One Sentence Competition - Season 3 Episode 2

Magic Feather

Well-Known Member
Disney Historia

Upon approaching a tall, marble building (which acts as this park's Main Street), guests will be met at small ranger stations, where they can check into this park, before entering the main museum façade. From this point, guests can wander through different realms of a romanticized past, such as Ancient Egypt, Medieval Europe, or even the Age of the Dinosaurs!
 

FigmentPigments

Well-Known Member
The Dark Kingdom
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With Disney's Hollywood Studios evolving into a park dedicated to Star Wars and Pixar, this leaves the untapped potential of the Disney villains without a place to call home, since the Magic Kingdom houses the heroes and princesses. This 5th gate park will not only bring a little edge to Disney by enticing residential teens and young adults (away from Universal)with landscapes of thorns and dark rock work, but it will also cater to young kids with some of the goofier villain sidekicks providing a little levity and opportunities to meet villains that rarely get the spotlight. This new park will be party central not only when Halloween roles around, but also nightly as Fantasmic! will be revamped and shown nightly in this park.

Bonus: Maleficent's Castle (in forced perspective) will greet guests as they enter the park, luring unsuspecting park goers to dark magic that awaits there.
 

Pi on my Cake

Well-Known Member
In the Parks
Yes
Disney's Grand Adventures Park

A park dedicated to exciting adventures, explorations, mysteries, and dreams. Lands themed to the South American Jungles of Paradise Falls, the beautiful islands around Motunui (from Moana), the exciting metropolis of heroes and Villains known as Bay City (Big Hero 6, Marvel, Incredibles), the mysterious Victorian London back alleys of Baker Street, and the small, explorable island of Destiny Islands (Kingdom Hearts, done in the style of Tom Sawyer Island). Each land will have its own interactive game in the vein of the Pirates Adventure in Adventureland and an overarching game that fills the whole park in the vein of Sorcerer's of the Magic Kingdom to encourage and reward an adventurous spirit and exploration of the park.

Bonus

The entrance is a large cavern that houses Charles Muntz's zepplin so the first real view of the park itself is the large scale replica of the breathtaking Paradise Falls as you exit the cave letting you know that Adventure is Out There!!
 

Sephirenn

Well-Known Member
Original Poster
The Critiques


WDW Management has had some time to look over the proposals and has decided to provide some initial feedback before the selections are made:


@kmbmw777 - Disney's Portals of Adventure

The set-up and explanation of this one is just perfect. Setting up the context of the previous parks and then explaining how the new park fits in works really well to set the stage. And the idea of a museum would also make things possibly educational in certain spots. We also really like how with the concept of the hallways, you get a nice themed entrance to each land before you actually arrive in said land. As for the lands themselves, they are all great ideas and we think would work very well.

We only have two critiques on this one. First, would the "hub" get too busy if everyone had to go back through it in order to get to another land? And second, if we look at the overall theme of "museum" by itself, we don't think it hits a perfect 10 out of 10 on the creativity scale.


@D Hindley - Disney's Athletic Games

Let us start out by saying that this idea is truly creative. Actually theming an entire park around not just rides, but "fun physical activities" would be something brand new and quite interesting. The same goes for including a live sporting venue inside the park itself. And as you explain, this would fit seamlessly with the incorporation of many Disney characters.

Our first critique on this one would be whether you alienate anyone by focusing an entire park on "sports" or by including a good number of attractions based on physical activity. Also, how would the logistics of having a live sport venue within the park itself even work if they ever managed to book a popular event? And does that clash a little too closely with Wide World of Sports? We feel like although this is a great great idea, it may not get enough mainstream appeal.


@spacemt354 - Disney's Natural Wonders Park

This one has miles of potential. One of our favorite childhood memories was staying for a few nights in Fort Wilderness, and we feel like this park could create similar memories for millions of people. The "lands" would fit perfectly in to be themed differently, and if needed could easily incorporate Disney IP. Also the thought of walking from a canyon theme, into a rain forest theme, into an ocean theme, sounds like it would be a visual treat.

Our main critique on this one may be obvious: although it has a different focus, we think this may ride a little too close to the idea behind Animal Kingdom. Yes, animals and nature are two different things, but we think when you look at Walt Disney World as a whole, you want five very distinct experiences, and this one may just bee too similar to some of the ideas behind DAK.


@gonzoWDW - Disney's Mythos

Like an earlier submission, we really like how you described the setup and context of the park. The space you spent on describing the overall theme of the park, as opposed to focusing on the lands, really helped sell your vision of what this park will be. There is a lot of opportunity here, from urban myths, to written epics, to modern mysteries.

Our only critique is something you already mentioned: extra care will have to be spent on making sure this doesn't turn into a "World Showcase 2.0" that happens to be about myths instead of culture. Maybe the focus can be on the myths themselves and only have subtle influences on the countries of origin.


@Magic Feather - Disney Historia

This museum idea is quite good. The idea of checking-in at ranger stations is very unique which we like. And the ideas you have for some of the lands are great too. We think the only hindrance here is that someone else beat you to the punch on the museum theme :(


@FigmentPigments - The Dark Kingdom

Reading through this response fills our minds with untold ideas. The idea of a villains park has been thrown around before (and is even currently being discussed as a part of the Club 32 threads), but your explanation really sets the stage and the theme for what this park could be. We also like the "Disney Marketing" idea of trying to build something that will help lure customers away from Universal! Overall this is just a wonderful idea!

Our main critique is whether this would fit in well with Disney brand. We may personally LOVE it, but between your descriptions and the picture you used, you are setting a pretty dark tone. Even if you cater to younger children with some quirky areas, the other scarier stuff would still exist and may drive the young ones away...


@Pionmycake - Disney's Grand Adventures Park

The lands you describe for this one are truly inspiring, and we can see ourselves loving walking through them. We really like the interactive games you've included also. We feel that these bring a whole new aspect to a park, and tend to just be great experiences.

Our only, but kinda big, critique on this one is that there was no explanation of what the park is truly about and how it all ties together beyond the name of the park. We think the descriptions of what you have are great and very interesting, but we just wish we knew more about the general theme of the park and how it ties together instead of the details about the lands.
 

Sephirenn

Well-Known Member
Original Poster

The Selections

WDW Management is proud to announce its selection for the designer of the our 5th gate at Walt Disney World.

The Bonus Winner

@gonzoWDW - Disney's Mythos

You took this bonus to a new level that really elevated your pitch. We can see ourselves ascending that staircase, wondering what lies ahead and trying to make sense of all of the cryptic languages.

The Bronze Medal

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@spacemt354 - Disney's Natural Wonders Park

A great submission that has true potential. If only we could also be building a 6th gate!


The Sliver Medal

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@FigmentPigments - The Dark Kingdom

An amazing submission that would have won gold if it only fit the younger demographic better.


The Gold Medal

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@kmbmw777 - Disney's Portals of Adventure

We couldn't be happier with this submission. It hits all of the right notes for a new 5th gate, has plenty of creative opportunity for the future, and can be as diverse or narrow as we need it to be.



We hope everyone stays tuned, as in a few hours or less the next challenge will appear, and we will all discover what this theme of ours really means...
 

Sephirenn

Well-Known Member
Original Poster

The Standings



What a great start by everyone! You all had some truly great ideas and it was quite the honor to get to wade through them and try to decide which ones deserved to be selected. With that said, I have decided to tweak how points will be distributed this episode so that everyone can feel the accomplishment. Here is how you get points:

1) GET A MEDAL: Gold gives you 3 points, Silver gives you 2 points, and Bronze gives you 1 point!
2) WIN THE BONUS: The chosen bonus winner gets 1 point!
3) PARTICIPATE: As long as you submit a legitimate entry, you get 1 point (in addition to the above points)!

So for the mathematicians out there, this means that if you have a really stellar round by getting a gold and winning the bonus, you can get 5 points!


Without further ado, here are our standings
:


@kmbmw777 - 5
@gonzoWDW - 3
@spacemt354 - 3
@FigmentPigments - 3
@Magic Feather - 2
@Pionmycake - 1
@Disney Dad 3000 - 1
@D Hindley - 1
@StevenU
@goofyyukyukyuk17

I hope everyone is ready for the next challenge! You didn't think I put a "5" in the logo just as a hint for the first challenge, did you?
 
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Sephirenn

Well-Known Member
Original Poster
Prompt 2

Create and Evolve

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-Scenario-

As our theme so eloquently alludes: you have CREATED, and it is now time to EVOLVE. Our big overarching twist for the rest of the episode!

As we all know, WDW Management has looked over the proposals for Walt Disney World's 5th gate and has chosen to select @kmbmw777's Disney's Portals of Adventure as the next WDW park. This is it, the big idea that is going to keep Walt Disney World afloat for years to come. But there is a downside, management was not a big fan of the specific "lands" that were suggested, or of the original idea for the park entrance. Well, what some may see as a negative, others see as an opportunity. It is time to lay the groundwork my friends.

-Disney's Portals of Adventure-

This new section describes the "official" version of the park which should be used to complete the challenge.

Disney Parks in the past have had double uses: the Magic Kingdom was an amusement park doubling as a theme park; EPCOT is a World's Fair doubling as a theme park; Hollywood Studios is a studio lot doubling as a theme park; Animal Kingdom is a zoo doubling as a theme park. Disney's fifth gate also fits this criteria: Disney's Portals of Adventure is a museum doubling as a theme park.

When a guests walk through the park, they see works that would be traditionally represented in a museum such as art or scientific description, before arriving in one of many completely immersive worlds.

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-Challenge-

Armchair Imagineers, your challenge is to name and describe a single new land/area within Disney's Portals of Adventure! But there is a catch. You may not base your land's theme on the following: planetariums, dinosaurs, mythical gods, US Presidents, or children's museums (you are allowed to use themes similar to these if you want, but remember that ANYTHING else is also up for grabs; there are a lot of types of museums and exhibits out there).

-Bonus-

As mentioned, WDW Management wasn't a huge fan of the originally described entrance. Describe a new entrance for Disney's Portals of Adventure!

-Rules-

You may use between 1 and 3 sentences and up to 1 picture (plus one extra sentence for the bonus if you choose to participate). The deadline is Tuesday (4/18) at midnight.

You can only create one "land" as a part of your entry. Your "land" must be created for and fit thematically within Disney's Portals of Adventure. You must abide by the restrictions mentioned in the challenge above.

-Tips-

Like our previous challenge, it is probably a good idea to focus on the theme and background details of your land instead of specific attractions. This will let our imagination fill in the blanks and also help with trying to fit an entire description into only 3 sentences.

K.I.S.S - Keep it simple, silly. Try not to over complicate or over think things too much. It's a simple, casual competition. Focus on the big picture. Don't miss the forest for the trees. All that good stuff.

-Judging Criteria-

Is it creative?
Is it (generally) realistic?
Does it fit thematically/visually?

Good Luck everyone! Have fun! Go create!?
 

spacemt354

Chili's
The Renaissance

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Inspired by the architecture and design of the Louvre Museum in Paris, France, the Renaissance is a land created to encapsulate the period of artistic prowess, paramount cultural traditions, and new discoveries found during the vast time period across Western Europe.

The land will hold detailed and chiseled sculptures from famous artists such as Michaelangelo and Leonardo Da Vinci, among other famous historical figures from the age. The E-ticket attraction of the land will be Da Vinci's Secrets, a pulse pounding, educational journey through the creations of one of the most visionary minds of all time.

Bonus:
The new entrance will be a small Middle Ages Parisian town street, similar to Main Street in its design and purpose of leading guests into a central hub where they will disperse to the different time periods and genres throughout the park.
 

D Hulk

Well-Known Member
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MYSTIC GALLERY

Disney's Portals of Adventure is proud to host the fine art collections of S.E.A.'s famed curator Lord Henry Mystic, displayed here in a lushly manicured sculpture garden and in a converted spacious Beaux-Artes railway station (akin to Paris's Musee d'Orsay).

Displayed at the entrance is Mystic's enchanted music box, which brings all the gallery's artworks to vivid life and able to interact with guests who wield magical (RFID chip) paintbrushes a-la Epic Mickey.

Golden frames are portals to the wondrous worlds of famous paintings from throughout history, rendered in lifesize brushwork styles including romanticism or pointillism or cubism.

(BONUS)
The entry to Portals of Adventure replicates the shimmering lagoon and neoclassical White City of Chicago's 1893 World's Fair (home to the world's first Ferris wheel), with gardened pathways leading to any number of expositions (lands).​
 

Suchomimus

Well-Known Member
The Standings


What a great start by everyone! You all had some truly great ideas and it was quite the honor to get to wade through them and try to decide which ones deserved to be selected. With that said, I have decided to tweak how points will be distributed this episode so that everyone can feel the accomplishment. Here is how you get points:

1) GET A MEDAL: Gold gives you 3 points, Silver gives you 2 points, and Bronze gives you 1 point!
2) WIN THE BONUS: The chosen bonus winner gets 1 point!
3) PARTICIPATE: As long as you submit a legitimate entry, you get 1 point (in addition to the above points)!

So for the mathematicians out there, this means that if you have a really stellar round by getting a gold and winning the bonus, you can get 5 points!


Without further ado, here are our standings
:


@kmbmw777 - 5
@gonzoWDW - 3
@spacemt354 - 3
@FigmentPigments - 3
@Magic Feather - 2
@Pionmycake - 1
@Disney Dad 3000 - 1
@D Hindley - 1
@StevenU
@goofyyukyukyuk17

@S.P.E.W

I hope everyone is ready for the next challenge! You didn't think I put a "5" in the logo just as a hint for the first challenge, did you?
I think you think that I'm part of the competition. I'm not, I'm just here to watch.
 

gonzoWDW

Well-Known Member
Daedaland - An Aeronautical Adventure
Mankind has always had an incredible fascination with flight, as humans from all cultures have longed to feel the freedom only found when your feet leave the ground.

Daedaland will focus on the history and evolution of flight, with the land serving host to three main attractions - "Escape from the Minotaur" (labyrinthine EMV ride from the myth of Daedalus and Icarus), "The Wright Time" (main attraction, guests partake in the first powered flight), and "Around the World in 80 days" (Peter Pan style ride, where Disney re-embraces Jules Verne) - in addition to having other interactive, flight related exhibits, such as an attempt to assemble some of Da Vinci's "flying machine" designs.

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To maximize immersion, sight lines will show nothing but open sky and aircraft, while "Escape from the Minotaur" will sit next to the Land of the Gods, to serve as a transition between the lands (depending on how the hub and lands connect).

Bonus: To the left of the entrance, guests will see a traditional museum entrance, which they assume to be the entry way, before they are redirected to the museum's seemingly active "loading dock", where guests enter and new exhibits are brought into Disney's Portals of Adventure, demonstrating how the guests are an integral part of the exhibit.
 
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kmbmw777

Well-Known Member
University Quad
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This new land serves two purposes - the new entrance of the park and a whole new land (much like Main Street in the Magic Kingdom).

The walking lane will be turf (rather than real grass) so it never gets muddy and guests can walk on it all days of the year, and around it will be the Big Hero 6 Tech Showcase Show (in the engineering building), the NEW Philharmagic (in the school of music), and the Race Through Boston Simulator E-ticket (at the University Bus Depot).

At the end of the quad, will be the enterance to previously described museum where guests can enter one of the other 5 lands, which connect amongst each other seamlessly to help traffic flow
 
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Pi on my Cake

Well-Known Member
In the Parks
Yes
The Surreal Reality

This land is dedicated to the surreal and abstract side of artistic expression. Interesting architecture, strange props throughout, optical illusions of all kinds, and a large number of unique and unusual sights make just walking through this land a delight and an attraction in and of itself. Imagineers and artists were said to let their creativity run absolutely wild when designing every aspect of this land making even bathrooms and food stands as interesting as the rides.

Bonus: the new entrance to the park will, architecturally, be just a more modern update of a pretty basic theme park entrance, but the entire area (floor, ticket booths, turn styles, artificial trees, security, everything) is painted in a highly stylised way inspire by Van Gogh's visual flair.
 

Magic Feather

Well-Known Member
Digital Realm
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In this new land, guests will be thrust inside of the world of computers, as they are surrounded in this all-indoor land by spinning pixels, and beaming lights. A simulator rollercoaster hybrid will form the all new TRON: Lightcycle Race, where guests will start in a room racing against another digital team, before being launched out, alongside another train in a physical race to the finish. A complimentary attraction, Virus Team One, will send guests through a shooter attraction to defeat the King Virus.

BONUS:
The entrance for Portals of Adventure will now be in Mythica, a steamounk inspired land full of gears and buzzing machinery that "makes the portals run".
 

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