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Turtle, The challenge was to make an attraction. I feel you gave me 3 quarters retail and one quarter attraction. I have also noticed something you tend to do when describing rides. You often compare to other attractions (e.g.
Imagine the Legend of Jack Sparrow and Poseidon's Fury had a baby). This is a bad habit. If you want your attractions to stand out and have people visualizing them in their heads you need to describe in detail. Back to Gracy Quarters, the idea of having to wait in line to enter the area sounds rather annoying. How exactly do you plan to keep track of the number of people inside? I think a separate line for the walk through only would have sufficed. I'm all for expanding Haunted Mansion but you just missed the target on this one.
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BryceM, Excellent post. The attraction was presented very well and with a couple story adjustments I could imagine it in a Disney park. But, there are still a couple problems. First problem, you didn't explain how the skeleton would work. I assumed it was an AA in which case I would have loved for you to explain how you got a skeleton AA to work! It was a major part of the attraction that I felt had little explanation. The second problem, and biggest problem, is the location. Sure Japan has Samurais and the ride takes place in Japan, but is World Showcase the best spot for it? If you look at all the other World Showcase attractions they celebrate the culture and beauty of each nation, your attraction just has some cursed samurai skeletons. Then again, I couldn't think of anywhere else on property. Nice post.
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Matt7187, "
And we are all now happy" Sorry Matt but I'm not. This is one of your most lacking posts in my opinion. First problem, it was unnecessary. American Adventure takes in a lot of people and is a great show, why change it? Second problem, your description is almost not there at all. You told me what each scene was but there was no detail what so ever. Keep in mind you're explaining this to an Australian whose knowledge of American history is pretty much what I can pick up at the Disney parks. For the next challenge I really want you to push your boundaries and take your descriptive writing to the next level. No more of this categories with a basic summary stuff, I wanna see what you can really do!
1 point because I was so harsh.
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ChampDisney, I'm not sure whether I like or hate this. Your descriptive skills were average and you missed the most important chunk of Walt's life (creation of the feature films). The again, I think it could be a cool way for guests to discover Walt's life. The idea of an AA Walt to me is just creepy but. To sum it all up, your presentation and concept was average, but I think a short film would still do him more justice.
1 point because YOLO
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ctxak98, It is most likely due to your exams but this might be one of your least memorable posts. The concept itself is very different and could work, but six shows per day just wouldn't be worth the money it would take to build. As for the show itself, it may be due to your lack of detail in this post but the story just seemed boring. So we eat, walk through a few rooms, investigate a gun shot, then find the bad guy in the cellar? Not really worth the hour or two you're giving up in my opinion. I really expected much more from you.
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Sam4D23, The challenge said guests couldn't be in a ride vehicle. I suggest reading the rules next time. (Worst part is I just wrote you a whole paragraph about how I like the idea then realized it broke the rules)
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jdmdisney99, Although lacking in detail I can fully visualize your show in my head, and it's good. However, I would make some adjustments. I'd ditch the "band slowly gets better" thing. Guests will just think your band sucks. Also to help increase the atmosphere how about some pyrotechnics? Nothing major just a couple fizzes and pops. Well done.