Need help with a poem!

marksniles

marksniles

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Hi Disney Fan!
I need your help! My wife and I are renewing our wedding vows this August at the YC Wedding Gazebo. It will be our 10th anniversary. I am making the invitations and I need help with the writing. I'd like to have the invitation read as a poem but with a Disney theme. Can any of you help? Our names are Mark and Mia.

Please help!!!!
Mark
 
chinitopoop

chinitopoop

Member
youre invited to the disney world resort
pack your bags, and leave the passport
join Mark and Mia, on this special day
where they renew their vows in their own disney way....:wave:
 
marksniles

marksniles

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Oh that's great! Is there a way to get the location and time in there? It's at the Yacht Club's Wedding Gazebo at noon Reception to follow at Saratoga Springs Resort.
 
MacDuffieMuppet

MacDuffieMuppet

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Come on, Come all,
To the vow renwal.
Walt Disney World in Orlando,
At the Yacht Club's Wedding Gazebo.
From there Mark and Mia will transport,
to the Saratoga Springs Resort.
The reception is there at noon,
They wish to see you soon!
So pack your bags and get on your way,
Join them for this special day!
 
chinitopoop

chinitopoop

Member
youre invited to the disney world resort
pack your bags, and leave the passports
join Mark and Mia, on this special day
where they renew their vows in their own disney way


the place to meet is the yacht club's weeding gazebo
who knows, we may even need help finding nemo
so dress up nice and we'll see you at noon
in august 2008 is when you'll party with toons

i think its better with the first little poem, and then doing a regular
date
time
place
right under the poem, but its up to you! enjoy your party! hopefully i was able to help a bit
 
wdwmomof3

wdwmomof3

Well-Known Member
I give credit to my 15 year old daughter for this. She loves writing poems.


A dream is a wish your heart makes,
when your fast asleep.
In dreams you will loose your heart ache,
whatever you wish for you keep.
We've shared this dream for ten years now,
and we invite you once again
to witness the magic of our love
and how this dream will never end...

Have faith in your dreams and someday,
your rainbow will come shining through.
Come join Mark & Mia
at Walt Disney World Resort
where magical dreams come true.


If you want her to try something else... let me know. She will be happy to. :)
 
marksniles

marksniles

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wdwmomof3 said:
I give credit to my 15 year old daughter for this. She loves writing poems.


A dream is a wish your heart makes,
when your fast asleep.
In dreams you will loose your heart ache,
whatever you wish for you keep.
We've shared this dream for ten years now,
and we invite you once again
to witness the magic of our love
and how this dream will never end...

Have faith in your dreams and someday,
your rainbow will come shining through.
Come join Mark & Mia
at Walt Disney World Resort
where magical dreams come true.


If you want her to try something else... let me know. She will be happy to. :)
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Ah that is great! I really like the opening that the first post had "You're invited to the Walt Disney World Resort
Pack your bags, but leave your passports
Join Mark and Mia, on this special day
Where they renew their vows on thier own disney way"

I just need a second stanza that includes the location time and date. Maybe we can combine yours and his together somehow.
 
wdwmomof3

wdwmomof3

Well-Known Member
Okay...


noon on what date in August 08. Also do you want the resort listed. Tell us exactly what you want and we can try it right now for ya.:)

We were thinking that the time & date should go inside the invitation with the poem on the outside, or are you doing it like a not post card but all on one sheet?
 
marksniles

marksniles

Member
Original Poster
wdwmomof3 said:
Okay...


noon on what date in August 08. Also do you want the resort listed. Tell us exactly what you want and we can try it right now for ya.:)

We were thinking that the time & date should go inside the invitation with the poem on the outside, or are you doing it like a not post card but all on one sheet?
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I sent you an e-mail.
Mark
 

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