be costly to their divided team. Meanwhile, Angela Hawkins is essentially dead; in her place stands a shell of her former self who is obsessed with carrying out Crane’s wishes. Richard and Angela (who now only calls herself Phobia) break into Blake University’s cafeteria and poison the food supply. They then send out a text to an unknown number “Do not eat the cafeteria food.” The camera switches to show someone looking at the text - the person is revealed to be none other than Lonnie Machin. At lunch that day, the four titans notice Lonnie not eating anything. Each of them also stop consuming and order everyone else to stop.
VICTOR STONE
What did you do, you monster?


LONNIE MACHIN
I’m just showing everyone what human nature really is.


Victor punches Lonnie and realizes that everyone has consumed small amounts of a liquid form of the fear gas. It doesn’t affect Victor, and Barbara didn’t consume any of it because of her hospital ordered diet. That duo runs away before the lunch room breaks into anarchy. Victor and Barbara arrive at Crane’s lab where Richard and Phobia wait for them.
CYBORG
Why are you doing this, Richard?


DEATHWING
I have no choice, Vic! He could kill you at any second.


BATGIRL
If he could do that, why wouldn’t he have done it already! He’s bluffing, Richard!


DEATHWING
He needs me to be ‘loyal’ to him! He needs you all as leverage.


CYBORG
What could he possibly need you for!

DEATHWING
I’ll find out, Victor! And then we can stop him! I promise.


BATGIRL
And let thousands of innocent people get hurt while we wait for you! No thank you!

DEATHWING
I am sorry, Babs. I really am.

They all fight. Cyborg and Batgirl v Deathwing and Phobia. Hawk and Dove v Anarky. Epic stunts, and even better special effects. Anarky escapes as the serum sets in on Hawk and Dove. Deathwing defeats Batgirl, but Cyborg defeats Phobia. Deathwing promptly collapses of exhaustion. Crane walks in. Crane reveals he just released a YouTube video claiming responsibility for the attack in the cafeteria and he is fleeing to one of his many hideouts. He then vanishes. In the episodes post credit scenes, Richard wakes up. Barbara and Cyborg reveal that he had a ton of fear gas in his system, and he wasn’t thinking straight. He kisses Barbara. Next to him, Angela Hawkins dies on the hospital bed in the Titans Headquarters in Hank and Dawn’s apartment.
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Princess Leia

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Holy moly I love what you did to Wonder Woman. That third act would have been so much better without Ares as the last battle.

One little thing though- you have Maru both being killed and being captured (you have her listed as Dr. Poison the first time, and Maru the second). Other than that, well done!

The DCEU frustrates me to no end, because I thought that the CW/CBS had a great grip on the shows (I haven’t had time to watch since Supergirl joined the station though). They can be dark, but they also contain light (in various degrees depending on the show; Arrow is darker than Supergirl and Flash). While I understand why they wanted to continue in the path Nolan carved out, Zach Snyder isn’t Nolan. Not even close (though I will admit that I’m not crazy about TDKR- I love the first two films, but the finale was lacking for me).

Luckily, it looks like Clark will be more optimistic from this point going forward, but I’m a little concerned about the WW sequel. It’ll be set in the 1950s, and considering how Diana had taken herself out of conflicts at that time, I’m not sure how this will go (I’m also a little worried that the film will pull a Captain America moment of Diana going to all of her WWI friends’ funerals).

All I want from Batman is for him to be surrounded by great supporting characters again- Gordon, Alfred, Grayson, Lucius, Selina, Barbara, his rogue gallery... I’d really like to see a Batman movie series that incorporates all of those characters together again.
 

kmbmw777

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Holy moly I love what you did to Wonder Woman. That third act would have been so much better without Ares as the last battle.

One little thing though- you have Maru both being killed and being captured (you have her listed as Dr. Poison the first time, and Maru the second). Other than that, well done!

The DCEU frustrates me to no end, because I thought that the CW/CBS had a great grip on the shows (I haven’t had time to watch since Supergirl joined the station though). They can be dark, but they also contain light (in various degrees depending on the show; Arrow is darker than Supergirl and Flash). While I understand why they wanted to continue in the path Nolan carved out, Zach Snyder isn’t Nolan. Not even close (though I will admit that I’m not crazy about TDKR- I love the first two films, but the finale was lacking for me).

Luckily, it looks like Clark will be more optimistic from this point going forward, but I’m a little concerned about the WW sequel. It’ll be set in the 1950s, and considering how Diana had taken herself out of conflicts at that time, I’m not sure how this will go (I’m also a little worried that the film will pull a Captain America moment of Diana going to all of her WWI friends’ funerals).

All I want from Batman is for him to be surrounded by great supporting characters again- Gordon, Alfred, Grayson, Lucius, Selina, Barbara, his rogue gallery... I’d really like to see a Batman movie series that incorporates all of those characters together again.
Thanks for catching that mistake in Wonder Woman. That’s what you get when you decide to change the ending right before posting it! I’ll fix that momentarily.

While I have enjoyed most DCEU films and I love the CW shows (just finished watching Legends of Tomorrow, my favorite show on the network because of how character driven it is), I completely understand what you mean. Each movie should have a different tone that represents the character you are creating. While Snyder’s Superman is interesting, having him in the same universe as Batman is pretty repetitive. I am much more in support of Superman having more comical aspects because his powers are so unrealistic that to try and give him the Nolan treatment doesn’t work. Though I am a huge fan of the man versus God complex that Superman has.

Also, regarding Wonder Woman 2, I have read that it will take place in all modern times. I’m not too worried about this film, because Patty Jenkins has a very solid grasp on Wonder Woman a season a character and the themes she can/does represent.

I agree with your thoughts on Batman. His supporting cast is just as interesting as him, but it’s very hard to fit that many characters into a movie. That’s why I made a TV show with a budget that resembles that of Arrow’s hopefully. (After all Arrow is essentially a Batman TV show :p )

Thank you so much for your compliments and I hope you enjoy the rest :)
 

kmbmw777

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SUICIDE SQUAD
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A/N: My writing got very sloppy near the end as I think I just got bored with the story. The story kept changing directions, and I hope that it (lazy writing) will not happen again!

Episode One: Secrecy, Syria, and Squads
The episode opens in World War II - four individuals run through the battlefield. The first of them - a speedster, wearing a metal helmet with wings on its side and a large yellow lightning bolt down his chest - the Flash (or at least a Flash). The second throws a bomb onto the battlefield, the screen shows clouds of black and Nazi soldiers standing in it; the second hero knocks the soldiers out - he is called Dr. Mid-Nite. The third stealthily invades a fort and shoots gas out of a gun - the soldiers that he hits with a gun fall asleep; Sandman. The fourth is fighting soldiers, and when a bullet strikes him - he turns to steel - Commander Steel. The video becomes grainy and we zoom out to see Amanda Waller talking to a single man.

AMANDA WALLER
Secret Squadrons have been a part of US history for a long time, as you undoubtedly know. I mean we’ve been doing this since the forties with the Justice Society of America! But now with the Justice League enforcing international law, we need something covert to execute our needs abroad. So that's why I’m proposing Task Force X.


She introduces the members of the squad one by one - Floyd Lawton, a master assassin who has never missed a shot. Leonard Snart and Mick Rory - equipped with cold and heat guns, they are unstoppable. Harvey Dent - a former lawyer who went slightly insane; good intentions now. Pamela Isley - a metahuman with the ability to control wildlife. Harley Quinn - a lunatic who could prove herself useful and as a meat shield. And Sgt, Rick Flagg to lead them all - a good hearted man. The board questions this decision to use criminals. Why not use real government people. Waller justifies it via asserting that if US military were caught doing the things that Task Force X will do - the US will be in huge trouble.

The President of the United States, Damien Darhk, is hesitant. Waller smiles - “Remember the potential for that scandal that you were a soldier on the Nazi side in World War II?” Darhk frowns. We cut to the Suicide Squad, who under Flagg’s direction, break into the FBI and burn everything related to the investigation. This sequence leads to an epic chase scene, which shows how the squad works, but doesn’t necessarily work together.

Waller smiles at Darhk who then agrees to the formation of the squad. As Waller leaves, we cut to an ARGUS base where the squad pulls in. Each member gets three years off their prison sentence for this mission, and they return to their cells.

FLOYD LAWTON
Three years off a triple life sentence ain’t nothing, pal!


Flagg tells Lawton to suck it up and work his butt off to make that 3 years into 300. The group gets another mission - raid a facility in Syria and seize it from the terrorists. The group skydives into Syria and does just that in some epic action sequences. Bunch of dead terrorists. Bam. The episode concludes with the US military entering the facility and Flagg swiping some sort of idol as the Suicide Squad escapes via an ARGUS helicopter.

Episode Two: Operations, Oil, and Opal
Waller orders the squad to target Earl J. Dunkerton - a rich individual who runs a deep sea mining company in middle of the Pacific Ocean. He is staying at a very expensive hotel while trying to sell his oil to some mysterious buyer. The squad has one objective - capture him - alive. In a sequence reminiscent of Grand Theft Auto, the nearly kills him, but is able to bring him (and his daughter) in via an elaborate sequence consisting of Deadshot shooting him from a nearby parking structure, Harley Quinn and Dent pretending to be ambulance staff, Snart and Rory distracting the police by causing mayhem, and Poison Ivy hiding and making things really difficult for all parties. Everyone escapes because of this well-detailed plan.

Flagg is ordered to take Dunkerton, his daughter, Lawton, Snart, and Rory to his base of operations (which is two large freighter ships). They land via a helicopter on the freighters, and Dunkerton is forced to lead them to the store room where the oil is stored. The team loads millions of dollars worth of oil onto their helicopter. Flagg then orders Rory to blow up the whole ship - with all of its mercenaries and Dunkerton on it. They spill a bunch of oil and fight mercenaries. Finally Mick Rory lights the whole thing on fire - huge explosion as they fly away. Flagg justifies this as saying no one can know that they took oil.

Meanwhile, at base Dent talks to the ladies about how he had these nice opal earrings for his wife. Then the Joker kidnapped him, he went crazy, and his wife and kid are in witness protection. Dent says his goal is to find them, but Harley says that it is best to move on. You can’t recover or obtain your past life back after you have been Joker-ed. The two have some nice bonding, and they flush the opal necklace down the toilet together. As the episode concludes, Dunkerton’s burned body is rescued from the explosion by the US Navy. He is the only survivor.


Episode Three: Conspiracies, Candidates, and Calculations
FBI agent Ava Sharpe sits in the room with the burned body of Dunkerton who can no longer speak. She has two sets of photos in her hand - one a hazy photo which suggests that Captain Cold was boarding an ARGUS transport in Syria, and another which shows him distracting police while Dunkerton vanished. Is he out of custody? Why was he boarding the ARGUS transport?

Flagg is also hesitant - the squad just hurt an innocent (or at least non-criminal) American citizen to steal a bunch of oil? What could Waller need that for? Also, what is this idol that they recovered from Syria? He studies the images of the idol - it appears to be Greek, and the writing on it translates to “Forge.” Flagg immediately associates this with Hephaestus, the Greek god of Mechanics, Fire. What do Waller and Darhk want with Hephaestus?

Flagg is ordered to take a team to recover some items from a cold war bunker in the Soviet Union. His team will consist of Captain Cold, Harley Quinn, and Poison Ivy. Noah Cutler, another ARGUS agent, will take Deadshot, Two-Face, and HeatWave to Washington DC for an unknown mission. They all head out. Waller tells Darhk “You’re election will soon be secured. And the weapon to prevent another Ares situation is almost acquired.”

They land in Turkey and smuggle themselves across the border into desolate farmland - poor Georgian farmers are starving. Poison Ivy makes all of their crops grow and she is hailed as a hero. Flagg smiles - this is the work he thought he would be doing. In Washington, Lex Luthor will be giving a campaign speech. The Suicide Squad has orders to kill him. Lawton sets up in his hotel room, while Dent questions the morality of this. Dent is ordered downstairs - he is the getaway driver in a high tech van. Rory is also in the van.

When the Russian team make it to the bunker, they find a lot of dead American troops. Captain Cold breaks into a secret, hidden storeroom where they find diagrams of weapons and a map, along with tons of other trinkets.. Flagg says it's time to leave, but Russian military has located them. They have to fight their way out.

Lawton fires the shot. Luthor looks stunned, but doesn’t die. “Bulletproof invisible headset,” he laughs. “Now FBI, get that guy - thirty-second floor of the building right there. Corner suite.” In the car, Cutler yells “Drive!” He is about to set off the bomb in Lawton’s neck, but Rory punches him and grabs his tablet. Rory disarms their three bombs and tells Lawton, “Cutler was about to blow you up. You’re welcome. We’re free now.” They throw Cutler out of the car as well as the two bombs that Dent and Rory have.

Lawton has to fight Ava Sharpe as he tries to escape the hotel. He says “I’m done killing,” and he shoots her foot. He nearly escapes, but finds FBI agents swarming the hotel - Lawton surrenders.

Flagg, Snart, Quinn, and Isley take all of the weapons and then blow up the room. They then enter a series of tunnels to escape the Russians, and find themselves back in Turkey where they head back to America.

Episode Four: Freedom, Folly, and the FBI
The episode opens with Floyd Lawton being questioned by Ava Sharpe and the FBI. Lawton says that he was being forced into doing this by ARGUS, who was under orders from President Darhk. He tells his story, but there is no way to prove or disprove it. The FBI orders Agent Sharpe to head an investigation into ARGUS.

Mick Rory says that they have to go back to ARGUS and break Snart free. Rory claims that he owes Snart his life, and he threatens to kill Dent if Dent doesn’t help him. Dent starts to formulate a plan, which he really doesn’t like. There is one person who may want to break out a member of the suicide squad - but this person is very unstable.

Flagg learns from Waller what happened to the three who went to assassinate Luthor. She gives him plans to break into the FBI headquarters to free Lawton. Flagg remarks that there is no escape plan, to which Waller replies that Flagg will have a cyanide pill, and he will have to shoot the others (the bombs will not work in there). Flagg asks to give him 24 hours to come up with an alternate plan, but will fail to do so.

Mick and Dent meet with the Joker, who has an ice cream truck for a lair. The Joker makes some remarks about an apology for Dent’s face and how it didn’t age well. Rory asks what that the ice cream truck for, and the Joker replies about his plan to poison all of Gotham’s children with free “ice cream.” Both Rory and the Joker laugh, and Dent sighs. Dent fills the Joker in on what they need to do, and the Joker agrees to break Harley Quinn out of jail. Only one problem - they have no idea where ARGUS is located. It is the Joker who realizes that they will be going to the FBI Headquarters.

Waller has a meeting with the president, who tells her that he is getting worried about the suicide squad and will have to cancel the project if the Deadshot operation fails. Waller promises success, and takes his access codes to the FBI Headquarters.

Flagg leads his stealth team into the FBI HQ and they get past the lobby successfully. It is then however, when the Joker drives a car bomb into the building. Gunfire and chaos emerge. Rory and Dent start shooting everybody and the building goes on lockdown. Only Harley and Isley are within the blast doors.

Agent Sharpe attempts to transport Lawton to a helicopter to flee to a secret base, but Harley Quinn and Poison Ivy are on the roof. Isley grabs the helicopter with her vines and pulls it out of the sky. Floyd Lawton is rescued and Sharpe is knocked unconscious. The team leaves her there. Poison Ivy grows tons of vines outside of the facility in order to show Flagg that they are ready to go.

In the chaos of the lobby, Flagg pulls the Joker aside. He asks her, “Do you love Harley Quinn?” The Joker surprisingly says “Yes. She is the only person I have ever bonded with.” Flagg says, “Then you need to --” We are cut short. Flagg leads an escape where everyone leaves with him (with the alternative being blamed for the Joker’s terrorism). As soon as they are away, Flagg puts bombs in all of their necks. No revolutions, ever again. As the episode concludes, the FBI director refuses to listen to Agent Sharpe’s eyewitness account, and claims that the American people do not need this investigation - it will only divide the country. She threatens to quit and leak it. FBI agents attempt to grab her, but she manages to escape the facility.


Episode Five: Cleanup, Clumsiness, and Care
As the Suicide Squad watchs the news, it becomes clear that the Joker escaped the battle at the FBI. It is also clear that the squad is paying dearly for their betrayal - increased security, less freedom at the facility, etc. Harley Quinn comments that she didn’t do anything, but she is shushed by everybody else. Finally, Rick Flagg offers a mission to the team. They need to catch and kill the FBI agent Ava Sharpe. This assassination attempt will have no miscalculations. President Damien Darhk wants the squad to clean up the mess they made, and then disband. Waller however, decides that select members of the squad will continue their mission with Hephaestus. She sends Rick Flagg, Lawton, Leonard Snart, and Poison Ivy to kill Ava Sharpe, and discover who may have intel. She then says that she will be heading into the field herself with Mick Rory, Harley Quinn, and Harvey Dent. Flagg’s team is successful - they kidnap Sharpe and discover that she has planted a device which leaks all of her knowledge onto the web if she goes dark for more than two days. She demands a meeting with Waller and Flagg gives it to her. Waller’s team break into a NATO base where they steal all of info on the bomb that Hephaestus was developing - which was built and placed in a secret United States base on the moon, where Hephaestus currently is. Everyone retreats. Dent and Quinn bond more, and they share an intimate moment.


Episode Six: Indexes, Ignorance, and Irony
Amanda Waller meets with Ava Sharpe and the two have a debate. Waller realizes she has nothing to threaten Ava with (as she has no family, friends), so Ava gets the upper hand. Noah Kuttler manages to crack the encryption on Ava’s program, so Waller shoots Ava twice in the head. Everyone flinches. Rick Flagg has a change of heart about Amanda Waller after he sees the effect that she has on people. Dunkerton’s life is destroyed because of her - he was an innocent man with resources that Waller needed. Instead of killing Dunkerton, Flagg (and his squad of Mick Rory and Deadshot), help set up a new life for himself. Harvey Dent and Harley Quinn discuss their relationship while they steal census data from the United Nations, with teammates Snart and Isley.


Episode Seven: Russians, Rockets, and Royalty
The entire squad takes control of a Russian rocket site, where they plan to be blasted onto the moon to access Hephaestus' weapon, which is powered by a ton of oil. After the Suicide Squad battles the Russian military, ARGUS appears and plans to kill all of them excluding Flagg. The Suicide Squad’s bombs do not go off. Flagg chooses to stand up to Waller and ARGUS by deactivating them - they do not deserve to die. The Squad covers for Flagg as he boards the spaceship to complete his mission. After fighting ARGUS, Flagg takes off in the spaceship alone. He asks the Suicide Squad to return to ARGUS HQ and take on Waller. The Squad agrees - each for their own reason - and they fly back to ARGUS HQ.


Episode Eight: Greeks, Globes, and Grandeur
In the season finale, Flagg lands on the moon and meets with Hephaestus who has built himself a palace. When Hephaestus realizes Flagg works for ARGUS, he tries to kill him. He does not want anyone taking his bomb (which would reset the memory of everyone on Earth). Meanwhile. the Suicide Squad take on ARGUS Headquarters. They raid the facility and have confrontations with Noah Kuttler and Amanda Waller. After defeating Waller, they assign Flagg in charge of ARGUS (though he is nowhere to be found). Waller manages to escape to the unknowns. Finally, Flagg defeats Hephaestus in combat, and convinces him that they are on the same team. The duo destroy the bomb and return to Earth. Flagg frees everyone on the Suicide Squad (except for Harley Quinn and Harvey Dent, who ask to stay, because they fear the Joker) and assumes the role of Director. Hephaestus heads to Silicon Valley. In the season’s only post-credits scene, the Joker breaks into ARGUS HQ and frees Harley Quinn, who begs him to take Harvey Dent along. The Joker agrees saying, “Oh, the Two-Faced devil - sorry about that by the way, no hard feelings - I would be glad to bring him along! Mwahaha!”
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kmbmw777

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The Green Lantern Corps
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A/N: This is where things get tough. A) I am not as familiar with the Green Lantern mythos, so I had to research this a ton. B) Making this movie distinguishable from Guardians of the Galaxy, especially when they share so many similarities is very hard. The question that I had to ask myself is - how wacky should this movie be (I mean, I was considering using an army of ants for the big bad guy. It is probably a good thing that I didn’t. I could accomplish exactly what I needed, with much less absurd ideas.)? I love the bright colors of Guardians of the Galaxy, but still think that replicating that feel would be wrong. Henceforth, this idea was born:

The movie begins on Earth where we watch a spaceship, piloted by that alien from the post credit scene of Justice League, crash in the desert. Actually - that’s no spaceship! It’s a green energy field which completely evaporates when he crashes. Hal Jordan, a test pilot for Ferris Air, the company who owns the area, is sent out to investigate by his girlfriend, Carol Ferris, the CEO of Ferris Air. Hal meets Abin Sur, the alien who is near dead. Abin Sur tells Hal:

"In brightest day, in blackest night,
No evil shall escape my sight.
Let those who worship evil's might
Beware my power--Green Lantern's light!"


Hal takes the ring from Abin Sur, and, in a series resembling the Bifrost from Thor: Ragnarok (though with more green), is teleported to another world. The main theme and title card for the movie appear.

Hal arrives on Oa - home of the Green Lantern Corps, an intergalactic police force in which Hal just accidentally joined. Hal is assigned to train under Sinestro, a pink humanoid alien. Sinestro believes Hal to be weak, and training him to be a waste of time, yet he does it, for it is his duty to the Green Lantern Corps. Kilowog, an alien resembling a large humanoid rhinoceros, treats Hal more kindly - he sees Hal as the chosen replacement of Abin Sur, who was his partner in safeguarding Sector 2184 (which Earth is a part of).

Under both of these mentors, Hal learns the lantern code - to use his willpower to safeguard the galaxy. He learns the history of the Green Lantern Corps - they were created by beings who wanted to guard the universe from threats beyond, and were the first attempt at an intergalactic peace force. They have not been seen by any Green Lantern since the formation. Hal begins to research the science of his ring - they can create wormholes through space and time, and they can manipulate energy based on his emotions.

Sinestro puts Hal through rigorous training, which makes Hal want to quit. Kilowog helps him improve, while Sinestro brings him down. Finally, Sinestro brings Hal on his first mission to Sinestro’s home world. Sinestro says that terrorist groups have been causing mass panic and that the duo need to stop them.

They head to Korugar, a huge planet with a small metropolis at its core, where the duo battles against rebels with laser guns. It is a very easy win, but Hal saves Sinestro’s life during the battle once. During the battle, we notice Sinestro question the morality of the Green Lanterns - is it really fair to allow all these bad crimes to go on throughout the galaxy. The Corps are very selective about which crimes they stop. He suggests that the organized corp may not be the best way of peacekeeping.

They return to Oa to find the galaxy in chaos. Robotic creatures have risen up and are slaughtering people in every sector of the galaxy, though it is most prevalent in Sector 666. It is revealed that they are only targeting individuals with high capacity for causing chaos.

Sinestro tells Hal that the robots are called Manhunters are were the original robotic peacekeepers of the galaxy, created by the same beings who created the green lantern rings. They have been living in silence, apparently waiting for the right moment to strike. Hal now begins to question the Green Lantern Corps as a whole. Sinestro and Hal join the battle in Sector 666.

The planets, which resemble Hell as they are erupted in fire, are in chaos and the Green Lanterns are not strong enough to stop them. It is impossible to tell civilian and manhunter apart. While witnessing the horrors of this battle, Hal makes the decision to abandon this weird life and return to Earth.

On Earth, Hal returns home to live with his girlfriend Carol Ferris, who was scared Hal was dead. The duo go out on a date to a fancy dinner at a Japanese restaurant to celebrate Hal’s ‘revival.’ Hal leaves the Lantern Ring at his apartment - he wants nothing to do with them. At dinner, the duo is attacked by a Manhunter who has deemed that Carol Ferris is a corrupt businesswoman. Hal battles the Manhunter with a samurai's sword from the wall. He defeats the Manhunter and leaves with Carol to his apartment. At the apartment, three manhunters wait and one has the ring. Hal battles them by using his own intuition and fighting skills he learned from Kilowog. When he recovers the ring, he crushes all of them, by making a large boot. Carol brings the machine parts to her lab and begins to analyze where their signal is originating from. Hal flies away, leaving Carol behind.


Hal arrives at the planet - the same on that Sinestro is from - and breaks into the capitol building himself. There, Sinestro sits controlling the movement of the Manhunters. He reveals that he wants to bring down the Green Lantern Corps because they are ineffective. The Manhunters were the only way to make people doubt the Lantern’s goodness. Hal (and Kilowog, who arrives during the fight) battle Sinestro and an army of Manhunters. The battle features very wacky visuals and Hal’s victory. During the fight, Sinestro stabs Kilowog through the heart and tries to convince Hal that he is the good guy. Hal doesn’t believe Sinestro, and he manage to shut down the Manhunter army and save the entire galaxy from destruction.


There is a huge celebration on Oa for Hal and a memorial for Kilowog. Hal becomes a full Green Lantern and will patrol Sector 2187 with a new partner. Sinestro is imprisoned by the Green Lantern Corps.


In the first post credits scene, Hal is analyzing the Manhunter algorithm with other Lanterns and he is left wondering - why is the love of his life on that list?

In the movie’s second post credit scene, Sinestro sits quietly in his cell. A guard brings him a meal which contains a green ring in it. The guard smiles - “Nothing frightens me,” he says. Sinestro says, “I am fear.” as he puts the ring on his finger.

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kmbmw777

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The Flash versus Firestorm
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A/N: Welcome to the most ambitious plot for the DCEU. I know that I was supposed to finish Titans next, but I couldn't help myself. After this, expect another temporary hiatus. As always, thank you for reading.

The movie opens with the Flash zooming through Central City. Everywhere, the city is decorated with Flash paraphernalia - it is clear that everybody loves their mysterious speedster. He zooms and rescues two kids from running in the street, builds an entire house for an elderly person, and rescues 4 people from a car crash. He even gets to throw the first pitch at the baseball game - Central City Streaks (the team is named after him) versus the Gotham Griffins. The Flash is a hero. [Insert Imagine Dragons’ I’m on top of the World during this montage] And, in a move that defies superhero movie stereotypes, Barry Allen is successful! It seems that being the Flash is taking minimal tole on his social and career life. He runs into STAR Labs, where his team greets him as he takes off his suit. Quirky comments from all members of the team.

Eddie, boyfriend of Iris West, is having a less than pleasant life. Since the Flash has basically eradicated crime in Central City, the police force is constantly experiencing budget cuts in favor of philanthropic programs. The constant stress of losing his job as detective is making his life a mess, but he still manages to find some joy with his ginger soon-to-be fiance, Iris West. Iris is a successful reporter known for her works on The Flash. As Eddie and Iris talk (Iris has an interview with Dr. Harrison Wells of STAR Labs), we see Eddie fiddle with a ring. In the background the television is on where an ad is playing - “If you have been experiencing the sudden appearance of superhuman powers, please go to STAR Labs, where we will help you control your problems,” says television’s Doctor Wells. Eddie looks at the television and remarks that most people who visit STAR Labs disappear and that police investigations were stopped by ARGUS. Iris comments that the disappearance explains the low number of metahumans in Central City - the particle accelerator should’ve affected 20,000 people - 2% of the population - but under a thousand metahumans are known to the public. Iris plans to ask Dr. Wells about this at their interview.

At work the next day, Eddie asks Barry for help in proposing to Iris. Barry reluctantly agrees to distract her while Eddie works on some outlandish proposal, and Eddie graciously thanks Barry.

Meanwhile, at STAR Labs, Iris ends up meeting with Dr. Caitlin Snow instead of Dr. Harrison Wells. Caitlin says that Wells is very busy, and he apologizes. Wells has no openings for months, so Iris takes the interview with Caitlin. Iris asks Caitlin about the low number of reported metas (most of who are criminal), the disappearances, and if she knows the Flash. Caitlin answers the first question by saying that most metahumans have powers so slight that they won’t even be noticed. She also explains that the metagene often intrudes on a person's cognitive thinking. She answers the second question by saying that there were 4,000 disappearances the night of the particle accelerator explosion - her fiance Ronnie Raymond among them. Caitlin has little faith in these peoples survival. She also denies the rumors that STAR Labs and ARGUS have been kidnapping people with powers. She cryptically answers Iris’ last question by saying “STAR Labs is committed to making Central City a safer place.”

Caitlin goes to meet up with Cisco Ramone a successful engineer at STAR Labs and a members of Team Flash. They greet each other and go on their ways. Cisco walks down a hallway, trips on a ball, and his hand hits the wall. The wall flickers and a doorway opens - where Dr. Wells went in last movie’s post credits scene. He enters the room, and calls out for Caitlin.

Iris goes to pick up her young brother, Wally West, from school. He wears a Flash t-shirt and loves the hero. He gets dropped off at home. She drives to the Central City Commons, where Barry waits. Him and Iris talk, grab a coffee, and sit. They talk about their childhood and fond memories. Eddie is nowhere to be found - he is late. Minutes turn into an hour, and before Barry leaves, he notices fire spreading through downtown Central City. He checks his phones - texts from Dr. Wells and Eddie.

EDDIE: Sorry Bar; Ive gotta bail. Meta in downtown. Flash is mia.

Barry tells Iris that she has to go, and she tells him to come hide with her. Barry is her ‘best friend.’ Barry replies ‘That’s the problem, Iris. I love you.” She pauses, and stares at the fire. “I love you too. I think I always have” He smiles and says that he has to do something - he changes into the Flash. The duo kiss. “Now I have to save Central City.” He zooms off to assess the threat, leaving Iris standing there, mesmerized.

Cisco stands in the secret room and he plays a holographic video. Two flashes in a house - the night Barry’s mom died. A Yellow and Red Flash.

RED FLASH
Who are you? Why would you do this to me! You’re a flash!


YELLOW FLASH
Oh, I am not like a flash at all. Some would say I am


YELLOW FLASH AND DOCTOR WELLS
The reverse.


Cisco turns around, started by Doctor Wells finding him, who finishes the line from the video. Dr. Wells tells Cisco everything - his real name (Eobard Thawne) and that he is a speedster who wanted to kill Barry Allen as a child. But now, aftering failing to kill Barry, he needs to train Barry, for an untold reason. He says that Cisco is incredibly courageous and smart and in many ways Cisco has shown him what it is like to have a son. He stabs Cisco with his vibrating hand.

Dr. Wells
Forgive me. But to me you’ve been dead for centuries.


Caitlin knows that Wells is evil, but not about Cisco’s death. On comms, she tells Barry that she has to tell him something. Barry asks her how to defeat this man, who seems to be literally made of fire. Caitlin tells Barry to quarantine him with his speed, and Barry zips away, not listening to her statement.

Barry zooms around, and the fire starts to dwell down. Dr. Wells meanwhile zooms into the cortex at STAR Labs and kills Caitlin. Barry is running so fast in circles that he passes himself up - epic visual and he is knocked back in time.

A/N: I estimate this taking up the first 45 minutes of the film.

Remember that scene from the beginning with quirky dialogue. I wrote: “He [Barry] runs into STAR Labs, where his team greets him as he takes off his suit. Quirky comments from all members of the team.” This happens again. However, Barry starts finishing everyone’s sentences - almost like deja vu. Dr. Wells immediately concludes that Barry Allen has traveled through time and he orders Barry to tell him the full story, which he does. Keep in mind, no one knows that Dr. Wells is really the evil Eobard Thawne. Dr. Wells tells Barry that he should proceed with the day exactly as it happened the first time. Barry says that he can’t - Central City will be destroyed. He zooms away. Dr. Wells orders Cisco and Caitlin to begin analyzing the space-time continuum and see what the limits are to Barry’s new found ability. Now Cisco won’t discover Wells’ dark secret. Wells also reschedules his meeting with Iris.

The Flash waits in Central City plaza - finally he sees the man who will cause the city’s eruptions into flames. The Flash quickly puts power-damping handcuffs on his and zips him back to STAR Labs. The city is saved. When Cisco and Caitlin see the man, they recognize him as Ronnie Raymond, Caitlin’s fiance who disappeared the night of the explosion. He shows no recognition of Caitlin or his old life. Meanwhile, Barry receives a text from Eddie and sees a post from Iris.

EDDIE: Thx a lot Barry. This was the most important moment in my life and you bailed w/ no notice! F…
IRIS: Just got engaged EEEEEK!


Barry looks at the phone and frowns.

The next two sections occur simultaneously, and are told in that way. However, for simplicity I will write them as two separate paragraphs.

The next day comes - Caitlin and Cisco are analyzing Ronnie Raymond (aka Firestorm) and they notice something peculiar. There are two separate sets of electrical data running through his mind - almost like two people. Firestorm/Ronnie connect with Caitlin, and he claims that seeing Caitlin has made him able to fight the other individual inside his head. Cisco tries to stop Caitlin as she frees him. Ronnie kisses Caitlin, before pushing her to the ground. He knocks Cisco back, and walks to the entrance to the particle accelerator. Caitlin yells at him to stop, but he shoots a blast of fire backwards. She has Snart’s gun in her hands and counters it. Cisco calls for Barry, but no answer. Ronnie begins to activate the particle accelerator.

Iris is at STAR Labs for her interview. Barry stops her and confesses his love to her and says “I know you love me too.” Iris cries and tells him that he is too late. She loves Eddie too and they are getting married. Eddie walks into STAR Labs with Wally (they were parking the car). He overhears the last bit of the conversation and walks up to Barry and punches him. Barry runs away without revealing his powers. Barry then heads to the cortex where he learns that the particle accelerator has been activated.

Dr. Wells creates a forcefield around STAR Labs to prevent the particle accelerator from escaping the lab. He yells at Caitlin and Barry for their clumsiness. Then, the particle accelerator explodes again. Firestorm gets a huge blast of energy, as does Cisco, Caitlin, Eddie, and Wally. Firestorm blasts a hole in the ceiling of STAR Labs and flies away, leaving the damaged team behind.

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A/N: This act would probably take around 30 minutes.

Iris is horrified to find Wally missing and Eddie unconscious. Eddie is brought to the med-bay, where Caitlin and Cisco rest. Dr. Wells watches over them.

Firestorm is in the atmosphere above Central City, and there seems no way for Barry to reach him. He has shot down ever helicopter and Barry can’t run into the sky. Cisco returns to the headquarters, and begins working on boots that could allow Barry to fly through the sky - like Iron Man.

While Cisco works and Dr. Wells and Barry brainstorm, Eddie walks into the headquarters. He sees the flash suit. (During this interaction, Iris hears Eddie’s voice, and comes to greet him)

EDDIE
What’s this? Why is the Flash suit here? And Allen...


BARRY
Eddie, it is not what it looks like.


EDDIE
Well it looks like this is the freakin’ headquarters for Team Flash! The folks who have ruined my life!


DR. WELLS
Mr. Thawne, I need to ask you to leave now.


EDDIE THAWNE
No one will tell me what to do! You ruined this city, Dr. Wells!


CISCO (quietly)
Thawne… Where have I heard that name?


BARRY
Eddie, cool it! None of us are the Flash.


EDDIE
That's good for me. I have an opportunity to take REVENGE on the men who ruined this city, and I’m sure as hell going to take it!


BARRY
Don’t let your anger control you, Eddie.


Eddie walks up to Barry and a lightning bolt dagger appears in his hand - his metahuman ability, much like Cicada from the comic series.

EDDIE
You better hope the Flash saves you, Barry Allen.


He holds his lightning dagger to Barry’s neck. Barry does not want to reveal his speed. Dr. Wells grips the front of his wheelchair - small lightning appearing around him, but no one noticing, as everyone is focused on Eddie. Dr. Wells is prepared to reveal himself to save Barry. Suddenly, Iris walks it. She is horrified at what Eddie is doing to Barry. She runs out, and Eddie chases after her.

Barry wants to follow them out, but Dr. Wells stops him. He knows how to defeat Firestorm. He orders an evacuation of STAR Labs - all sensitive technology must be removed. Dr. Wells says explains to Barry that he could theoretically use his own lightning as a dagger, like metahuman Eddie did. Use that to stop Firestorm. Barry says - “that doesn’t help me get up there.” Dr Wells says “Leave that to me.”

Cisco is repeating the name Thawne over and over; he knows the name from somewhere. But where? Suddenly, he has a vision from another world - Dr. Wells/Eobard Thawne killing him. Cisco grabs a pair of cuffs, and heads outside.

Outside, Wells explains the plan to the Flash. He is going to blow up STAR Labs. Firestorm will try to consume the energy, which will cause the debris to fly upwards. Barry rides the debris to get to Firestorm and stabs him. The bomb goes off.

What no one notices is that Eddie and Iris are arguing in the STAR Labs bathroom. When the bomb goes off, Eddie traps them in a shield made of lightning to save them as they fly upwards.

Barry runs from block to block before he notices Iris and Eddie. Eddie is protecting Iris by throwing lightning at Firestorm and keeping shield activated. Eddie and Firestorm begin their duel, and Eddie ignores Iris as she falls to her death. Eddie is losing his battle, and Barry is faced with an impossible choice - defeat Firestorm or save Iris. He saves Iris, reveals that he is the Flash, and they kiss as Eddie is defeated by Firestorm.

Cisco jumps on Dr. Wells and cuffs him. He reveals that he knows who he is, and Dr. Wells smiles - impressive, Cisco. Dr. Wells says that Cisco must have seen an alternative timeline and that Cisco’s new powers will be interesting to watch. Cisco holds a gun to Dr. Wells head - “You’re not watching anything.” Dr. Wells smiles, Cisco pulls the trigger and the bullet goes through him. Dr. Wells smiles - he designed the handcuffs and they are thus immune to him.

The Reverse Flash suits up, and he strikes his lightning through Firestorm. He then goes to Barry in Flashtime (they both are moving very fast)- “You failed, Mr. Allen.” Barry is confused, so the Reverse Flash reveals himself to Barry.

BARRY
Dr. Wells? What?


DR. WELLS/ THAWNE
Hello and Goodbye, Barry. That wheelchair was so restricting.


BARRY ALLEN
You killed my mom! I am going to get you!


THAWNE
Well, if you want to save those two right there, you won’t. Run Barry. Run.


Barry sees two people falling from the sky - one Ronnie and another an older fellow - and saves them. When he returns, Eddie is gone, as is Dr. Wells.

The two people who fell are Ronnie Raymond and Martin Stein. They were Firestorm, and neither was in control. Barry and Iris embrace, Cisco is horrified, Caitlin is unconscious, both Eddie and Wally are now missing, and Firestorm is confused. They are going to have to rebuild STAR Labs from the ground up, as there is nothing left. The movie ends with them standing in the rubble of STAR Labs.

A/N: And, that concludes the film!

In the mid-credits scene, we see Wally West sitting scared in the rubble of STAR Labs. He reveals that he has been here for what felt like years - nobody could see or hear him. We look and see that he is talking to Dr. Wells and both are moving super fast - in Flashtime. “Let me help you Walter. I know how to treat this.” Dr. Wells helps Wally calm down, and slow him down.

DR. WELLS
Now, Walter. Barry Allen can help you more. Tell him that I sent you out of good faith. Tell him… I’m not your enemy anymore, Mr. Allen. There is a reason I trained you.


In the second post credits scene, Eddie sits with Eobard an underground bunker. Eobard is Eddie’s distant descendant. Eobard says that destiny has to proceed the way it should’ve without his assistance, so he hands Eddie a card and tells Eddie to contact her to enact his revenge on the mysterious Flash:

Patty Spivot
Cobalt Squadron Leader - Cobalt Green
RANDOM PHONE NUMBER HERE

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