5-7-5

tenchu · Oct 10, 2003

A thread for haiku
This could be one couldn't it?
Here's the first entry

(plagerised)

garyhoov · Oct 10, 2003

Tenchu is Crazy
We don't understand Haiku
Surely this will fail

tenchu · Oct 10, 2003

Young mister hoover
A very hairy person
Surely jealous, see?

wdwhoneymooner · Oct 10, 2003

hmm, I don't get it
Must I keep it five, seven
and five for the words?

(Many don't know haiku, so just wanted to enlighten them)

tenchu · Oct 10, 2003

Syllables my friend
Five up first, then need seven
Finish with five, yes?

wdwhoneymooner · Oct 10, 2003

Disney, oh Disney
How I miss your Magic so
May I return soon.

tenchu · Oct 10, 2003

Got it now, I see
Too hard for me, I can't count!
I'm a bit lazy

tigsmom · Oct 10, 2003

You guys are good. Unfortunately I am not so talented. Keep it going. :wave:

SpongeScott · Oct 10, 2003

I do not get it.
How do you make a haiku?
Guess I will bow out.

wdwhoneymooner · Oct 10, 2003

Laziness, oh my!
But all right for the weekdays
Weekends, much to do!

tenchu · Oct 10, 2003

Originally posted by tigsmom
You guys are good. Unfortunately I am not so talented. Keep it going. :wave:

Doesn't look like one
A haiku? I think not so
Try harder Tigsmom!

:lol:

wdwhoneymooner · Oct 10, 2003

Originally posted by tenchu
Doesn't look like one
A haiku? I think not so
Try harder Tigsmom!

:lol:

Cry help for Tigsmom
She's a busy parent, but
she'll come around soon

garyhoov · Oct 10, 2003

Originally posted by tigsmom
You guys are good. Un-
fortunately I am
not so talented

tigsmom · Oct 10, 2003

:sohappy: :lol:

tigsmom · Oct 10, 2003

The dry leaves will fall
It is time to rake, again
Not my job today.

SpongeScott · Oct 10, 2003

Yes! New attractions
Must plan another trip down
Disney World owns me

tenchu · Oct 10, 2003

Not this year, nor next
When will I get to Disney?
Not damn soon enough!

:lol:

wdwhoneymooner · Oct 10, 2003

New baby coming
More diapers to change, oh my!
and less sleep for me.......:snore:

Steamboat_Kevin · Oct 10, 2003

Ooohh... haikus, I made up a whole bunch of these (which I can't remember right here)

I am very old
I have no teeth and no hair
I walk with a cane

Wilt Dasney · Oct 10, 2003

Midterm tests this week
Semester is halfway gone
Man, I'm sick of school