Suchomimus
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mr. Blue Sky
mr. Blue Sky
I'm late to respond, sorry about that. That's very understandable, sorry about not reading between the lines there, you did a great job with it! With that in mind, The Dodo idea was a very cool and fun idea in the end. It's understandable, sometimes writing yourself in a corner happens. Don't beat yourself up about it.The answer to all of your questions/ confusions is time travel. The Dodo is there because of it. And I agree that the Armory is bad. I kind of wrote myself into a corner with wanting a second lounge and I had no idea how to make the room interesting haha.
While I loved playing, it feels like a huge weight just fell off my shoulder, especially since I Am still doing school, due to my procrastination...Reviews will be posted throughout the day, cullminating in a podcast at 8PM Eastern where we'll reveal the winning team and the advantage they get in the next project, as well as this round's PoMVP winner. In the meantime, I'm going to go ahead and cut the double elimination suspense now. Let me start by saying this is the first round where there was absolutely no one to eliminate who simply didn't show up. Everyone left on the board has contributed to and made their mark on the season in a pretty significant way already. It's with a heavy heart that this round in particular has to be a double elimination. Alphabetically, we'll start with NuCitra.
The first nominee from NuCitra is...
@DashHaber. While you've been a pretty consistent presence so far this season, timing wasn't on your side this round. You did warn your team you'd be gone which is a good step, but the fact of the matter is out of everyone on NuCitra you contributed the least to the overall concept. Busy schedules doesn't guarantee safety, as balancing that sort of stuff has always been part of the game.
The second nominee from NuCitra is...
@Brer Panther. This is a pretty cut and dry case. Your concept art is good and adds to the project, but you've been hiding behind the artwork since the first round. One of the big things I stress this season is working well in a group setting, and while I can't say you're problematic in that regard you certainly don't contribute much to the brainstorming and creative process compared to pretty much everyone else left in the cast.
The person eliminated from NuCitra is...
@Brer Panther. While you technically contributed more than Dash did this round, I'm basing this elimination off of combined activity throughout the season. You made a post in your brainstorming thread apologizing for lack of activity in this season, and honestly there's nothing to be sorry for. It is what it is and I'm sure you had other stuff going on, and you decided to lean on your art which is a good skill to have in this game. Had you been more consistent in the brainstorming throughout the season, this would probably be a different result. As it stands now though, I can't justify you advancing further when art pretty much exclusively what you've contributed in the six rounds you've played. Thanks for playing this season and as always please feel free to reach out if you see a prompt you'd like to be a guest judge for.
Let's move on to NuOrbis. The first NuOrbis nominee is...
@ThatGuyFromFlorida. You've had a hell of a run through six rounds. Going from someone who was frankly problematic to the brainstorming process in the first couple rounds to slowly easing into being more flexible with the brainstorming and then in project five really coming into your own with the instrumentals as well as having a consistent voice in the brainstorming. That being said, this project you pretty much dropped the ball in a big way. After voting for the theme, you straight up disappeared and never bothered to sign up for a job. It's hard to look past a team member encouraging you in the group PM and you still not coming around. You've been a wonderful pre-merge character this season, but that's going to be hard to look past.
The second nominee from NuOrbis is...
@gam3rprincess. In very different ways from ThatGuy, you've also had a bit of a rocky road throughout these six rounds. While you excelled in the mini golf project and led your team to victory, there were a few prompts you very much struggled with. That being said, even in your struggles you've always come out on top. This round your nomination is not for a lack of you doing stuff but simply because were at a point in the competition where EVERYONE is firing on all cylinders. I think now is the time where newer players like @montydysquith-navarro and @NigelChanning09 are going to have to step up their somewhat quiet games if they want to make it past the heavy hitters remaining in the cast going into the merge. This nomination is not a slight on you but more an examination of the true threat level of a lot of the players left on the board.
The person eliminated from NuOrbis is...
@ThatGuyFromFlorida. You've had a great if bumpy run this season, and I've had a blast watching your highs and lows. If you would have contributed as much to this project as you did to the last project, this could have been a very different result. As it stands now though, you were the only person left in the cast who didn't contribute to the finished product in some way. Your fatal, game-ending move was simply not responding to @Sharon&Susan in the group PM. I can't overlook that. If you're not engaged with your own teammates, I can't guarantee you'll be engaged with the game as a whole going forward. This was an especially easy decision when contrasted against the other nominee who has had their ups and downs in terms of activity but is always a positive influence on the team in some way. Make no mistake, out of all the eliminations so far you've BY FAR left the biggest mark on the season, and should be proud of that. Again, any prompt you see in the future that you'd like to guest judge on, just say the word!
While I loved playing, it feels like a huge weight just fell off my shoulder, especially since I Am still doing school, due to my procrastination...
Stay tuned for the podcast. I'm sure Tiki and I will talk about the genesis of this next prompt.My feedback is going to be reflective of all the judges, so for that reason once I post the scores on my end the winner of the project will be announced and we'll be able to move on to the next round where the winning team will have to make a pivotal choice. Before we start, I just want to acknowledge how much I appreciate that this post-swap game has very much turned into a mini sequel to "Purists vs. Innovators". The two teams have taken radically different approaches in both projects...one aiming for old school tried and true concepts of Imagineering, and the other aiming for presentation flourish and outside the box ideas. Who will come out ahead this round?
NuCitra
Not even going to beat around the bush here, for me personally this project is perfect. Every element of our grading scale is notched up to a ten for me. It's a wildly creative concept executed with an acute sense of realism. The detail is in the Goldilocks "just right!" category of not too much text but enough to get it across. The presentation...I honestly don't know how you DON'T give this a 10/10 based on @goofyyukyukyuk17's JAW-DROPPING queue model alone, not to mention @Brer Panther's excellent concept art, the ride through slide show, and Pi's work with blueprints. Team work was firing on all cynalders with everyone contributing something to the overall picture, and Brer Panther being eliminated is by far the most active and engaged someone's been with a project who's gone on to be eliminated so far. It's going to set a precedent in the season that there's nowhere to hide, and each and every person in the final 11 is here not just to play, but to WIN.
Overall I'm just floored with this thing. The only knock I was going to have against you was realism because of the Alien Encounter factor, but then you went to great lengths to explain the heartrate technology and suddenly the idea of cast members being at the exit to calm crying children is awesome and an integral part of why I love the overall concept. I definitely get some Mystery Lodge vibes from this thing, mixed with an obvious likeness to Jaws in the ride system and pacing as well as some Alien Encounter thrown in for good measure. All in all it's an absolutely ingenious concept that I think has the potential to be the most adult-orientated thrill ride at Magic Kingdom yet check boxes that young kids can enjoy. I'm picturing this fitting into the park similar to how Indiana Jones fits into Disneyland. While my over the top praise kind of spoils the result, I can't help but deem this easily my favorite project so far this season. Every single person on this team should be proud of their accomplishments here.
Creativity: 10/10
Realism: 10/10
Detail: 10/10
Presentation: 10/10
Group Work: 10/10
Total: 50/50
NuOrbis
You know that meme that's been going around about Star Trek: Piccard about "sheer *bleep*ing Hubris"? Well, that's pretty much my thoughts when you decided to throw Minecraft into the mix. Not gonna lie, I was rather let down by this one. Not just because I feel like this team was at the tipping point of choosing far more interesting concepts like a 1950's racing dark ride for Knott's or a 360* 1917 dark ride. Instead, you let presentation sort of dictate things over anything else. While I appreciate that Outbound invited the judges onto the server, I'm an old man who has a really cheap computer so I couldn't do it even if I wanted to. Here's my real problem with this project though...All that promise you guys talked up about how to plus this up from the mini golf project? The narration/voice acting, the having multiple team members in the server guiding you through the experience? Yea...Where was THAT project?? Sorry, but by trying to chase the #GameChanger mantra, I feel like you created a presentation that's actually less than the sum of its parts.
First off, let's talk placement.Middle School Campus: The Theme ParkWalt Disney Studios is certainly a good fit for something like this as it desperately needs...well...pretty much anything. I also did enjoy the timeline stuff with Disney buying Minecraft, the Pixar franchise, the concern in overlap between the movie and ride. All that was really creative. When it comes to the ride though...all it really was is a trip through some biomes. I mean, nothing wrong with that persay, but I didn't really get any more of a sense of adventure from this than I did from the mini golf project and altogether this project came off feeling like a bit of a repeat of that. The video was BEGGING for narration, even if it was from Stereotypical Australian Youtuber. The text added some context to the ridethrough, but it got to be a pain switching back and forth to get the full drift of what the ride was going for. Ultimately, it felt like a slightly expanded upon version of what many of these team members already did with the mini golf project. Minecraft is popular for sure, but I don't think it's got universal appeal in the same way Nintendo does. Because of that, I thought it was a little much to say that adding a flat ride and restaurant in phase two would make this compete with Super Nintendo World. Minecraft simply doesn't have the level of variety in its visual storytelling to compete with Nintendo World. You should have ran with this project and made it entirely its own thing. This project is the best example so far that the grading scale is there for a reason and only 10 points can be gotten out of presentation, so divide your resources wisely.
Creativity: 7/10 - I just can't get that into Minecraft when a lot of the concepts were already used in the mini golf project and the team passed on FAR more creative concepts in favor of this.
Realism: 8/10 - The ride itself is realistic enough with good placement. While I appreciated the alternate timeline, I don't really buy that Pixar would have a Minecraft cinematic universe when they're very much trying to keep to original films for the new decade and they've never done an adaptation of anything.
Detail: 9/10 - It's all there, I just think half the detail is in the doc and the other half is in the visuals and I wish the two were better combined.
Presentation: 9/10 - While I'd like to give this another 10 for the effort that went into it, the fact of the matter is that almost none of the pluses to the presentation brought up with the Minecraft IP actually made their way into the video itself.
Group Work: 8/10 - This team has had a weird dynamic of splitting off and doing their own thing early into the brainstorming process. It hasn't worked for two rounds in a row now. While everyone did contribute something, I feel like working more closely with each other on individual components of the project is a key ingredient this group is missing that the other team has nailed.
Total: 41/50
The other TMNT members will be providing additional feedback throughout the day as well as the previously announced podcast at 8PM Eastern, but with all that in mind this project is a bit of a landslide victory for NuCitra. PoMVP goes to @goofyyukyukyuk17 for his amazing queue model. Truly carrying on that #GameChanger spirit this season has been predicated on. Now, let's move on to the FINAL pre-merge project. The loosing team of this project will eliminate one person. The person eliminated this next round will be the last player who will NOT get a seat on the jury and get to vote for the winner at the end of the game. MAKE. SURE. IT'S. NOT. YOU.
Project Seven: A Splash of Placemaking
You asked for it, you got it! For this project, we'll be taking a look at the surrounding areas around Disneyland and Walt Disney World's Splash Mountain attraction. As we all know, Princess and the Frog will soon be moving into the Brers home, changing the landscape of both the lands the Splash Mountains reside in forever. Both parks have challenges. While Disneyland has the advantage of the New Orleans Square setting, it also now is in a Critter Country land that barely has anything to do with Critters. Most of Critter Country is Winnie the Pooh right now, and that's clearly not thematically going to flow with Princess Tiana and company. Meanwhile in Florida while Splash has the benefit of being in more of its own sub-area, it also has the problem of having the equally iconic Big Thunder Mountain Railroad directly across from it...an attraction that has a definitive LACK of a New Orleans bayou flair.
The goal of the project is simple. Create some placemaking and transitions in the areas surrounding either park's Splash Mountain in order to make the switch-over to Princess and the Frog more natural. You are allowed to make changes to attractions in the surrounding area, but be careful with the realism points there and focus more on scenic transitions and the actual land itself. You are NOT allowed to do a full write up of the actual Princess and the Frog attraction but are allowed to elaborate on how the facade, queue, and attraction entrance would function within your new area.
NuCitra, since you won last round you get to pick rather you want to work on Frontierland in Walt Disney World, or Critter Country in Disneyland. Please have your choice made by tonight at the latest. The sooner the better. If not decided on by tomorrow morning, we'll have no choice but to flip a coin for it. So don't loose this advantage and be decisive about this as soon as possible. Good luck teams. This project is due Friday, July 10th at 11:59PM Eastern.
Glad you're not taking the elimination personally. You should definitely be proud of being such a big character with a memorable arc through the first five projects. You sort of fizzled out in the end there, but you will still be a great note in the overall story of the season.
Podcast happening in just a couple minutes
I feel attacked.Since I am PM for NuOrbis I have to nominate people...
I'd like my nominations to be whoever on NuCitra made the "Everything's Super" song. I still catch myself humming it from time to time
I'm disappointed. How else will I make my meme-filled Revenge of the Sith hamilton-inspired rap-play? /s
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Team NuCitra Presents:
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Jazzy Reading Music
Who would have thought that a piece of land deep in the bayou, nestled away from the hustle and bustle of New Orleans, would become a place of delight and wonder?
Said to have been one of the key passage points in the Lewis and Clark Expedition, this intersection of swampland and river would become home to none other than Jean Lafitte, legendary pirate and privateer. In need of a waypoint closer to the mainland for his operations, Jean discovered the destination and founded a settlement there: La Porte D'entree à L'Ouest (translated as The Gateway to the West), or La Porte for short. This settlement was a safe harbor for all sorts of scoundrels who sought to evade the law, from fellow pirates to gamblers dodging their debts. Of course, even a legendary pirate like Lafitte would need people to serve as “mayor” while he was away, preserving the settlement’s traditions even after his passing. Many would manage, but more and more the word of westward expansion brought fear to its townspeople. However, a chance encounter in the 1840s would forever alter the settlement’s fate.
Henri LaTriche, the “mayor” of La Porte at that time, happened to meet a wealthy gentleman stopping off in the town for a night’s rest. Henri initially saw him as his latest mark, striking up conversation as he planned out how to fleece the man of his money in cards. However, as the gentleman talked about his plans to manage a gold mining operation out West and how it was his luck that the town was here to serve as a safe haven before heading West, Henri began thinking of all the wallets that would be passing through the town. He realized something: respectability could bring far more profits into his pocket than any crooked operation. With that, he launched a massive renovation of the town. Gone were the days of serving as just a safe harbor for criminals and thieves! La Porte would become a safe harbor for any travelers, whether those on the way or those seeking to carve out a new life for themselves! True, this mission was fueled by Henri’s greed, but these days, there is no doubting the welcoming atmosphere of the town.
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Protected by the shades of the bayou, La Porte offers a quiet place for a traveler to rest their feet for a moment or two. The sounds of jazz and ragtime float through the air, as guests wander its streets at their own pace. For instance, those in need of a meal might stop by La Cuisinière du Bayou, managed by local chef Sylvain Broussard. Originally born in France, Sylvain grew up in the bayou and found the wonders of its tastes and flavors. Coming from a line of chefs, he has taken the family techniques and mixed them with a Cajun flavor sensation. Be sure to stop by for a bite. Meanwhile, folks in need of a little adventure might stop by the Wilkinson Treasure Expeditions cart. Schemer and veritable con man Nathan E. S. Wilkinson is there peddling tales of the legendary Lewis and Clark Treasure, claiming that his maps can guide folks to the location of riches that had once belonged to the famous explorers. You can stop by and join the quest for this treasure if you like. After all, this has just got to be the latest brand of humbug that Wilkinson is selling to visitors…right?
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Of course, be mindful of wandering too far into the bayou. Hidden in the forests and swamps is a place that the locals call Frog Mountain. Besides the gators and frogs that populate that swampy piece of land, there is something far more powerful said to be there: magic. Some even claim that the land falls under the domain of Mama Odie, the Voodoo queen of the bayou. In any case, wander that part of the bayou at your own caution. You might just see some wondrous sights among the fireflies...or some shadowy friends from the "Other Side".
(Below is a Prezi presentation of our map of La Porte. You can both click through the slides to see images in the order they were intended to be seen along with descriptions, and you can also click and drag the map to explore it for yourself. Enjoy!)
La Porte
Transition Space from Carribbean Plaza to La Porte: Main Visual Theme- This is the Bayou. New Flora are brought over to this underutilized green space to give it the proper visuals of being at the edge of the swamp. Spanish moss hanging down, a Banyan tree in the background,prezi.com
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