One Sentence Competition - Season 4 Episode 2

Which format of One Sentence Comp do you prefer?

  • The original format (prompts due at 11:59, prompts posted at midnight, reviews following day @ 6pm

    Votes: 1 7.7%
  • The current format (prompts due at 8:59, reviews posted @ 11pm, prompt at midnight

    Votes: 12 92.3%

  • Total voters
    13
  • Poll closed .

Disneylover152

Well-Known Member
Original Poster
PRACTICE PROMPT
DISNEY CRUISE LINE

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As we are counting down the days until we are traveling around the world, it is time for you to travel to Disneyland! And what better way to travel than the Disney Cruise Line! So as you are traveling from your hometown to Disneyland Resort, you are completing an amazing practice prompt on your ship!

-Background Information-
The Disney Cruise Line is creating 3 new ships, all with new experiences as well as returning favorites.

-Challenge-
Your job is to create an original experience, never seen on a Disney Cruise Line before. Whether it be a restaurant, themed water slide, a show, or something else! The sea is the limit!

-Bonus-
Create a themed deck in which your experience will reside on. For example, if you create a restaurant themed to The Princess and the Frog, it could reside on the New Orleans deck. Explain in 1 sentence (no more, no less)

-Rules-
You may use between 1 and 3 sentences and up to 1 image. The deadline is Sunday, March 18, 2018 at 11:59 EST. Critiques will come the next day, with Challenge 1 being posted that day as well.

-Tips-
K.I.S.S. – Keep it simple, silly. Try not to complicate or overthink things too much. It’s a simple, casual competition – there are no eliminations. Propose as you please!

-Judging Criteria-
Is it creative?
Is it (generally) realistic?
Does it fit thematically/visually?

-Reminders-
This is just a Practice Prompt, so no permanent points and no pressure. This is just something to hold us over until the competition officially starts, as well as give the newcomers a practice prompt.

Follow the rules, posted here!

Good luck everyone! If you have questions, don’t be afraid to ask. Now go imagineer!
 
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mharrington

Well-Known Member
Okay, here's my idea for a new stage show, which I don't believe has ever been done on a Disney ship or anywhere else. It's a stage show version of the Disney classic "Pinocchio".

Three word description:

It's a straightforward retelling of the story, condensed and simplified in the interest of a stage show. The best way to describe it is to put the two segments of the movie from the old Disney On Parade show (there were TWO "Pinocchio" scenes there!), and put them together.

Image (for puppet show scene):
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NOTE: I looked it up, and I found out that one of the ships has a stage show featuring a scene from "Pinocchio" as part of a larger show in general, but not an entire show devoted exclusively to this movie.
 
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DisneyFan18

Well-Known Member
La Fonda de Elena

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Remy’s, at Disney Fantasy, will be closing this Fall, as a new Pixar’s Coco themed restaurant will be taking its place; La Fonda de Elena.

Since she was a child, Elena Rivera dreamt of opening a restaurant that showcased the authentic taste of the Mexican Food to the world, however, after being taught the way of the Riveras by Mamma Imelda herself, Elena choose to give up her dream for the life of a shoemaker; now that Miguel helped her remember the importance of following our dreams, she decided to take the risk, you’ll be able to join Abuelita on her adventure starting from the Summer of 2019.

As expected, Mamma Imelda and Héctor couldn’t be more proud of Miguel and Elena, since they followed their dreams without forgetting the importance of family, and when the day comes, Mamma Imelda will be sure to tell them so.
Bonus:
Cancún Bay, will be full of color and vibrancy, as it will feature a similar nighttime ambiance to the Mexico Pavilion at Epcot; alongside La Fonda de Elena, you'll also be able to enjoy a Margarita Bar, whose name will be announced as we get closer to its opening, a stage where Mariachis will be performing from time to time, some Mexican Art exhibits, and a secret entrance to the Land of the Dead, where a state of the art playground will be found.
 

kmbmw777

Well-Known Member
CANTO BLIGHT SPACEPORT
A New Deck for a New Fleet

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Enjoy the Canto Blight Casino, which is an elaborately themed arcade that includes many virtual reality games (an epic flight simulator) as well as the traditional ones (Pacman, Fix it Felix).

The arcade/casino also features a signature dining restaurant called "Calrissian's" and a bar called "the Rose."

BONUS: The Deck features the world of Star Wars and a smaller version of Star Tours simulator.
 
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AceAstro

Well-Known Member
The Muppet Show... On Water!

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In 2021, a new Disney Cruise Line ship will join the fleet which also happens to be the 40th anniversary of the end of the original Muppet Show that brought these lovable characters into popular culture history.

This show will have the classic Muppet show feel including the intro song, Veterinarian Hospital, Muppet News Flash, At The Dance, and more (it is important to note that there was an old show titled "Muppets Ahoy!" back in 2006 but that show focused more on the ship while this show will focus more on the old show)!

There will be 1-2 shows every night at approximately 35 minutes long due to scene transitions (the original was 22 plus commercials) and feature new special guests after every port of call stop to allow fresh guests every few nights.

Bonus:
A new Toontown-themed deck will feature everyone's favourite Mickey Mouse and co. characters!​
 

michmousefan

Well-Known Member
Dumbo at Sea

You've ridden Dumbo, The Flying Elephant at Disney Parks around the world, but you have yet to ride it on a Disney Ship! Perched atop the highest deck, this special version of the Magic Kingdom classic will allow riders to soar in the air, up and down, feeling the sea air in their faces.

Oh well... it's practice, right? At least it would boost Dramamine sales.
 

Magic Feather

Well-Known Member
Moana: Journey to the Realm of Monsters
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In one of the most meta things that The Walt Disney Company has done, while onboard their boats, guests have the ability to experience the first boat ride on a boat with the Journey of Moana. Guests will board their island rafts before plunging two stories into the realm of monsters, which is brought to life through stunning blacklight effects. Guests will wander past creatures, and escape the clutches of a 10 ft tall Tamatoa, before ascending a vertical lift for a village celebration finale.

Bonus: Guests can visit Motonui Marketplace, home of South Seas shopping and dining, where guests can also board, and embark on Moana: Journey to the Realm of Monsters.
 

Disneylover152

Well-Known Member
Original Poster
PROMPT #1
DISNEYLAND PARK

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Your Disney Cruise Ship has just taken you to Walt Disney’s original Magic Kingdom, Disneyland Park. This magical kingdom is where your dreams come true, and you can get more happy as you sail with pirates, explore exotic jungles, meet fairytale princesses, dive under the ocean, and rocket through the stars.

-Background Information-
As some of us know, Disney is creating a tiny project called Star Wars- Galaxy’s Edge. This 14 acre land takes place on the original planet Batuu, which is “a remote outpost on the galaxy’s edge was once a busy crossroads along the old sub-lightspeed trade routes, but its prominence was bypassed by the rise of hyperspace travel”.

Meanwhile, lands away is Tomorrowland, a bustling galactic spaceport where you can fight the evil emperor Zurg or soar through a galaxy far far away.

Tomorrowland is full of Star Wars experiences, including Star Wars Launch Bay and the famous Star Tours- The Adventures Continue.

-Challenge-
Since Star Wars is getting its own land, it's time for Star Tours- The Adventures Continue to stop giving flights. Create a new ride to replace Star Tours- The Adventures Continue. Your only requirement is must still remain a simulator. But other than that, you are free to do whatever! Have an original character like Figment, or create an IP ride. Your choice! Have fun!

-Bonus-
Create a new movie to be shown where Star Wars Path of the Jedi is currently showing. It must use 4D effects and be themed to an IP. Describe in 1 sentence!

-Rules-
You may use between 1 and 3 sentences and up to 1 image. The deadline is Friday, March 23, 2018 at 11:59 EST. Critiques will come following.

-Please Note-
Critiques may not be posted immediately, since @disney forever and I will be working on them together. We apologize for the inconvenience.

-Tips-
K.I.S.S. – Keep it simple, silly. Try not to complicate or overthink things too much. It’s a simple, casual competition – there are no eliminations. Propose as you please!

-Judging Criteria-
Creativity- Is it creative?
Detail- Do you make the most of your sentences allotted? Do I understand what your submission is about?
Realism- Is it (generally) realistic? Is it something Disney will/could build? Are there patents related to your submission?
Theme- Does it fit thematically? Does it fit visually?
Originality- Is it original?
Effort- Is effort shown?

-Reminders-
This is the first prompt where you points will be added. As a reminder, everyone who submits something as well as follows the rules will get 1 point. 3 awards are given for each challenge. The three awards are Bronze (+1 points), Silver (+2 points), and Gold (+3 points). Everyone who submits gets a point, but Bronze, Silver, and Gold winners get additional points.

When using an IP, the IP must be owned by The Walt Disney Company (Disney Animation, Walt Disney Studios, Pixar Animation Studios, Lucas Films, 20th Century Fox, Marvel), OR it must be an original IP. No exceptions (unless otherwise noted)

Follow the rules, posted here!

Good luck everyone! If you have questions, don’t be afraid to ask. Now go imagineer!
 
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DisneyFan18

Well-Known Member
PROMPT #1
DISNEYLAND PARK

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Your Disney Cruise Ship has just taken you to Walt Disney’s original Magic Kingdom, Disneyland Park. This magical kingdom is where your dreams come true, and you can get more happy as you sail with pirates, explore exotic jungles, meet fairytale princesses, dive under the ocean, and rocket through the stars.

-Background Information-
As some of us know, Disney is creating a tiny project called Star Wars- Galaxy’s Edge. This 14 acre land takes place on the original planet Batuu, which is “a remote outpost on the galaxy’s edge was once a busy crossroads along the old sub-lightspeed trade routes, but its prominence was bypassed by the rise of hyperspace travel”.

Meanwhile, lands away is Tomorrowland, a bustling galactic spaceport where you can fight the evil emperor Zurg or soar through a galaxy far far away.

Tomorrowland is full of Star Wars experiences, including Star Wars Launch Bay and the famous Star Tours- The Adventures Continue.

-Challenge-
Since Star Wars is getting its own land, it's time for Star Tours- The Adventures Continue to stop giving flights. Create a new ride to replace Star Tours- The Adventures Continue. Your only requirement is must still remain a simulator. But other than that, you are free to do whatever! Have an original character like Figment, or create an IP ride. Your choice! Have fun!

-Bonus-
Create a new movie to be shown where Star Wars Path of the Jedi is currently showing. It must use 4D effects and be themed to an IP. Describe in 1 sentence!

-Rules-
You may use between 1 and 3 sentences and up to 1 image. The deadline is Friday, March 23, 2018 at 11:59 EST. Critiques will come following.

-Please Note-
Critiques may not be posted immediately, since @disney forever and I will be working on them together. We apologize for the inconvenience.

-Tips-
K.I.S.S. – Keep it simple, silly. Try not to complicate or overthink things too much. It’s a simple, casual competition – there are no eliminations. Propose as you please!

-Judging Criteria-
Is it creative?
Is it (generally) realistic?
Does it fit thematically/visually?

-Reminders-
This is the first prompt where you points will be added. As a reminder, everyone who submits something as well as follows the rules will get 1 point. 3 awards are given for each challenge. The three awards are Bronze (+1 points), Silver (+2 points), and Gold (+3 points). Everyone who submits gets a point, but Bronze, Silver, and Gold winners get additional points.

When using an IP, the IP must be owned by The Walt Disney Company (Disney Animation, Walt Disney Studios, Pixar Animation Studios, Lucas Films, 20th Century Fox, Marvel), OR it must be an original IP. No exceptions (unless otherwise noted)

Follow the rules, posted here!

Good luck everyone! If you have questions, don’t be afraid to ask. Now go imagineer!
Big Hero 6 will be taking over Star Tours, I’ll add more details soon-ish
 

Disneylover152

Well-Known Member
Original Poster
Just out of curiosity, @DisneyForever and @Disneylover152 will we be getting critiques for the practice round? I know it doesn't matter, but it also helps you guys as the hosts get into the swing of things!!

Yes, you will! @DisneyForever and I will be writing them later today. They will be up this evening. Due to our schedules, we can't write them immediately at midnight, so they will be up within a day after submissions are due.
 

DisneyFan18

Well-Known Member
Yes, you will! @DisneyForever and I will be writing them later today. They will be up this evening. Due to our schedules, we can't write them immediately at midnight, so they will be up within a day after submissions are due.
Thanks, I’m eager to read mine, as it’s my first submission to a One Sentence Competition! So I want to know my areas of opportunity before beginning to work on the first prompt! :D
 
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AceAstro

Well-Known Member
Muppets Thru Outer Space!!

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We first have to be honest with ourselves in the fact that Muppetvision 3D isn't going to return to DCA anytime soon but with saying that I don't think that having no Muppets in the entire resort is a good idea either considering all the work that Eisner went through to acquire them in the first place; therefore, the Muppets will take over the Star Tours building once Star Wars: Galaxy Edge opens to bring these lovable characters back to the park.

One thing that still fits the Tomorrowland theme (for now) is recreational space travel and Star Tours does that quite well (while also fitting in the Star Wars IP beautifully); the Muppets see this open opportunity as a chance for them to make their own space travel company to eventually build a new theatre on the Moon where their new shows will take place.

Muppets Thru Outer Space (As a mini callback to Adventures Thru Inner Space), will allow guests to load into a Muppet-fied rocketships (looking eerily similar to the Starspeeder), including a very important safety spiel from none other than Sam the Eagle, and have their brave captain, Gonzo the Great, guide them to the moon and back safely( about as "safe" as Gonzo can be) while showing the sights and sounds of the universe among us.

BOUNS:

Mickey's Philharmagic will finally make it's West Coast debut including new scenes from newer Disney Movies including Frozen, Moana, and more!​
 
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