poem by me...please lemme know what ya think!

[Tinkerbell2887]

Four Years Later


Today's our anniversary
Or at least it would've been
But you left me here,
In this dried up town
To see the world and live your life

And now it's four years later
And I'm still here, alone.

And I can still see your smile
Lighting up my dreams
Giving me hope to carry on

I can still feel your hands on my sholder
Rubbing my back,
Every time my world begins to fall apart

I can still smell your shirt
The one you gave me the day you left
To make sure I never forgot.

I haven't.

I can still hear your voice
Whispering sweet nothings in my ear
Every time I cry, which is everyday without you.

And I can still feel my heartbreak
When I go to call you and then remember
You won't pick up

Cause you're gone...



i wrote this in bio today...please tell me what ya think! i need help to rework it

 

[tigsmom]

HI! Welcome. :wave:

Nice poem, but you should be doing Bio in Bio. :zipit:

Check your PM

(from a fellow Monroevian):lol:

 

[Lil'mermaid]

COOLNESS!

(so thats what you do in bio when Im working my butt off )

 

[Tinkerbell2887]

hehehe...maybe...i'm usually getting yelled at by ms.fibbs to put it away...hehehe