Episode 1 Immunity Challenge
Critiques
Fantastic proposals this week everyone!
LASSETOKI
@tcool123, @spacemt354, @DisneyPrincess1993, @Flippin'Flounder, @MonorailRed, @Ranky64 and @Sam4D23
Amazing project! Let's go through your project and pick it apart! I liked the intro poem, it was a very nice set up to the website. By the way, I loved the website! It was a big plus of this project and was very clean and presentable. So, well done in that respect! However, something that I would have liked to see was a "back" button on the bottom of each page. I liked the map as well, it was a great visual. I couldn't seem to find it. I also loved the Nightmare Before Christmas Dark Ride, a perfect addition. DHS REALLY needs dark rides, so I'm glad you put one in. I liked the NBC restaurant, but I was struggling to figure out why you would include the other seasons other than Halloween and Christmas. I've never seen the movie, so I don't really know if those are significant at all. In general, I thought that your NBC additions were spot on, and were all great additions to the park. My one flaw with the placement of it was the transitions. I'm not sure if the land would transition well from Star Tours and other attractions north of this land. The transition between San Fransokyo and the rest of the park was FANTASTIC, however. I loved the idea of a river. Also, the concept of this land would provide for some great nighttime atmosphere. In addition, while the coaster fits fairly well and would be a hit with guests
a roller coaster is NOT what DHS needs IMO. There's already WAY to many thrill rides in the park. TOT, RnRC, Star Tours and the new Star Wars ride will all be present in the park. With Toy Story Land being added, it only gives the park some new flat rides. Dark rides are what I was looking for with this challenge. You gave me one, but I was hoping there wouldn't be any coasters. That's why I loved BH6: Call to Action, it was a really well done ride. So, that's why the roller coaster won't count to much against you, as your balanced it out with a dark ride. I really enjoyed Knowwhere as well. The attraction was well done, but I feel like you could have fleshed out the area more and included some more experiences. Overall, fantastic concept this week!
BLAIROZAH
@IDInstitute, @IAmNotAHufflepuff, @Matt7187, @TheOriginalTiki, @JokersWild and @Perry2x2
Amazing concept Blairozah! First, I would have liked to see a better intro on your actual post. A brief paragraph wasn't enough for me. As for the website, I loved it. The overall design was very clean and I loved the video on the homepage. In addition, the concept of classic animation is a phenomenal idea. However, I'm not sure that the Ducktales is popular enough in today's culture to warrant it's own land. While Toontown has been done to death around here and I appreciate you trying to be unique with this, I wish you would have gone with a more generic toontown and tried to take a different spin on that. IMO, a toontown based on 1 IP doesn't work as well for me. In addition, I'm not sure Fantasia
Springs really suggests a city all that well, but that may just be me. Also, the map was fine, but there were a few places where the text was hard to read. However, what you did with Duckberg was fantastic. I LOVED the dark ride, I guarantee it would be a hit with guests. I would have liked to see you all go into a bit more detail on Duckberg as well. Next, I really loved the Silly Symphony Maze. 1) It provides much needed greenery to DHS and 2) it represents the Silly Symphonie extremely well. Fantasy Gardens was done extremely well, in my opinion. I also really enjoyed the emphasis on high capacity, non E-Ticket attractions which is something DHS really needs at the moment (and in 2021 as well). Overall, great concept!
