Guys, since I'm judging this first round, I'm going to throw my two cents in on the grammatical points. So, I grew up with a mother who taught grammar and, while I know mine is far from perfect, I do appreciate proper grammar. As such, let's try not to pull any funny business with the rules, mkay? No egregious run-ons. No unnecessary semi-colons. You have the rules, now adhere to them. Part of being a great imagineer is working within the constraints as they are presented to you. There is beauty in brevity. That is all.
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