Team Younger, Project Three: SYWTBAI Season 14

Pi on my Cake

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In the Parks
Yes
Sounds like a plan! :)
Great! So, you have the town, magic feather has the first half, I have the queue, @ThatGuyFromFlorida has editing and correcting inconsistencies, and @IAmNotAHufflepuff has the presentation.

We still need the little part with the bride floating after the town scene and the hitchicking phantom. Any volunteers? @mharrington perhaps? Or @ThatGuyFromFlorida or @IAmNotAHufflepuff if either of you wanted to do some writing in addition to your fantastic brainstorming and editing/presenting (respectively).
 

Pi on my Cake

Well-Known Member
In the Parks
Yes
Great! So, you have the town, magic feather has the first half, I have the queue, @ThatGuyFromFlorida has editing and correcting inconsistencies, and @IAmNotAHufflepuff has the presentation.

We still need the little part with the bride floating after the town scene and the hitchicking phantom. Any volunteers? @mharrington perhaps? Or @ThatGuyFromFlorida or @IAmNotAHufflepuff if either of you wanted to do some writing in addition to your fantastic brainstorming and editing/presenting (respectively).
This board with the bride.
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Pi on my Cake

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In the Parks
Yes
Maybe... We could also include a bit about how she doesn't believe in St. nick or Krampus.
Added it! This is coming along nicely!

I'm not sure how the teams will divide up after this round, but I have definitely enjoyed working with everyone here on Team Younger (plus the couple people from Team Cap who joined us on this prompt)!
 

IAmNotAHufflepuff

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So, we have about 7 hours until it is due. Make sure you're stuff is ready soon. @IAmNotAHufflepuff are you good to post tonight? Haven't heard much from you the last few days

I'll do it.. Everything just needs to be done by 9.

Sorry I've been gone. I had school and a lot of studying over the past week (My standardized writing test is next week) and I haven't had the time or motivation to be active a lot. This being a useless round doesn't help either.
 

Pi on my Cake

Well-Known Member
In the Parks
Yes
I'll do it.. Everything just needs to be done by 9.

Sorry I've been gone. I had school and a lot of studying over the past week (My standardized writing test is next week) and I haven't had the time or motivation to be active a lot. This being a useless round doesn't help either.
I get that. Life is life. And this is non-elimination round.
 

IAmNotAHufflepuff

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I can post if you need to go before it's done. I work nights, so I'm used to staying up crazy late lol

That would be splendid! I'll post at 9:15 whether I can do it or not. :D

Also, what exactly is done? I'd appreciate it, so I can know what order everything is supposed to go.

Lastly, I think I pulled off the winning deal over at Imagineering Shark Tank. ;):cool:
 

CookieMouse

Well-Known Member
Fixed Version:
-stretching room-


The four paintings in the stretching room of Phantom Manor usually show the Bride (and sometimes the groom) before stretching to show various calamities befalling them. As with the Foyer, the Stretching Room is decked out it Christmas decor. Since the holiday edition of Phantom Manor does not focus on the bride, neither does the stretching room.

The new focus of both the ride and the stretching room paintings is young Henrietta Ravenswood (Named for her father, Henry). Henrietta is 14 years old. She's a mischievous young girl and is always causing trouble. No one ever corrects or punishes her because her family, the Ravenswoods, are the richest family in Thuner Mesa and her father's gold mine employs half the town. So, Henrietta has become a bit of a brat. Well, perhaps a bit more than a bit of a brat. On top of all that, she doesn't believe in Father Christmas anymore, and she never believed in Krampus. She will definitely believe in Krampus shortly though.

One painting is Henrietta in a family portrait with her older sister (the bride), her mother, and her father, Henry Ravenswood. As the room stretches, the painting stretches to reveal Henrietta stealing money from her father's pocket. Another painting features Henrietta looking at nature. As the room stretches, this painting stretches to reveal her using a Magnifying glass to burn insects . The third painting features Henrietta standing in Thunder Mesa. As the room stretches, the painting stretches to reveal her holding a sling shot as the townsfolk of Thunder Mesa are nursing wounds and trying to fix broken pots and things destroyed by the sling shot. The final painting features Henrietta in fancy clothes standing in the ballroom of Ravenswood Manor. As the room stretches, the painting stretches to reveal her covered in mud from the waist down and it seems she has tracked mud all over the fancy ballroom. A disgruntled butler stands in the background surveying the mess he will have to clean knowing Henrietta would never offer to help clean up after herself.

Similar to Haunted Mansion Holiday, projection effects are used on the roof to transform it. It now appears to be a glass roof revealing a snowy night.

A cast member ushers you into the stretching room and advises you to enter all the way in to the room filling up all available space while staying away from the walls. The voice from the Foyer is heard once again. As the narrator speaks, snow begins to coat the roof.

"The good girls and boys are given gifts from Father Christmas every year.

But what of the naughty? Do they have a comeuppance to fear?

A dark spirit who punishes the wicked every holiday season.

If you wonder why you should behave, this is the reason:

A monster even the Phantom does fear,

Is coming to the Manor this year...

Because young Henrietta Ravenswood has never once done something Righteous, on Christmas Eve night, she will be haunted and hunted... by the Krampus."


By the end of the poem, the snow has completely covered the "glass roof." When the narrator says "Krampus," the lights flicker,the sound of Thunder can be heard, and much of the snow shakes off. The only snow remaining forms a shape that will soon become very familiar to guests:the spirit that watches over the sinners of the world. The figure that goes ahead of the Krampus, reporting back to him. The eyes and ears for the Christmas beast (Ala Elf On The Shelf).While its name is unknown, its form is very distinct. The Goat Skull will stalk guests throughout their ride,and that same ghastly goat skull is the shape formed in the snow on the glass roof above..........
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CookieMouse

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Fixed Edition
-Foyer-

"You're time has come." The cast member says as he escorts you to the Foyer at the entrance to Ravenswood Manor, as they remind you to move all the way in order to fill up the dead space.
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In the holiday edition of Phantom Manor, the portrait of the Bride is replaced by a large painting of Ravenswood Manor on an idealic Christmas morning. Snow is scattered on the ground, the house is well decorated, family appears to be visiting. The perfect Christmas in the perfect manor with what appears to be the perfect family. A truly lovely painting.
Of course. The foyer is decked out in holiday decor. A voice is heard. It recites the famous opening to the Haunted Mansion/Phantom Manor, but it is changed to reflect the Holiday season.

"When snowflakes fall from frozen skies,
and strange and frightening boughs of holly deck all the halls.
Whenever candlelights flicker from the centerpiece of a grand family meal.
That is the time for Christmas presents,
And for Krampus to come for his holiday fright!"


The voice cackles as the doors to the stretching room opens. While the opening narration is being recited, the portrait of the manor slowly transforms. The manor decays into its current state. The happy Christmas morning fades into a dark Christmas night. The family in the house are replaced by dark shadows. Silhouetted against the moon, you can just scarcely see a figure. Is it Father Christmas come with gifts for all the good girls and boys? No.
You notice that it has a more monstrous physique. It seemed to be a mixture between a goat, a man, and a demon. The silhouette is small, but unmistakable.

Father Christmas is not visiting Ravenswood Manor tonight.
 

CookieMouse

Well-Known Member
-Changing Portrait Hall-
Fixed Edition


Upon leaving the Stretching Room, you enter another room, except this room features various changing paintings. Once again, this room is covered in traditional holiday decor.
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In the holiday edition of Phantom Manor, the paintings will feature people of various ages doing a variety of rather naughty activities. When they transform, the paintings show how they were punished as the Goat Skull watches on (tucked away in the background of the paintings. Perhaps just a skull in the ground, perhaps a shape in the clouds in the sky). One example is a painting of an outlaw holding a stick of dynamite in his hand. When transformed, the painting shows the landscape as well as the outlaw covered in ash. The Goat Skull's form can be seen as a shape in the smoke.

The painting of the bride at the end of the hall is replaced with a painting of Henritetta.

-Busts-
The busts whose gaze follows you are featured in the queue for Phantom Manor. During the holiday version, the busts remain mostly unchanged, with the exception of title plaques. These will be done in a similar style to the tombstones outside Haunted Mansion (short rhymes, dark humor). They briefly describe the person the bust is of, and what kind of ironic justice they received from the Krampus.

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Her entire fortune, Barbara was known to have stole.
She was found Christmas morning, buried in her illgotten gold.
 
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