I wrote this song and wanted some feedback for it. Thanks you guys.
Its forever coming together,
You and me standing here together,
To face the fears of the world now,
Without any fear since I know you are here,
I know it will all be alright,
As we take this into the night.
** ** **
Looking into your eyes makes me spin,
As I feel the fog roll in,
The sweet smell of the dampness,
That covers the road,
And brings the placid feel,
That I get when you smile,
My angel in my heart.
** ** **
Blue lights in the sky cover the dark,
Lighting the way for all to see,
And I know my eternity,
Here with you as the world revolves,
With its hectic life and troubles,
It won't take this away,
The feeling of love and security.
** ** **
This moment we share together stops the time,
Between the past and future we collide,
Into you I can be found,
Your heart and the sound,
Of that night it was me and you,
As we laughed and danced,
You took my bearth away,
And replaced it with those special words of love,
Teaching me how to see,
The compassionate side of the key,
And staring into those eyes of blue.
Its forever coming together,
You and me standing here together,
To face the fears of the world now,
Without any fear since I know you are here,
I know it will all be alright,
As we take this into the night.
** ** **
Looking into your eyes makes me spin,
As I feel the fog roll in,
The sweet smell of the dampness,
That covers the road,
And brings the placid feel,
That I get when you smile,
My angel in my heart.
** ** **
Blue lights in the sky cover the dark,
Lighting the way for all to see,
And I know my eternity,
Here with you as the world revolves,
With its hectic life and troubles,
It won't take this away,
The feeling of love and security.
** ** **
This moment we share together stops the time,
Between the past and future we collide,
Into you I can be found,
Your heart and the sound,
Of that night it was me and you,
As we laughed and danced,
You took my bearth away,
And replaced it with those special words of love,
Teaching me how to see,
The compassionate side of the key,
And staring into those eyes of blue.
