Summer's End with Magic Friends

[Connor002]

*yanks your hat over your eyes*

YEEEEEoOOOOOOOOWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!

I wasn't wearing a hat.

 

[joanna71985]

Well lovely people, I am off. Going shopping with my sister for school stuff and "sisterly bonding" (aka going to Starbucks). Be back later.

 

[Uponastar]

Honesty or Ego-conscious feedback, would you prefer?

No ego. . .
Definitely honesty.
Speak!

 

[Connor002]

No ego. . .
Definitely honesty.
Speak!

Tink, the stars, and the shoe stand out as a bit too cartooney.
Correct me if I falter in memory, but you're going for classy-understated Disney influence?

 

[Uponastar]

Tink, the stars, and the shoe stand out as a bit too cartooney.
Correct me if I falter in memory, but you're going for classy-understated Disney influence?

Okay. . .
What would you do instead?

 

[Connor002]

Okay. . .
What would you do instead?

I would consider cutting Tink, or try different stars (avoid thick outlines; that's what gives it the cartoon feel).

The shoe might benefit from some of the grainy, etched, or sketched effect you have on the castle.

 

[Uponastar]

I would consider cutting Tink, or try different stars (avoid thick outlines; that's what gives it the cartoon feel).

The shoe might benefit from some of the grainy, etched, or sketched effect you have on the castle.

I'll try another version and see what I think. I thought that, because Tink was grayscale, she worked. A colored Tink would have been wrong. I don't want to lose the Cinderella thing altogether, because then the wording wouldn't work and I want to keep that. Let's see what I can do. . .
Thanks for the input. This is what I want!

 

[Connor002]

I'll try another version and see what I think. I thought that, because Tink was grayscale, she worked. A colored Tink would have been wrong. I don't want to lose the Cinderella thing altogether, because then the wording wouldn't work and I want to keep that. Let's see what I can do. . .
Thanks for the input. This is what I want!

I think Tink works, but her placement near the stars is bringing attention to her cartooninity lookaroun).

 

[Connor002]

I have cake!

 

[Uponastar]

I think Tink works, but her placement near the stars is bringing attention to her cartooninity lookaroun).

:lookaroun

'kay.

 

[Uponastar]

I have cake!

I don't.

 

[mpoppins76]

*licks Connor's cake* :lookaroun

 

[nibblesandbits]

Hey!

 

[Connor002]

:lookaroun

'kay.

:king:

I don't.

You can lick the plate!

 

[Disnut]

Hello I am back now.

 

[Connor002]

*licks Connor's cake* :lookaroun

*lights Steph's boyfriend on fire*

 

[Uponastar]

:king:

You can lick the plate!

No thank you.

Hey!

Hello I am back now.

Hi girlies!

*lights Steph's boyfriend on fire*

Will you stop that!

 

[nibblesandbits]

*lights Steph's boyfriend on fire*

well, I see what I came in on.

*puts out Steph's boyfriend*

 

[PotteryGal]

I just got back from dropping off supplies at Joel's special needs' classroom........

MY BABY'S GOING TO KINDERGARTEN!!!!

 

[Connor002]

No thank you.

I think Steph already took care of that anyway...:lookaroun

Will you stop that!

What?! :veryconfu