Bender123
Well-Known Member
I prefer my kids don't see pirates as heros. The auctioning off of people shows them that pirates aren't good. Depicting them as just auctioning off goods doesn't give a clear picture of who/what pirates are. The scene they are destroying really brings home the point that pirates aren't good. Without that scene the point is missed.
The story is more than just a bit muddled now...You see the pirates all dead as a warning to those that seek money and wealth, then you flash back to pirates attacking a town trying to find Jonny Depp and his map, the pirates...have...an...auction (OK...why aren't they just stealing stuff...they are pirates), then the pirates drink, sing and...get beaten by...women with brooms? (Wait...what?)...then the pirates are in jail and Jonny Depp has...all...the...money? How? Why are the pirates in jail, now? If the pirates never got the treasure and gold, then how did they get cursed and all end up steering a ghost ship and dead on a beach?
See how these changes don't make sense? The only way this story makes sense is to just call it a series of scenes with little to nothing to do with each other...Just things happen and its done.
Any one change doesn't affect the story too much, but the sum total of the changes make the narrative broken and senseless...