Outbound's Reviews
EDIT: I initially wrote this review with the transcript in mind, then when I checked I realized you had updated the project into slides. Although we will have to judge from the transcript, I appreciate the extra effort and have changed some small parts of my review.
83 pages. That’s nearing the infamous 84 pages! But when I started looking into your project, I realized that the mountain - the focus of this prompt - was only 21 pages. That means
75% of your project were extra details to “Mythica” which
weren’t part of the prompt.
This gave me cause for concern. But once I began reading, I realized the 25% dedicated to Mythica Mountain have incredible detail. There is
not much else you could add, so instead of these extra features being a detractor from your project,
I see them as a bonus. I will not talk about them much because they are not the focus, but know that I did appreciate their inclusion.
One question I have about the map is how it connects to the Rivers of America. I see that connects up to the “harbor”. Is this just for show? I think it would have been a neat opportunity to connect up Frontierland with Mythica if anything to avoid the “Toontown Bottleneck” Disneyland fans will know.
The area description and backstory are fantastic. They let us easily visualize your project. The “Greek Myths” theme is an oldie but goodie idea. It fits the Magic Kingdom’s “fantasy” segment perfectly. The pastoral symphony (yayy Fantasia!), Hercules show, and surrounding shops and dining are all great. It’s the small things, like featuring a map and menu of a restaurant no one asked for. You all deserve a pat on the back!
My favorite part of the entire project was one of the smallest features - the interaction with the railroad. You saw the railroad was in the way and used that to your advantage. I love the interaction between attractions!
The water coaster is a fun idea! It’s a combination of Big Thunder, Splash Mountain, and Pirates of the Carribean. I appreciate the use of Jason and the Argo, a well known yet not overused Greek Myth (Odyssey ahem..). Each scene was a blast. It is clear you put a lot of thought and research into each small detail. I agree with all the story changes made.
After reading through everything (it took a while lol), I can safely say there is nothing I can “dislike” about this project! It is definitely Team Red’s best work to date!
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Both teams have submitted great projects for different reasons.
Team Red was all about detail.
Team Green was all about creativity. If I had to say anything to either team, it would be to read your opponent’s presentation and learn from what they have done!