The first thing I want to say is that I think it's cool how each project so far this season the teams have approached the prompt in really different and interesting ways. We had a more naturalistic and high concept Frontierland pitted against the more classic Cowboys and Aliens sci-fi theme. We saw the clash of a more Weird Al centered project vs. one where Al is a cameo. We saw one team take on a dramatically different half-indoor format for the Pandora project. Nowhere is this more clear than in this round. I'm actually kind of blown away by just how much of a yin-yang these two shows are to each other. We've got a real Avenue Q vs. Wicked situation on our hands.
I was...less than enthused when I found out ya'll were picking Swift
I'm just not big on pop music in general. I had some major hipster energy in college that I'm still trying to break out of, but because of that phase Taylor's catalog has kind of passed me by. What I really like about this pick though is just how much financial sense it makes. Look at the TicketMaster drama. While it wasn't great from an optics standpoint, it absolutely proved that if you put Taylor in a tiny intimate black box setting I'm betting Disney could charge literal thousands of dollars per ticket and sell out every night. From a synergy point of view I thought this was a grand slam.
Not gonna lie...I was hooked by the plot
I've actually very much been in August's exact position before so I really felt the human drama of the characters and loved how nobody was in the wrong at all. It was a very morally rich tale of decent if flawed people coming to terms with the people they are and the people they'll become. The story gave me a big, BIG Waitress vibe. As someone who's currently in a transitional phase in life I actually found the message of self-love to be really helpful on a personal level.
@Pi on my Cake absolutely crushed it with the write up. I genuinely loved the passion coming from everyone on the team.
I do have a few nitpicks, mostly in the team-work department. While I think the Monkey/Tegan/Shannon/Pi quadrant was really killer this round (don't tempt me to coin the "Theater Geeks" alliance
) I did feel throughout the round that Brer Panther and AceAstro were being left out in the cold a bit. I feel like more could have been done to communicate what roles they could play. Once Taylor was decided on the two of them just kind of got lost in the shuffle. Now...part of this is on them. I feel like Ace and Pi were in very similar positions with not being Swift fans going in and Pi certainly took the bull by the horns. It's just something I want everyone to be aware of moving forward especially as we approach the merge. It's never a fun feeling when you're essentially on the outside looking in on your own team. There were also some last minute presentation issues that are totally understandable but I have to give you a ding for. Most notably is that I really, really wish you would have included a playlist. I realize you were under a time crunch, but these small details can make or break a project if they're not included. Overall it was a really, really strong story but I think Nu-Chapek out-paced you in presentation.
The What If musical I feel is such a weird almost polar opposite to my thoughts on Eisner's project. On a presentation level it's really well done. I very much appreciate the effort of having original compositions and concept art. I think Chapek had the upperhand in getting the minute-by-minute details of Broadway down thanks to the Tegan/Shannon/Monkey trio, but this still flowed really well. One BIG thing that I think was a major missed opportunity was addressing the Spider-Man of it all. How do you NOT include a Reeve Carney Spider-Man cameo? Generally speaking I think Turn Off the Dark was a big elephant in the room I feel the project just didn't spend enough time addressing, as is the general taboo of superhero stuff on Broadway.
Much like the Swift project, I think one of the big strengths here was the story. All of the What If scenarios were presented really well, and I loved the framing device of the Watcher. Also I think Taye Diggs as The Watcher might be my single favorite piece of casting between the two projects. I particularly loved the reninvention of Demon in a Bottle and how that showed just how prominent someone's personal burdens can be even in the face of a huge victory. That was a really poignant theme that really hit home for me. I also really loved the Daredevil story. The idea of his father's death being the catalyst to him being a great man is rich with dramatic irony. I'm not going to ding you at all for the shortened second act given the circumstances. Overall I thought the individual stories flowed into each other really well and the Watcher's intro and outro narrations worked as beautiful transitioning points between the scenes.
There's a couple pretty notable issues I need to bring up. First and foremost while i very much appreciate the effort of the compositions I think this story being a musical to begin with felt misplaced. It's really hard to shake the Spider-Man Rocks/Turn Off the Dark vibes when costumed characters just start belting out power ballads in the middle of dramatic moments. I think one of the issues here is that there's just too many songs. You have one listed for pretty much every dramatic beat and just reading through it's hard to visualize the actual flow from scene to scene. This is certainly not the first musical to have the issue of songs messing with the pace of the story, but the superhero IP really didn't help. I think in these cases the better way to go about it would be to either have less songs (like maybe just one or two showstoppers per scenario) or go the Hamilton route and go all in with it being entirely sung through. I absolutely get that this is a hard middle ground to meet, but I think song flow is one of the most important components of a musical hitting me the right way.
Overall I think it's fascinating how polar opposite these two projects are and I'm really interested in hearing other feedback as I feel like I was a bit more subjective with my personal tastes this round compared to most given the subject matter. While What If I feel was certainly a stronger pick for the casual Disney/theme park fan, I think Taylor Swift has a much stronger pull with the Broadway crowd. I stress this every time but it's especially true now. Both projects were fantastic in wildly different ways. What If was the over the top and bombastic, super theatrical "Wicked" of the two whereas Taylor Swift is the tiny black box theater Avenue Q style show that could.